IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 79

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people say that educational success most of the time depends on having a good teacher. Others say that student attitudes also do matters. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Over the past decades, there are several reasons that have been determined for a person’s success. Some individuals argue that educational prosperity of a student is because of an exceptional teacher, whereas others think that a student’s behaviour also makes a difference. In my view, both of these points are equally important for achievement in any field. In this essay, we shall discuss these two thoughts further.

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Statement: Some people prefer to do physical activities to relax, while others choose mental activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In modern time, stress, increasing rapidly among society because of huge change in lifestyle. Many people choose to do exercise for physical and mental fitness. In contrast, others choose the medication for relaxation. I firmly stand by the former view, It's better to give physical efforts than mind games. In this essay, we'll discuss relevant attributes for it.

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The first smartphone was released in 1992. By then year 2020 there may be as many as 2.5 billion smartphones in the world. The use of smartphones is decreasing our collective intelligence because we are reliant on the technology and not our own minds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The smartphone technology has invariably revolutionised the world. In the modern era, more than half of the population on earth has access to these smart devices. While it may be argued that the dependency on these phones is deteriorating our knowledge base and is harmful for our thinking ability, to me it seems to be a contradictory scenario. In this essay, I will outline why the reliance on these smartphones is rather beneficial to our cognitive intellect.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is considered by many that children who regularly use technological mediums might get negatively affected instead of getting benefits. I completely agree that these hi-tech devices will have negative consequences on children, as they may suffer from mental and physical health issues.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both view and your opinion.

According to some people, incorporating more sports programs can provide significant health benefits for the citizens, while others think other initiatives are also needed. In my opinion, gymnastic activities and awareness programs, together can have a useful impact for the welfare of public health.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent decades, Technological developments have revolutionised the way of shopping. In the sense, that all the stores in local markets and cities are on the urge of obsolete, the reason is, emerging trends of shopping online. I completely agree with the statement because, once people start trusting the online retailers, they found shopping more convenient and time saving.

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Topic: Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is reducing the amount of maximum speed of vehicles. Others think that other ways exist. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It has been argued by many that the best way to avoid accidents is to reduce the maximum speed limit of the cars, whereas others are of the opinion that the awareness campaigns and implementation of safety precautions can do the same. I think that both views are correct, as avoidance of accidents is very important to save precious lives.

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Some people think that government should invest money in wildlife projects and protect them.Other people think it is better if the government invest money in other projects.Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

While some individuals argue that the authorities should allocate funds for the conservation of a wide variety of plants and animal species, others consider that there are other essential issues, which needs to be focused.This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in depth.I, however, believe that the protection of the wild animals must be prime responsibility of the regimes.

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The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs enormous government expenditure. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a belief that in many countries a huge amount is spent on the renovation of old buildings, which is a sheer wastage, rather the same has to be used for the building of new living places and restoration of highways. I fully agree with this, as the infrastructure has to be renovated regularly.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For the years, it is a highly debated topic, Economically strong nations should provide an educational and employment support to the residents of under developing countries. Despite, giving cash to the government to help people. To some extent I believe that, financial support is not equally beneficial to other needs of an individual in poor nations.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Nowadays, it has become quite common in the era of globalisation, that people are settling in different countries for the job, leaving their home nation. They find it difficult to converse in the native tongue of that country, instead, they are comfortable in speaking their own language. Consequently, it results in numerous problems for them. I agree with this statement due to the various following reasons.

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Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

It has become a highly debatable issue whether is it the duty of developing nations' governments to help their citizens, or should reach countries share their wealth and resources to them. Most of these poor nations are living under the poverty line, and in my opinion, wealthy nations have the ability and responsibility to help them.

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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the rate of abortion has significantly raised in society and creates controversy all over the world. While some feel that it should be authorized by the law as many people are scared to take care of their own babies, others argue that it should be banned to save the life of the mother. This essay will discuss both views and outline why I feel miscarriage is a harmful act, which has to be shut down completely.

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Children today have more responsibilities than the past. Some people think it has positive effects than negative ones while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

While it is often argued by some people that youngsters are more responsible in current era, whereas others take the view that many young people are more attentive in the old days. My opinion is that it is better to hold many responsibilities in nowadays and this essay will discuss about both views.

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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do what extent do you agree?

Reading news is the regular task of daily life for many people. Nowadays, the majority of them are using Digital news as a faster option. While some people tend towards the viewpoint that Print media is still the prime source for reading the news. I plainly disagree with the given notion as online news has many advantages compared to conventional newspapers. This essay will discuss that how the statement given above can be realistic with the reasoned conclusion.

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Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?

There still is a debate as to whether youngsters should be given more extra time use for revising academic tasks or not; notwithstanding, this disquisition delves into both vantage points, and subsequently, will explore my own perspective, in turn.

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It is better for the younger people to get advice from the older ones. Do you agree ir disagree?

There is no doubt that elderly people can provide valuable feedback to us, as they are more experienced in many ways than the millennials. It is believed by many that taking guidance from elderly people can truly be beneficial for young people, however, I disagree because of several reasons.

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The range and quality of food that we can buy has changed because of technological and scientific advances. Some people regard this change as an improvement, while others believe that it is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The advancement in science and technology has led to the production of enormous types of food products. It has been argued by many that it's beneficial, whereas others believe that it's detrimental to our health. I support the former view, as I think that the quality of these products has improved due to strict assurance.

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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and Clean energy. The benefits of nuclear energy far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been believed that the fear of atomic bomb ensures peace around the globe. Nuclear energy has many benefits like provision of cheap and environmental friendly electricity, and these overweigh the disadvantages. I fully agree with this, as it all depends upon the usage and will ultimately decrease the burden on the petroleum products.

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More and more people are becoming serious overweight. Some people think that a solution can be to increase the price of fattening food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People hold different views about weight control. While a number of people believe that the most effective approach is raising the fare of fast meal. I, however, would argue that is is not a definite answer to this issue.

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