IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 9

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e. g. at home, when travelling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?

Technological improvements allow us to change things in our daily lives such as working in our homes or far away from our workplaces. This essay will attempt to analyse the advantages and disadvantages of having mobility in your workplace, being the benefits, in my opinion, are greater than the negative points.

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Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?

In modern-day societies, tourism is considered a significant industry that is growing bigger and bigger. The rise of travelling is advantageous for humans and nations, and in my opinion, some of these benefits are financial prosperity and cultural exchange.

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“Some people believe that exercise is the key to good health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important.” Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Several individuals think that exercising is the way to a healthy life whereas some believe that eating a balanced meal is more essential. However, I feel the two ideas are both as equally important. This essay will discuss both views at length.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages

Advancement in technology has brought many changes in the field of automobiles. In the course of time, all vehicles will be driverless and automated. In my point of view, this has more advantages than drawbacks because passengers can reach their destinations on time and safely without getting into motor vehicle accidents.

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In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can this cause?

All around the world, humans migrate from rural areas to cities for a variety of reasons. In my opinion, this phenomenon exists because of the opportunities in the job market in urban areas but induces problems for residents, and this essay will examine them.

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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

How are things with you? I'm afraid something has come up here which will probably affect my visit to Canada.

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You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. Describe the work you have been doing, explain why you can no longer do this work, recommend another person who is interested in the work.

I am writing this letter with regard to the work I am currently doing work to help society but I cannot continue doing work further. The work which comes under my supervision is that I design posters that are to be distributed in nearby areas. Apart from that, I write various types of slogans as well as a few speeches which encourage people to keep their clean, tidy and hygienic as well.

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in some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studied

Nowadays, many countries support adolescents to work or travel for a gap period between finishing high school and continuing studies at university to become more skilful, independent, and recognize the world. However, there are several pros and cons.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the impacts an individual can make to save the environment are nothing compared to that done by huge enterprises and governments. I agree with the notion given as subjects with massive scales can play a huge role in anything, particularly in nature.

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Directors of large organizations earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people think it is necessary, but others hold that it it unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Pay disparity is a growing concern in many large organizations across the world. Some people think that top-tier officials should earn higher salaries than other employees, while others reject this notion. In my opinion, the directors of these companies should be paid higher salaries. This essay will further elaborate my views and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e. g. at home, when travelling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays many personnel have the possibility to work outside their workplace thanks to the advances in technology. This essay will attempt to explain why I believe that the benefits of this situation outweigh the disadvantages and what these advantages are.

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There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

I am writing this letter to protest against the municipality's decision for selling the colony's park to a private builder. I came to know about this from today's article in your newspaper.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies?

Nowadays, many countries support adolescents to work or travel for a gap year between finishing high school and continuing studies at university to become more skilful, independent, and recognize the world. However, there are several pros and cons.

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You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but the Landlord won't return your deposit. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter • explain why you are writing • ask for the return of your deposit inform the landlord of possible legal action

I am writing to request the return of the £800 deposit that I paid to you in advance. before I rented No. 21, Britannia Court for the month of April. When I telephoned your office I was told that you are not intending to repay this money and I am unable to understand the reason for this.

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Deforestation provides a lot of needed material for furniture making and construction despite the drastic environmental impacts. Do you think the advantages of deforestation outweigh the disadvantages?

People have a myriad of views about whether deforestation brings more benefits than drawbacks. Although there are some advantages of the deforest events, I believe they are outweighed by the disadvantages. In this essay, I will probe into both sides and explain my own perspective.

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Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for individuals and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens. Do you agree or disagree?

Someone mentions that cooking and eating at their own places is better for them and their families than eating out in restaurants or canteens. Personally, I agree with this statement, and my opinions will be discussed for the following reasons.

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

This is certainly true that everyone experiences hardships and challenges in his life at any stage. Most people believe that it is essential to embrace any bad situation by considering it as an opportunity. Whereas, others contradict this by saying that we should make more efforts to improve the current situation. In my opinion, we should look for betterment even in the worst conditions.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Work is being done on street where you live .the noise is disturbing you.write a letter of complaint to local council .in your letter Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solution to the problem

I am an old resident of this neighbourhood. I am writing to you regarding the loud sound coming from a construction being made in the block in front of my house.

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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter • introduce yourself • ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes •explain why you need to break the contract.

My name is Rubina and I have been renting apartment 501 of Amaya Towers. I request your permission to vacate the premises two months before the due date.

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