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IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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What ways of looking after young children are the most beneficial. Provide reasons

It is commonly said that today’s kids are the future of our world, therefore it is important to guide their growth in a suitable way. The path of upbringing any children is the important aspect of shaping his or her future. Thus, this essay will help in configuring the beneficial ways of looking after your young ones.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with a high wage, even if it doesn't appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that appointment happiness is much more important than wage.

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:Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that humans cannot do anything to address the negative effects on plant and animal species. However, I agree with the view that people can still tackle this situation by effective measures.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Some adopt a view that students in several nations are said to be likely to be successful provided that they keep making their efforts. I will discuss some possible pros and cons of this issue from my perspective.

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The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So governments and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

the issues about the environment become a responsibility of authorities and climate-concern organizations these days. I completely disagree with this statement, it should not only governments and such organizations take into account but also societies could take care with this problems. However, this condition happens due to people's activities that destroy nature and break the government's rule.

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International travel sometimes makes people prejudiced rather than broad minded. What may be the reasons for this? What can people do to improve their understanding of the countries they visit?

Travelling overseas has been regarded as an important way of learning about, different people, lifestyles and places. Unfortunately with travelling somehow individuals have become biased and cold rather than receptive and indulgent.

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Some people say that too much time and resources are spent on the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that the amount of time and resources are utilized for the preservation of a number of species of wild creatures and birds. I personally disagree with this notion and think that the time and resources which we have spent to protect them are not enough. In the following paragraph, the reasons why they are not ample will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.

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People should look after their health because this is a duty to the society not just a personal benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been pointed out that every single person ought to take care of their well-being conditions since it is not only beneficial to individuals rather to our communities. Personally, I thoroughly agree with this idea as more residents with healthy well-being has a huge number of benefits to society in terms of economy and basic infrastructure development.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In this day and age, most folks believe that everybody should allow accessing any intelligence as much as they can. Although, some citizens argue that some data have to pay for access because it is too significant. In this essay, I will examine both statements and also give my opinion about this issue.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there are more adolescents than adults in certain countries. Personally, I believe this situation offers more benefits because young people are more productive and healthy as opposed to the older generation.

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Some people think that the crime among teenagers is increasing because of violent video games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are some views about the contribution of violent online matches to the growth of juvenile delinquency. I partly agree with this opinion since apart from brutal games, other factors could as well lead to the high rate of transgression committed by youngsters.

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These days, many university courses are offered through the internet. Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom teaching or lectures, while others claim that there are significant disadvantages. Do the benefits of online teaching outweigh the disadvantages?

There have been ongoing debates regarding whether or not universities should offer their courses via the internet. While doing so can be both negative and positive, I believed that there are more advantages than drawbacks.

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Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Stepping into the 21st century, thanks to state-of-the-art technologies and the economy, there are more and more complications that politicians and citizens have to resolve. Whereas many folks argue that researchers should prioritize human health rather than other troubles, many roots for the idea that there are more persistent problems needed to be solved than healthy ones. In my point of view, I believe that every domain, which I will delve into herein as well as explain my opinion, should be resolved equally.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children that are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some argue that competition should be motivated in young people while others prefer to encourage cooperation. this essay will discuss both ideas and explain why the latter rather than the former is the best of them.

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Completing university is thought to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.discuss both views and give your opinion.

Everyone desires to have a good job in order to secure his future. However,some people argue that obtaining a university degree is important to get a better job whereas others think years of experience and building soft skills are more valuable. Although,experience is needed for certain types of posts, in my opinion, while for some professional degree is needed.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Certain people opine that it is necessary to share all the data obtained in any research activity while others believe such information is too precious to be given out. In my opinion, I believe sharing information can help those with little means of researching to be self-sustaining even though this might mean more competition to the originators of the ideas.

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People today are more concerned with owning material possessions than with developing friendships and family relationships. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

A part of individuals trusts that a nation becomes more advanced and elaborate rapidly when its inhabitants include a mixture of different nations and ethnicity. In my opinion, it is very beneficial for the country by improving diversity in the workplace and interpersonal skills due to competing with each other.

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People should look after their health for personal benefits, rather than a duty for a society. What extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a heated debate whether the crowd should care about their well-being for their own benefits or for social responsibilities. I believe that both purposes are important and the population should take an interest in both.

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The best way to resolve the international environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There is a discussion about how to combat environmental issues, some people hold the view that the increment of fuel price would be the best solution. From my perspective, this way will be beneficial to the environment, while there still are other solutions that will contribute to environmental protection.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance, for sports or music and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to becoame a good sports person or musician. Dis cuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is mostly believed that certain people are naturally talented for certain activities like sports or music. Yet, others opine that any young person can learn and turn into a great sportsperson or make music.

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