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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although compensation is thought as a must amid education system, others state that punishment is a better way to follow. This essay will examine both points of views and then I will explain why a recompense system bring stronger results.

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Some people think high-end technology can prevent and cut down the rate of committing crime. Do you agree or disagree?

In this techno-savvy era, technology is playing a crucial role in every field. That is the reason, the chunk of folks believes that advanced technology tends to reduce illegal activities. Likewise, I also strongly agree with it that by installing some technological equipment all over the places will beneficial to decrease the crime rate. This essay will discuss how it could be possible by introducing an alert app on phones and install security cameras in doubtful areas.

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Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think the school's rewarding system should be result-oriented, while others think that a student's effort should be valued more. While the former point of view focuses more on absolute attainment among all students the latter focuses more on a relative degree of an endeavour of each student individually. Both points of views will be thoroughly analysed and discussed before drawing a reasoned conclusion.

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Some people claim that family members are more important than friends. Do you agree or disagree?

Relationships are key to sustain life journey. It is stipulated that a few people insist that family members are more valuable instead of friends. In my opinion, I completely agree with the above inclination as family supports in the times of adversity and facilitates in the growth of children.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

Many people believe that it is essential for everybody to learn about their houses and place of work to be tidy and organised. As in my view, it actually represents the personality. Even, we can say it develops good habits in people.

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The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in the society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

At the present day and age, having an upscale technology device is like having the best of both worlds which I believe the pros far outweigh the drawbacks in using the internet as a communication tool.

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Some people think news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in newspapers and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the advent of information bombardment, more people read daily news as a hobby. Paradoxically, others see no relations between news and people’s lives, hence suggesting reading news would be consuming their time. This essay will discuss why I totally disagree with this proposition in terms of educational perspective.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Computers are in excessive usage in the modern world with its increasing demand and capability. The machine has been helping people attain goals which seemed unattainable previously and I completely agree on it being one of the relevant inventions since the past century.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Communication is a key to share feelings with each other, therefore it is necessary to know the common language. I completely disagree with this statement that living in abroad and having chat in an international language could create problems. This essay will put light on the points, which will further explain why I choose the disagreement side.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is suggested that; in future people could reach online books or newspaper without payment via the internet rather than buying printed ones. In my opinion,this view is completely wrong.

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

Parents throughout the world put rigorous efforts to get their offspring ready for their school. As part of this, most of them choose reading. Although many would argue that it helps the young acquaint better skills, I would strongly believe in other playful activities that aid in healthy progress. The benefits of this specific approach will be covered in this essay.

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Although many people value their public parks, this space could be used other purpose such as residential areas for over growing population or to develop business and boost economics. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

It is argued that public spaces can be used for construction to fulfil the increasing demands, but having public parks is also required to spend quality time. Therefore, I partially agree with this statement.

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Many people think technological devices such as smartphones, tablets, and mobile phones bring more disadvantages than advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technology gadgets are thought to have affected the way we live negatively. This essay disagrees that smart devices have several downsides that outweigh their benefits, explaining that easier connectivity and convenience are the main advantages.

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Teenage offenders should be treated in the same way as adult criminals. Do you agree?

The teenage years can be a wonderful yet difficult time in the lives of young people. Those teenagers who break the law during their teenage years need to be treated differently due to their age. This essay will argue for special treatment of teenage offenders. Some teenagers act impulsively and commit offences which they later regret.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But other believes that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they find the more interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

Some group of people think that for teenagers more important focus on all subjects at school, while others believe that more necessary to concentrate on lessons which interesting for youth. From my point of view, more correctly to spend time on a subject which individual will connect his or her life. In this essay, I shall elaborate on-topic further with reasons for both sides.

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Although many people value their public parks, this space could be used other purpose such as residential areas for over growing population or to develop business and boost economics. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Public parks and places have a great significance in the history of human life from the past decade. While the majority of people understand the value of these places, it cannot be neglected that some suggest it to be abandoned. I strongly believe that these places are much in need for us in the modern scenario like today.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people might argue that social networking sites have a positive impact on both individuals and society, while others not. I personally believe that these sites have a huge negative impact on society and individuals for several reasons.

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Prison is the best way punishment. Do you agree or disagree?

I strongly disagree with the idea that prison is the best way punishment for several reasons.

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The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Global health and the policy of governments regarding that is an important topic globally. Some believe that seeking for other forms of energy for replacing traditional ones is the number one priority worldwide. This essay will explain why I strongly agree with those.

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Scientists believe that the world is in danger due to environmental changes. Some people say that personal lifestyle changes should be made to reduce the damage to environment, while others think that the government should do something to help. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Researchers have the opinion that the earth is at risk because of environmental changes. Many people believe that changes in human habits and lifestyle are the best way to improve the ecological system; whereas, others think that this issue should be resolved by the authority. I believe that although the ministry should assist bring down the intensity of this impact to some extent, the major responsibility should be entrusted with the public.

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