IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

Incarceration has been one of the effective penalties for convicts for centuries. Some people opine that the captives should be made to serve the community in lock-ups rather than just being jailed. I thoroughly support this opinion and believe that this would instigate more positive outcomes for both the culprits and communities....
At present, a growing number of pupils are going overseas for being graduates. In my opinion, although this tendency has some negatives, it brings more advantages....
It is commonly believed that online social media has impacted people and the community we live in adversely. In my opinion, I think this is true especially when it comes to children and teenagers....
In today's world, although the sphere of agriculture has developed significantly and is very powerful at the current moment a large part of the population still go hungry. Firstly, this essay will discuss why this might be the case and, secondly, it will analyse one possible way to solve this issue....
In this century, many people consume all their expenses on shopping not only to have the goods they need also to enjoy buying new products. In my opinion, that behaviour they gain form advertisements and influencers, and I am of the belief that this a negative development on society. I will discuss that below in this essay....
It is often seen that many criminals indulge in greater illegal activities after completing their first sentence. This may occur due to several reasons like adopting inefficient methods to rectify the guilty’s behaviour. The key to addressing this issue lies in taking an in-depth approach in order to understand the person’s psyche and purpose behind committing the offence....
Global warming is the biggest threat to the continuity of mankind. There are several factors contributing to raising the global temperature, but there have been agreements in the research field to point out that man-made activities are the main root cause. This essay aims to discuss the negative impact of coal and aeroplane on the Earth’s heat. They are notorious for the origins of global warming....
There is an increasing tendency among people to carry about their health. Despite it, people in some countries are suffering diseases cause by consumption in excessive quantity. Therefore, governments may impose taxes on this kind of unhealthy products. I partly agree with this statement since the country’s rules should help society in any possible way....
Innate talents for some of the people are exceptional in this contemporary society. There are predominantly two contradicting debates are happening. While, it is generally believed that some people have born with certain talents in sports and music streams to become achievers, but others think that rigorous training and practice makes people good at any talent. I will discuss both views in this essay and provide my opinion with necessary examples....
It is currently a contentious argument over ancient buildings should be maintained or demolished. In my opinion, I quite believe that old households have their values. This essay is going to analyze some comprehensive preferences to support my idea....
The immense development in technology has provided us with a better platform for research that is called the internet. It increases our approach to knowledge limitlessly, which is a significant point for society. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the statement that it provides us with useful content that helps all of us in our education and employment sectors every day. The essay will discuss the fact that how an internet tremendously helps us and will provide appropriate examples to amply elaborate the fact....
It is the main argument in today,s society that high pay scale is primary than contentment at the workplace. In my opinion, I agree with the mentioned statement because it gives the sense of achievement to an employee as high payscale greatly benefits him/her that helps to keep motivated a worker for their farm work. The essay will discuss the statement with appropriate examples of a Chinese survey and a study from the UK will amply elaborate it....
In the era of modernization and technical progress, some people believe that society is able to maintain a tidy eco-system and provide successful economic development at the same time. While others argue that in the modern world these two goals play an inverted role. From my perspective, it is not obvious that nature suffers the development outcomes....
Nowadays, the rising figures in the crime rate are one of the major cause of concern for a large number of nations. In my opinion, although, improvement in the education system can bring some control on this problem, it can never irradicate it completely. In this essay, we will understand why the imprisonment of the defaulters would be an appropriate course of action to decrease illegal activities....
It has been seen that a growing number of individuals become overweight because of consuming unhealthy snacks; therefore, many people suggest for imposing a maximum tax by the government on junk recipes to reduce ongoing matter. In my opinion, the proposed step could be decreased the issue in some cases, I think other measures are required....
In the argument for quality education, an aspect that is commonly brought up is theory versus practical teachings. Many individuals believe students should be forced to participate in volunteerism without pay. I wholeheartedly agree with this view and will be discussing why in the forthcoming paragraphs....
It is often believed that high remuneration is of more relevance than job gratification. I agree with this statement because fat pay increases the level of motivation and financial status of the individual....
In the argument for quality education, an aspect that is commonly brought up is theory versus practical teachings. Many individuals believe students should be forced to participate in volunteerism without pay. I wholeheartedly agree with this view and will be discussing why in the forthcoming paragraphs....
It is often believed that high remuneration is of more relevance than job gratification. I agree with this statement because fat pay increases the level of motivation and financial status of  the individual....
While some individuals think that offences are the production of social unrest, others opine that it is just an innate characteristic of human. In my opinion, both the statements are true if we consider prime reasons for offences....