IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 80

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?

There still is a debate as to whether youngsters should be given more extra time use for revising academic tasks or not; notwithstanding, this disquisition delves into both vantage points, and subsequently, will explore my own perspective, in turn.

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It is better for the younger people to get advice from the older ones. Do you agree ir disagree?

There is no doubt that elderly people can provide valuable feedback to us, as they are more experienced in many ways than the millennials. It is believed by many that taking guidance from elderly people can truly be beneficial for young people, however, I disagree because of several reasons.

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The range and quality of food that we can buy has changed because of technological and scientific advances. Some people regard this change as an improvement, while others believe that it is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The advancement in science and technology has led to the production of enormous types of food products. It has been argued by many that it's beneficial, whereas others believe that it's detrimental to our health. I support the former view, as I think that the quality of these products has improved due to strict assurance.

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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and Clean energy. The benefits of nuclear energy far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been believed that the fear of atomic bomb ensures peace around the globe. Nuclear energy has many benefits like provision of cheap and environmental friendly electricity, and these overweigh the disadvantages. I fully agree with this, as it all depends upon the usage and will ultimately decrease the burden on the petroleum products.

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More and more people are becoming serious overweight. Some people think that a solution can be to increase the price of fattening food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People hold different views about weight control. While a number of people believe that the most effective approach is raising the fare of fast meal. I, however, would argue that is is not a definite answer to this issue.

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Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What are some possible solutions? What problems does this cause?

In this competitive world, a vast majority of people have to face cut-throat competition with the younger generation for the similar type of jobs.This essay will discuss that it would minimise the opportunities for the elder people, and further submit that division of jobs, according to the qualifications and experience as a viable solution.

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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do what extent do you agree?

Opinions differ regarding the major source of getting news updates from all over the world. While reading online news is acquiring increasing popularity among the masses, the traditional form of published newspapers will always remain the pivotal means of news. I, however, completely disagree with this and opine that the digital news will in fact gradually replace newspapers in the future, owing to their ease of availability and cost-effectiveness.

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Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban Centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is often believed by some that the big companies and industries should be moved away from the urban areas and be established in the regional areas. I believe that shifting large companies outside urban areas is beneficial for the society.

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In many countries, women and men are working full time .it is there fore logical for men and women to share household tasks.to what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, in most of the countries, men and women are working full time without any disparities. Hence, it is reasonable for both of them to share the household tasks. In my opinion, I agree with this notion. Obviously, it is a feasible claim. In this essay, we'll discuss the relevant attributes for it.

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

Some people have views that it is harmful for humanity to play video games, while there are opponents who claim that those games have some advantages in leisure and education. However, I believe that the impact of video games is more likely negative.

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Some people believe that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is somehow believed, that the extinction of some animals and plants might cause a global environmental issue. However, there could be more problems to make a tremendous harm to our mother nature, just like air pollution. In my opinion, we cannot focus on the particular species only as the "green" issues have always been complex. Having said that, I will prove this statement in the following paragraphs.

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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Newspapers and television are considered to be traditional information sources in the world. Unfortunately, these days they lack their popularity among youngsters, who are less interested in these types of tools for updates. In this essay, I will explain the reasons behind this problem as well as some measures that can be taken to solve it.

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It has become very common for people to borrow money. Most people have a credit card, a mortgage and often they will buy car on credit as well. Is this a good idea or is it too risky? Discuss both views and give your own opinion

The borrowing to fund has become much easier as compared to the past. Nowadays, there are many banks, the institution which calls people to lend capital on the mortgage. Some people consider it as a risky trade, while others have a positive view about it. In my opinion, it is not bad to have a good deficit until an unless you are able to manage it effectively.

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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Some people have views that homework is beneficial for students, while there are opponents who argue that it is harmful for children. In my view, I believe that it is necessary for education.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, many employees are not able to get sufficient physical activities, not only during working hours, but also in their spare time, which can lead to health-related complications. This essay will discuss a reason that can prevent people from exercising and recommend a viable solution to that.

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Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time? (

There still is a debate as to whether youngsters should be given more leisure time or extra academic tasks; notwithstanding, this disquisition delves into both vantage points, and subsequently, will explore my own perspective, in turn.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people have views that university students should major in certain subjects, while there are opponents who argue that their choices should not be limited. I believe that everyone should study, according to their choices.

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Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Nowadays, adventurous sports like sky diving and skiing are becoming exceedingly popular. As the name suggests, adventurous sports involve a high level of risk and can even cause death unless people played properly. In this essay, I will provide some reasons to support my opinion.

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Libraries are irrelevant in the age of the internet and should not be publicly funded. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argued that, in the era of advanced technology, funding the public libraries is inappropriate.I fully disagree and think the aspect to stop financing the public libraries is completely wrong, and due to convenience and easy access to authenticate materials, libraries should be funded by the government.

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Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In parallel with the incredible development of technology, online curriculum has become one of the common features of university education, which is gradually replacing face-to-face classes. From my perspective, this movement brings about both positive and negative impacts to students.

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