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IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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some people think that government should provide assistance to all kind of artists including painter musician and poets etc. however other people think that it is a waste of money discuss both view and give your opinion.

Whether or not to allocate a budget to the development of art has always been a debated topic. While some support the need for sponsoring artists, others argue that the money is squandered and could be utilized for more meaningful causes. I agree that government should cease funding musicians, painters or poets and prioritize solving other important problems.

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Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution. Some people believe the Government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

According to studies, the primary source of pollution is the transportation of goods and people. While some believe the government should be in charge, others consider that it is the responsibility of individuals. In this essay, I will discuss both views and state my opinion.

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In the past, museums stored information about culture and history. However, nowadays this information can be found through the Internet, so there is no need for museums. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

News companies have become an integral part of our lives as they provide us with information. These days most of the information providers are spending a lot of money to cover news of other countries. However, regional material is more important for the public and should receive more funding. In this essay, I completely agree that media focus should be more local rather than international. There are two primary reasons for this.

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Some people think that secondary or high school students should be taught how to use money e-management is is an important life skill do you agree or disagree

Using money in an appropriate way is a basic skill that every growing child need to develop in them . School and college should add this as the subject. ,However Knowledge of this should be provided to every child is believed by many people. I agree with this statement and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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Online education is rapidly increasing in popularity. What has led to this development? What are the advantages and disadvantages of online learning compared to in-class instructions?

Issues related to online education are frequently discussed these days. It is true that studying online has hugely grown over the recent years. The causes of learning online, as well as both major benefits and drawbacks of the online course, will be explored in the following paragraphs.

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

The influence of information technology on our lives is undeniable, especially in the aspects of household chores, hobbies and daily work tasks. This essay will point out my personal opinion about how the advantages of technology surpass its disadvantage.

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Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view

There is a debate whether animals should not be kept in zoos while other parties believe that it is favourable for both of the species to keep there. This essay will illustrate both of the viewpoints and then I will give my personal opinion on the matter.

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The production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why is global warming considered one of the most severe issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved.

The heating effect is deteriorating global warming and it has a massive impact on the atmosphere which is caused by carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases production. There are a number of causative factors contributing to this new phenomenon. Nonetheless, certain measures can be taken to remedy this byproduct of emissions.

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Some people consider corruption to be the root cause of problems in government organizations and politics. What problems arise due to this corruption? What are possible solutions to eradicate corruption?

Certain audiences believe that corruption is the main cause of problems in governing authorities and politics. Corruption leads to less developement and highly beaurocratic procedure because of the uneducated leaders ruling the country. This essay will look at the core reasons for this and propose some solid solutions, with relevant examples.

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The growth of the online shopping will one day lead to the closure of shopping stores in cities. Do you agree or disagree with this.

Never before in human history, has there been rapid popularity of online stores as of right now. As a result, being the breakthrough of industrialisation and the Internet, e-commerce has flourished around the world. In this context, a few ethnic groups are sceptical about the closure of shopping centres in cities in the long run. I firmly contradict this notion with proper examples in this essay.

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Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women To what extent do you agree?

It's clearly evident that in many companies the prior post is occupied by male workers, despite the majority of the population, which is able to work, is composed by women, totalizing more than a half in almost all first world countries. Institutions, for some people, should depart a portion of the high-level positions to women and this might be a requirement. However, in my opinion, allocating a certain percentage of these places may increase the already existing disparity among gender.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents , for instance in sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sprts person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Education is a key to the future, and schools have a huge responsibility for improving various skills, including playing musical instruments and performing physical activities. While some people believe that children have an inner talent for sport or music, others insist that a good teacher can make a good musician or athlete from anyone. This essay will discuss both sides of the issue before reaching any opinion.

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Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum children, others think that for all school age children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Education is a key to the future, and schools have a huge responsibility for the studying plan, made for their students. While some people believe that sport is necessary as a part of the educational program, others insist that classical subjects as math, physics, chemistry and other academic topics are more important for youngsters. This essay will discuss both aspects of this issue before reaching any opinion.

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The movement of people from villages to cities for work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?

Unemployment in the countryside is one of the widespread issues the world is facing today. People are relocating from their native villages to the towns and it has brought certain challenges in both ecosystems. This essay will discuss the various reasons with possible solutions which can help to curb this negative development.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective.

Traffic is becoming the biggest concern nowadays due pollution also increased at a large amount. An appropriate method to resolve problems is expanding the rate of fuel is claimed by many people. Completely agree with the given notion however there are many other solutions to resolve the trouble which I will explain in the following paragraphs.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

A considerable portion of citizens adopts the notion of maintaining an unpaid wellness program despite the fact that several priceless medicines are above minimum wages . I strongly coincide with the former declaration, and this essay will hold the reasons for my view.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

In this contemporary world,there are lots of things which make people's minds occupied. One of them is accommodation.It is believed that buying a home for their own is far vital rather than renting them.In this essay,I will give the reasons for this happening and draw some conclusions.

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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this fast-moving world, where people are walking hard from day to night in the blind run behind aggressive materialization so unable to cope with a healthy lifestyle which ought to be emphasized as “health is wealth”. Some segments of society reckon that people should take care of their health and food; however, counterparts of the society insist that it is the liability of the government to see their mankind have good health. Though both have their pros and cons as per everyone’s perspective. Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both opinions would be discussed.

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Some people believe that the salaries paid to professional sportspeople are too high ,while others argue that sports salaries are fair. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Many claimes that the professional sportsperson turnovers are definitely too high. However ,some people opine that sport wages are equitable. From my point of ,view, I believe that the salaries paid to sportspeople are fair. I am going to explain both outlooks below.

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Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is important to consider that our eating habits have significantly changed over time. While some people believe that the government should be held accountable for the rising of extreme fat content in kids, I think that this could be partially agreed upon. In this essay, I will reinforce my position and support them with relevant examples.

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