IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 6

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

Some individuals commented that stamina is the most relevant to a sportsman or sportswomen to be well-succeed in games. However, others believe that intelligence confidence is the most pivotal. Personally, I advocate the second opposing the initial since mental confidence overcomes challengers of diverse order. Although the body strength plays its role. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others, However believe that school is the place to learn this discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some individuals commented that relatives should train Boys and Girls to become better communities members. However, others argue that educational institutions are the most appropriate to that. Personally, I advocated the first view opposing to the second since collateral gives the initial educational step to youngsters, while schools provide solely scientific knowledge. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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There is too much noise in many public places in cities. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done to solve the problem?

Many public places in urban areas, these days, are getting too noisy. This essay will be discussing some factors and some measures that should be taken to solve the issue.

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Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The vast majority of the population deems that a presence of a tour guide is composed of a necessary part throughout the tour destination while others argue with this position and claim that visitors can be travelled independently. I advocate strongly with these statements and am going to reflect on this essay my own view of such a common issue and to discuss both opinions.

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Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

The majority of the masses choose to wake up before the usual time and begin the daily work. While others adopt to get up late opportunity in the day and be at work until midnight. In my opinion, I opt for the regular working hours as it is beneficial to strength and wealth. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view.

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Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 254 words.

Nowadays multinational companies hire an enormous quantity of staff to work and to enhance their economical boundaries. Some people argue that if employees who work for large organizations and factories must shift to the countryside so that the traffic and housing problems must be resolved. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the above statement because these citizens would waste their precious time while commuting to the office.

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Some people think children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

There is a debate whether offspring should be given the space to commit mistakes, while others think that families should not allow their offspring to commit mistakes. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument, and then I will give my opinion.

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Some people think that only managers should make decisions in the company while others think that employees should also be involved in the process of decision-making . Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The decisions should be made by only supervisors or executives, according to some people. Other people, nevertheless, opine that everyone in a company should be involved in making these things. In my opinion, all members should decide on their own jobs. Both sides along with my perspectives linked to the topic will be outlined in the following paragraphs.

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It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree of disagree

Arguably, it is commented whether the world-ruling power should use public funds sensitizing and mobilizing citizens to avert sickness or it should allocate the same money to individuals cure. Personally, I strongly agree with the view since it is worthy of preventing rather than treating. Although a cure is less spending than prevention. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the concurrent world, people can enjoy advanced technology and convenient internet. The folk can connect to a load of information, but they may not analyse whether it is correct or not. Also, we cannot deny that we do have lots of choices since we can easily access the cyber in our generation whereas our parents may not have these benefits in their generations. This essay is going to discuss both pons and cons and my own opinions.

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Some people think children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

Some would argue that youngsters ought to have the freedom to make mistakes, whilst some believe that it is adults' duty to protect their offspring from any wrong activities. Although a miserable fault and learning from that can build a psychologically strong man, I personally do not agree with that statement because one evil step can make a child suffer and therefore parents can help them with their life experience.

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Today family members eat fewer meals together. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative trend?

In recent years it's been observed that more and more families are rarely gathering to have the daily meals together.I believe that this is happening because people are unable to balance between their occupations and personal life which has led to major cracks in normal family structure.

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the government should lower the bughet on the arts in order to allocate more money to education. To extend do you agree?

It is questioned if the government should give more money to education than the arts. On my behalf, I think that, in some way, art is a way of cultivating people too. Accordingly, it shouldn´t be possible to choose one. After all, places such as museums, galleries, exhibitions, concerts, dancing and other performances, form part of today´s education and even if the state had a bigger budget for schools, these institutions alone will never be enough.

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Nowadays an increasing number of people change their career and place of residence several times during life. Is this a positive or negative development?

These days, societies are given different career opportunities. Having different career options makes it more likely people move their accommodation as well for a number of times. This essay will discuss the issue of whether this gives society a positive or negative impact on their life. In my opinion, this is certainly positive as people can have more horizons and be avoided from boredom.

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Nowadays people tend to change a few careers during life. What are the reasons for this, in your opinion? Do you think it is good for the society as a whole?

Altering jobs for several times for some people is getting more common nowadays. This essay will discuss the reasons why people do this and give my opinion on whether or not this is promising for the public as a whole.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss the both views and give your own opinion.

Some people choose to spend their entire lives doing the same work and are not open to new changes. Meanwhile, some believe that change is always a good thing and are open to new things in life. This essay will discuss both views and give my personal opinion on the matter.

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Many jobs require ongoing training and research to stay competitive in a world with rapidly evolving information and technology. Some believe that it is the responsibility of businesses to pay for this training for their staff while others feel it is up to the individual. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this competitive corporate ,world it is necessary for many positions to have updated training and research with the advent of technology. While some would argue that employers are responsible for the payments, others believe that individuals ought to pay by themselves. Although when an employee can make reimbursement for the tuition, it eases financial circumstances, I personally believe that any career improvement course should be personal.

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In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach in teaching?

Although in the past classroom education was the only way of learning, at the present internet and smartphone made a virtual classroom system that is becoming popular. I personally believe that this trend has positive sides such as cost-effective higher education and reduces carbon-di-oxide emission; the negatives are lacking in interpersonal communication and poor students cannot use the advent of technology.

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The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that exploitation and harnessing of renewable energy should be the prime goal of the world-ruling power. Personally, I strongly agree with the view since fossil energies damage the planet. Although the clear powers do not suffice all human beings' energy necessities. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that the exploitation and harnessing of renewable power should be the prime goal of world-ruling . Personally, I strongly agree with the view since fossil power damage the planet. Although the clear energies do not suffice all human beings' energy necessities. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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