IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 9

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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You came to know about a piece of equipment that would help you at your workplace. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter – describe the equipment – explain how it might be useful at your workplace – offer help in purchasing it

I am writing this letter in connection to the new sanitiser machine which is available in the market that could be of great help to the team members. I believe this equipment could help the crew to clean the lobby area within a matter of seconds.

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some think that people should not change their jobs while others think they should because it brings advantages for themselves, companies and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some adopt the view that workers had better not alter their occupations whereas others believe those ought to due to the benefits it brings to themselves, companies and the community. I will discuss both views of the essay before my point is drawn at the end.

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Some say that electronics books will make traditional books disappear in the future. DO you agree or disagree?

Advertising has grown enormously over the past years and some are of the opinion that commercials we encounter everywhere are impacting our lives in an unfavourable way. I partially disagree with this argument and I will explain my view in the following paragraphs.

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Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: • Your reason for writing • What you would like to happen • A nice, respectful style

Hope this letter finds you in good spirits and health. I am writing to bring you a notice of the inconvenience caused because of the barking of your puppy.

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You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another company Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: - Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months - Say how your work could be done while you are away - Ask for his/her help in arranging it

To solve the problem that appeared recently related with the booming sales performance, I would like to return to our headquarter 6 months for some help.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Whether the extinction of plants and animals is of dominant importance people hold different views. In my opinion, I tend to argue that there are many other environmental troubles that are of great urgency.

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You normally go shopping in the area where you live. However, you think some of the facilites for shoppers could be improved. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter:say in general what you like about shopping in your area, say what is wrong with the facilities, suggest how they can be improved

Your newspaper has a reputation for discussing different issues related to development and advancement in the city. I hope that you would take notice of this particular issue as well and publish it in your newspaper in order to attract the attention of higher authorities.

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You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: • explain why you are writing • express concern about the missing card • ask them what they intend to do

I, Kuljeet Kaur, an account-holder in your bank branch with savings account number 428xxxxxxxxxx. had received a letter from your side to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card.

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The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So governments and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An increase in the popularity of the environmental crisis has become a course of concern for people around the globe as it has adverse effects on all living things. However, it is commonly argued by some people that the issue would be tackled efficiently with support from authorities and large businesses in countries rather than citizens handled with the problem alone. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement.

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Writing task 1: Write atleast 150 words and spend no more than 20 minutes on this task. You are new to the city and you would like to take your family out for a meal. Write a letter to your friend who is familiar with the city. In your letter: • Tell him or her about the occasion • Tell him or her about what kind of a restaurant you prefer • Ask him suitable recommendations Start with Dear..............,

How are you? Hope this letter finds you well and I am writing this letter to let you know that I move to Vancouver along with my family. I am planning for a dinner party outside to celebrate my 30th birthday and as you know I am very new to this place and still searching for the best place.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should be always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both use and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, it is widely supported that every kind of crime should have its own stable penalty. However, numerous individuals argue that there are several factors that the court should be taken into account when deciding on a punishment. I strongly believe that the duty of the authorities and of the legal personnel is to consider all the incidents given.

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Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?

In the contemporary epoch, there is irrefutable debate among folk about blowing the cash in contrast to saving it. In this essay, I am going to examine the stated question and elucidate on numerous motives and then interpret why I reckon that it is a positive initiative in the modern age that empowers lavish lifestyle in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Young people prefer listening to music rather than listening to the news on the radio. Is this a positive or a negative trend? Provide reasons and examples for your opinion.

In the contemporary epoch, there is irrefutable debate among folk about listening to the song in contrast to the news. In this essay, I am going to examine the stated question and elucidate on numerous motives and then explain why I believe that it is a positive initiative in the modern age that empowers entertainment and relaxation in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Companies spend millions each year on advertising online, in magazines and on billboards. These adverts can encourage people to buy goods that they do not really need. What are the positive and negative effects of consumerism?

In the contemporary epoch, there is irrefutable debate among folk about online adverts which gravitate towards the product In contrast to the past. In this essay, I am going to examine the stated question and elucidate on numerous motives and then explain why I believe that it is a positive initiative in the modern age that empowers and attracts customers in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some car manufacturing companies have stated that there is a possibility that we will see flying cars in the future. Why is this going to happen? Will it be a positive or negative development?

In the contemporary epoch, there is irrefutable debate among folk about the future technology regarding flying vehicles In contrast to the past. In this essay, I am going to examine the stated question and elucidate on numerous motives and then explain why I believe that it is a positive initiative in the modern age that empowers travelling in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, apart from having an income, founders also carry a number of duties for society. I fully agree with the statement, as once an employer starts a new business, he takes obligations to the people he hires. Besides, founders have no choice as a matter of fact a heavy load of social needs lies on their shoulders.

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Some people think that museums’ main function is to educate people, the others suggest that they can also serve for entertainment purposes. What is your opinion?

An immensely controversial phenomenon in the contemporary epoch today relates to whether tutees should pay utmost attention to their education or present their elite status. There is no denying the fact that learning education is supremacy in comparison to fashion. I firmly agree and withstand the stated notion. This essay will further elucidate my assertions in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

The early years in life are the bedrock to success. Many argue, that raising an infant with a multitude of experiences shapes his or her future, whereas others believe that the adolescent journey has a higher impact. In this essay, we will navigate both the arguments and my viewpoint on the juvenile period being crucial.

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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Therefore, all students have to wear school uniforms. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects.

In this contemporary era, advertisement, whether it is goods or services, is growing by leaps and bounds. The public could see this everywhere, which highly affects the way to live. From my perspective, The merits of this situation surpass the demerits and my inclination is discussed in the further essay.

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