IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 9

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argued that advertising has an impact on customers' demand while some individuals say that people are no more interested in any advertising. From my point of view, I completely agree with the first opinion because I saw many people own products that were promoted somewhere.

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Modern technology, such as personal computers and the Internet, have made it possible for many people to do their work from home at least part of the time instead f going to an office every day. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The average time spent on electronic devices is eight out of the fourteen waking hours. In the last decade, technology developed fast and conquered every house. As a matter of fact, modern technology has a list of advantages and lethal disadvantages.

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Some people think that work is the most important thing of people’s life. Without the success of career, life becomes meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In this world, having a job with better pay is vital for a living. Some people argue that without a successful profession, a person's career is not complete. I completed to agree with this statement and the following essay states points and supports my opinion.

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Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Everyone needs a second house which is surrounded by trees and completely away from the civilization so that, they can spend their holidays with their family members. Some people believe that it is completely pointless to save the wild creatures in this timeline. I strongly disagree with the above statement.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People are calling into question the usefulness of new experiences during life. Even though some individuals claim that permanent lifestyles without any changes are more preferable to contemporary ones, others dismiss them as a good situation. Both sides of the argument will be elaborated followed by my own take on the matter in the following paragraphs.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write papers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

How much it was annoying to wait for letters for months until they arrived at their destinations? It is the perfect time to end this era. Technology helped humanity to build a communication bridge between all countries where services are instant, efficient and time-reducing. Therefore, I strongly believe that new communications are more significant than pieces of paper because they are productive and eco friendly.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people are calling into question how should be behaved with holidaymakers with many cultural diversities. Some people claim that the owner countries’ conventions should be Followed by tourists, others dismiss them as a proper positive potential. Both these viewpoints will be elaborated followed by my own take on.

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Some people believe that government should financially support retired people. Others feel that those who have retired pay to support themselves. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

When people cross the age of 60, they require more attention and aid. Few people think that retired citizens should be financially helped by the government whereas others viewpoint is that they should be self-funded. In this essay, I will discuss both topics and conclude my statement.

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As global trade increase, many goods including those we use in daily basis are produced in another country and have to be transport long distance. Do benefit of this trend outweigh disadvantages?

Nowadays, as a result of climbing relationships between countries, from an economic standpoint, there are countless products that are imported from overseas. These goods that are utilized by people daily have to transport long distances. While there are some negatives associated with that, I believe the main advantages are more substantial.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the numbers of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, in some nations, the ratio of adults to aged people is seemed to be relatively more. While both ranges of people have a vital role in society, I believe that since the younger group brings more innovations and easily adapts to the modern world, the advantages of this ratio outweigh its disadvantages.

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

People hold conflicting views about whether pupils should choose subjects at school. While some believe that they should spend time learning about the science of foodstuff and how to make it, I argue that it would be better for everyone to be forced into certain key fields.

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Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience; other say it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People seem to be either excited or worried about travelling. The benefits of travelling are not hard to spot out but there is another voice saying that travelling is wasting time and money. I will discuss both perspectives and give my own opinion.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

People are calling into question how their overall health level and average weight are balanced. In my perspective, while there are two compelling reasons that reveal why these challenges appear, some rational solutions will be figured out to overcome these problems.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

It is argued that the best method to tackle the problem of increasing the rate of traffic jams and pollution is adjusting the price of petrol. I strongly agree with this statement although there might be other metrics to overcome these problems that will be elaborated on in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and gives your own opinion.

Evidence suggests that students have significantly been affected by both parents and school educators to be constructive individuals during their schooling age. Nevertheless, some people claim that parents can play an active role in this procedure, others believe that it is the education system’s role to do this. Both these views will be elaborated followed by my own take on. I strongly agree.

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Some people believe that criminals should be put into prison as long as possible. However, others believe that it is necessary to educate those people in local community. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

People tend to have different views about how criminals should be dealt with. While keeping lawbreakers in prisons for a long time can uphold an ordered society, I believe giving them another chance to learn how to be good citizens would bring more advantages to the local community.

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In the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of students, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education is a crucial part of people's lives. For several years, classes have been used to display knowledge to many students. However, thanks to technology improvements, some may believe that there are no reasons for attending lessons. I completely disagree with the statement due to the benefits related to face to face interaction at schools.

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The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

For a few years, the worldwide population have shown an increasing trend. Some believe that this growth is the greatest problem that inhabitants have experienced. I agree with the statement due to the consequences of an increasing population.

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Some people agree with spending lot of mpney on large wedding while others thinks it is a waste of money. What is your opinion?

Getting married is a significant chapter in people's lives. While some decide to spend a high budget for the celebration, others believe it is not worth investing in it. I believe that it is better to use the money to purchase other most significant things.

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