IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

In the era of globalisation, efforts are being made to develop all the nations of the earth. To achieve this, internationally recognized organisations are lending hands in many ways to develop the developing nations. Arguments are been made about financial or practical aid and advice, which is better. I strongly believe that both are equally important. In this essay, both points will be discussed....
These days, due to cut-throat competition in the world, people are working more hours than ever before and spend fewer hours at home. This is probably because they want to earn more money and enjoy luxuries of life, whilst they have to face some issues such as lack of family interaction and boredom. Undoubtedly, there are a number of benefits and drawbacks of this phenomenon which I will highlight as it progresses....
Numerous characters deem the community is formed on regulations and legislations and assume if people start acting as they wanted the society would not be called the public; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm if the society is centred on laws and regulations, we will not live with freedom and civil liberties. I reckon the civilization is formulated on public policies....
Numerous characters deem it is more advantageous for children to spend hours outside activities such as playing basketball, riding a bike, and hiking than staying at home; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm that playing virtual games in a home is better than playing outside for kids' development. I reckon it is necessary to play outside....
There is an opinion that in modern life people have a variety of options to choose in many spheres. Some argue that humans have even more things to opt for that it is required. I absolutely disagree with this statement and the following essay will examine why it is extremely significant for people to have a multitude of choices in some parts of life....
Numerous characters deem every kid must acquire skill in playing the musical apparatus; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm it is a wastage of time to become competent in a musical implement. I reckon every youngster must not become capable of playing a musical appliance....
It is believed by certain individuals that charities should assist anyone living anywhere in the world and I also endorse the aforementioned statement, however, others feel that charitable bodies should only aid the ones residing in the nation it belongs to. Both the sides will be discussed in the essay below with relevant examples....
Numerous characters deem people in business should do housework equally, regardless of their gender, so that it is fair, as both male and female employees work diligently in many nations. In contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm only women should do chores while labouring as usual. I reckon ladies are obliged to housework more than gentlemen....
While some people opine that asking private issues of an applicant is significant during the interview, others think the complete opposite of the view. In my opinion, some internal information should be asked to judge the candidate properly; however, both views will be discussed in the essay....
While some people opine that asking private issues of an applicant is significant during the interview, others think the complete opposite of the view. In my opinion, some internal information should be asked to judge the candidate properly; however, both views will be discussed in the essay....
In our modern society, only a minority of people would like to spend ages cooking for their meals, while the majority nowadays prefer to buy takeaway foodstuff instead of cooking at home. Whether it is ideal to buy ready-made feed compared to self-cooked meals is certainly up for debate. In my opinion, the advantages of this development definitely do not outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore, the following essay will discuss the reasons behind the phenomenon and outline the benefits and drawbacks of it....
In the 21st century, people have seen numerous ups and downs. These oscillations of life have left many people homeless either because of loss in business or cause of debt. To help the homeless people, it is argued that giving them money will help them. I strongly stand against this notion. In this essay, why providing homeless people money, do nothing to encourage them to change their life and instead of helping them to earn on their on own do good will be discussed....
Numerous characters deem our conventional educating program will be altered, and students will not be attending in their classroom; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm pupils will be studying at school. Besides this, the old educational program will be lasting as usual. I reckon the current model will surely change by the 2050s....
In the 21st century, the reasons to get married has changed especially for women. Few intellects believe that this is because women are able to earn to support them, while some argue. I affirm that this is true, by making earning women are able to avoid marriage. In this essay, independence and self-control of women’s lives will be discussed to support my stance....
A popular topic today is regarding whether photographs and movies are more expressive approach than writings, poetry, and even books. It is commonly believed that this is true.However, in this essay, I am going to elaborate on this topic and show my disapproval....
Almost everyone desires to live in a perfect public. Even though people had already made many attempts toward an ideal public, we have not succeeded in forming the community regarded as flawless. In my opinion, an ideal public is a place where people do not offend crimes, and educating children from their young ages is the solution to achieve this purpose....
Numerous characters deem watching TV and reading magazines as a wastage of time, as there is no correlation to citizens' lives; meanwhile, certain groups of people oppose and affirm many necessary pieces of information get announced by the news program. I reckon we should not glean a public's daily news from the press, TV, broadcast, and other media....
Many people have the opinion that annual examinations are the best way to analyze student’s performance while maintaining that continuous assessments such as weekly assignments and project work are an unsatisfactory way to assess the student. I agree with the statement to some extent as I believe that assessing students continuously can help improve their performance to the most extent....
Numerous characters deem taking daily goods from foreign nations is dangerous for the public, assuming this cash flow must get directed to growing vegetables and livestock. In contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm this trend allows us to buy cheaper foods. In this essay, I will discuss, firstly, the merit of producing foods on its own and secondly, the negative aspects of this phenomenon, followed by a reasoned conclusion....
Numerous characters deem that the death sentence is necessary for critical crimes; meanwhile, certain groups of people oppose and affirm the idea that it is not right to kill miscreants for their offence. In this essay, I will discuss, I examine firstly, how sparing offenders can give new opportunities to them, also negative aspects of finishing lawbreakers, followed by a reasoned conclusion....