IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 5

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Many people work long hour, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Issues related to working long hours are frequently discussed these days. It is true that people's lifestyles today have been affected by work-life imbalance. Despite the fact that this trend has some advantages, I would argue that there are more disadvantages. This essay will explore how the drawbacks of working overtime outweigh the benefits.

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Since it is so easy to reach a large audience on the Internet, people have to be exceptionally talented to become famous these days. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technological developments have changed how we communicate with one another as the Internet enables people to speak with a variety of individuals across the world without physical contact. Although some suggest that having exceptional skills is necessary to be well-known, I believe that having practical Internet skills and creativity can facilitate anyone to gain fame.

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Some people have the opinion that big shopping malls are expensive places as they offer high costs for the products which can be bought at much cheaper prices from local shops. On the other hand, some people think that such malls are absolutely the best places to visit for shopping. Discuss both the opinions and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your ans

Issues related to shopping places are frequently discussed these days. Although some believe that such malls are absolutely the best places to visit for shopping, others criticize this and argue that local shops are much cheaper places as they offer low costs for the same products. In the following paragraphs, both sides of this statement will be discussed.

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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating and information. State which you consider to be the most effective - comics - Books - radio - television - film - theatre Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiance.

Without any doubt, in the present century, we have access to numerous technologies, through which we communicate and get information. Some of them are books, radio and films. However, including the large number of ,benefits these have a few drawbacks as well.

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Some people think that the government is responsible for looking after the elderly. Others believe that it should be family members. Who do you think should take responsibility?

It is often said by some human beings that old people should be managed by the government, while others believe that it is mandatory that family should take care of them. In my opinion, the latter proportion appears to be more rational. This essay will highlight the both above-mentioned views in the upcoming paragraphs with proper explanation thus will lead to a logical Conclusion.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all the shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Expansion of E-commerce business would lead to a significant closure of physical stores in cities and towns soon. In my opinion, I would partially agree with this statement.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own countries to work in developed countries. What problem does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

These days, more and more professionals are choosing to relocate to more developed countries for work. This happens mainly because of a better economy and a variety of job opportunities in richer countries. This essay will explore the reasons for this trend and discuss the possible solutions.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters(such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.

A group of individuals present the view that youngsters who are allowed to decide and choose their preferences on different subjects such as food, clothing and entertainment tend to put their own wishes above others in the future, whereas others believe that children should be allowed to decide on things which are associated with them. I wholeheartedly agree with the latter opinion as it plays a vital role in their growth process.

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Some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle material and avoid waste. Other believe that should be taught at home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people think that children should be taught in school to recycle unused material, while others say that this training should be given at home. This article will discuss both views before a final statement.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

More than any time in history, human beings are producing more waste products and this is increasing at a very alarming exponential rate. This essay discusses why I feel this is happening and explores the measures governments need to take to bring this under control.

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Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on food and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think that these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Recently, many have argued whether governments' implementation of special taxes on consumable products with high levels of sugar is a necessary development or not. Two sides emerged: those who agree with it and those who oppose it. Both parties present solid arguments, which will be discussed below and attached with a personal opinion.

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some people think that it would be better for large companies to move to regional areas outside large urban centres. Do you think the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

It has been debated that most of the entrepreneurs are supposed to relocate their organization to urban instead of being located in the main city. In my opinion, I think it depends on their situation.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the coutryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development

At present, people wish to spend their time prioritising their well-being in a comfort zone. In many nations around the universe, countryside individuals are transferring to urban areas, so the population in the village is decreasing. The essay describes both views and it is a negative practice with the statement from my inclination.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an egeing population outweigh the disadavantages?

Human’'s longevity is better than at any time in the past in many developed nations. While there are numerous benefits associated with living longer, the drawbacks of this trend overshadow the positives.

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At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

A huge part of some countries' population is youngsters in comparison to elders number nowadays. I personally believe that this issue can have many advantages and disadvantages, in other words, this is two sides of a penny but in my personal perspective, the disadvantages of this issue outweigh the advantages due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Many people believe that funding space exploration is important. To what extent do you agree?

Plenty of people claim that it is essential to spend money on investigating space. I totally agree with the given statement. I suppose that the natural resources will run out, so people will need another place to live. The discovery of an appropriate planet can be invaluable. Furthermore, the study of the universe can lead to finding reasonable solutions for everyday problems.

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Some people believe that it is good idea to express their point of view and ideas through social media however others believe opposite do you agree or disagree

Recently, social media has evolved and enabled its users to connect to people around the globe. Some say that it is a good idea to speak their minds and deliver some ideas through it. However, others believe the opposite of it. I agree that we should not talk freely about our own minds without boundaries because not everyone is able to comprehend what we are talking about, due to harsh words they are spitting towards us. Moreover, their actions are able to make us feel unhappy, thus making us stressed and overthinking.

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Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

In recent years, climatic change has been a subject of ongoing debate, with a number of individuals believing that it has harmful effects on business, while others advocate for its potential benefits. From my perspective, global warming can be beneficial for manufacturers who can seize the chance.

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Some people say that TV advertisements are helpful for viewers, while others disagree. What is your opinion?

A number of the population believe that the public can be helped by commercials in different ways whereas others hold an opposite view. In this essay, I will discuss these two aspects and provide my point of view.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us t buy things. othere people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Advertisement is actually a way of casting a new product to the clients or informing the availability of any materials so that buyers can buy it very rapidly. Many people mention that it is the highest successful at persuading customers to collect things. On the other hand, the rest of the dwellers think that the process is not rare as well and they do not feel like paying any attention to it.

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