IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 7

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

According to the British and Australian legislation judge members are not allowed to access the past defendant misdeeds to safeguard the convicts, However, some connoisseurs proposed the change of the rule, permitting the jury to know the outlaws' past life for sake of better judgment. Personally, I agree with the view owing to the fact that shortfall in information could condemn innocents. Although it has its adverse side effects. This essay will shed light on the matter and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that university education should not have any tuition fees and it should be open for everyone. I strongly agree with this view because this will provide equality to the poor students as a result of this higher educated citizen will increase and it can make any country wealthy.

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Today family members eat fewer meals together. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative trend?

Nowadays it is very uncommon in families to meet at a certain time and have breakfast, lunch or dinner together. I believe that this trend has happened because of the ways people balance between work and life and although busy professional activities provide us financial security, it takes the toll on an ideal family life where children might take the wrong path living.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible ina scientific research, bussiness and the acedemic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Dicuss both the views and give your own opinion?

In today's generation knowledge is the greatest treasure of an individual life though some human beings say that the distribution of information related to experiments , corporations and educational backgrounds is virtuous. However, further population find this sharing unpleasant as some facts are quite precious and essential . In my ,opinion this division of data is generally beneficial such as sharing brings a lot of extra ideas and guidance.

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Some people prefer activities and lifestyles in hot climates while others prefer living in cold climates. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some would argue that warm and sunny weather is better for living, while others believe that cold climate is perfect for doing activities and lifestyle. Although the freezing season produces different types of green vegetables which are beneficial for health, I personally believe that the summertime brings out the best of living because humans have emotions.

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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

People hold conflicting views about whether computers are an essential tool in the developed world. While some believe classrooms should be equipped with technologies and their programs are set up for direct lectures functions, others consider that using them can bring drawback effects to teenagers. I would argue that they should be included in the process of teaching because of their benefits.

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Museums should display art of their own country, or they should display art from all over the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Museums and art galleries are very crucial for the new generation. Like, it can provide a wider perspective of own culture. It is completely agreed that museums should present the art of their own nation as well as of a global village. In this essay, I will try to draw a conclusion with the help of relevant examples.

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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both views and give your opinion

These days children have a number of activities to become engaged with. While some people are of the view that teachers should not give home exercises for school kids, others are of the opinion that homework is very essential for youngsters. In this essay, I will be discussing both the views and state my opinion that homework is very important in the education of children. There are two primary reasons for this.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

A considerable proportion of citizens consumes most of the leisure period on telecasts which deprive them of an active and conversational lifestyle. I strongly coincide with the former declaration, and this essay will hold the reasons for my view.

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Many people like unhealthy food although they know it is bad for them. Why? What are the effective ways to improve people's eating habits?

In the modern world where convenience takes priority, more concerns are stemmed from people's consumerism of fast food. Even at the expense of health, people still opt for these unhealthy meals. This essay outlines some possible explanations for this phenomenon and gives out some ways to improve unwholesome eating practices.

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The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue. Some people argue that it is necessary for economic growth, while others claim that it damages local industries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that the free movement of items in most national borders is known as a controversial issue. Many claimes that this is one of the most essential things for economic growth ,however, some people opine that this could be dangerous for domestic products and industries. From my point of ,view, I completely believe that the close economic connection is dispensable for all countries around the world.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Arguably, it is commented that the unique and effective measure to shrink traffic congestion these days in cities is to diminish the individuals' necessities in trip, job, schooling or purchasing items in bazaars or supermarket. Personally, I strongly disagree with the view since the ruling power should enhance public facilities. Although shortfall in financial resources hinders willpower. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Advertisement is an inseparable process in any kind of business. These strategies include highlighting goods or services in a refreshed way. In my opinion, it has a positive impact and shows effectiveness in advertising. Thus, companies may increase incomes and we see new advantages of sales.

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The leaders or directors of organizations are often elderly people. However, some sat that young people can also take the lead of organizations or companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A certain number of current employees adopt a convenient notion that the new generation can play a substantial role in business management. I strongly coincide with the former declaration, and this essay will hold the reasons for my view.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a University should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a University?

Recently, an educational issue related to the main function of a university has been widely discussed among people the world over. Some argue that universities should only provide students with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. I disagree with this viewpoint almost entirely. As far as effectiveness, technology development, and finance are concerned, I strongly hold that university should teach all kinds of technology regardless of whether the course is useful to the work.

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People recently are face lots of celebrities whom most of them are known for their beautiful face and huge money which they owe ,rather than their abilities.That is a wrong perception for others specifically youths who tend to mimic celebrities.I agree with this statement somewhat but I think it is not totally true.

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Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life?

Having higher schooling from university plays a brighter role in person future and this thing is popular currently in the world. But, there are countable successful people, who didn't get higher study. From my perspective higher education is as vital as anything else to be successful in life. And my position is argued further.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. ‘Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough’ To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Some individuals commented that flaw is the evidence that the willpower to be successful was not there. Personally, I strongly disagree with the view since it is a shortfall in time management, and inappropriate techniques to accomplish the mission. Although sometimes luck and the holy spirit must be there. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and the homeless. Do you agree or disagree?

A considerable proportion of citizens adopt the notion that social deficiencies such as deflation and unsettlement request state intervention. I strongly coincide with the former declaration, and this essay will hold the reasons for my view.

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Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults who commit crimes. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

A considerable proportion of citizens adopt a preconceived notion that atrocities are considered equal in the eyes of justice despite the legal category age. I strongly oppose the former declaration, and this essay will hold the reasons for my view.

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