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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 8.5

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Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world whether having a good salary or an enjoyable working environment has become a bone of contention. While a group of people believe that wealth is the major aspects to be considered others have the opinion that money cannot buy a person’s happiness. Although job satisfaction, as well as the income, are equally important, I personally feel that the payment offered should not be given utmost importance.

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Write about following topic In many countries today, crime novels and TV Crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is surprising to see, out of all the available genres and topic, movies directed and books written on crimes are exceptionally popular among people in many geographies. The essay will first suggest the active involvement, that is demanded from the audience, being the primary reason for such a mind-blowing success and it will then state that this phenomenon is only going to increase in time to come.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree and disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

In this present world, traffic congestions and amount of pollutant in the air is constantly on the rise. I agree that the rising prices of fossil fuels could tackle this issue. Analyzing the impact of increased petrol prices on people’s transportation habits will prove this. Moreover, I would suggest that promoting the utilization of electric bicycles is one of the measures that could be effective in diminishing those problems.

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Famous sportsmen often earn a lot more money than people in other professions. Although sport is important in our lives, everyone should be equal and such big incomes of sport professionals are unjustified. Do you agree or disagree

There is no doubt that salary packages play a significant role while choosing a profession. People have a different opinion on whether it is good to avail huge earnings for sporting personalities when compared with other workers. I strongly think that it is acceptable because they have a very short time period to make money, but they return it to society in the form of support and inspiration.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree

In this era of technological advancements, social media websites such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram etc. have imposed a deteriorating impact on our personal and social lives in terms of potential addiction of mobile phone and isolation from our society. I certainly agree with the aforementioned statement and shall provide the reasons for it.

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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibilities for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this constantly developing world, the hospitals, educational institutes and a country's GDP are the factors which are considered imperative for the progress of financially weak nations. Also, the developed countries must come together to support the struggling nations in these sectors. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement and will explain why in this essay.

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The best way to solve world’s environment problem is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree and give your own opinion

It is undeniable that environment degradation has become a common concern these days. Therefore, some people think that only possible solution to maintain the ecological balance is a high fuel rate. However, I slightly agree with the provided measure as other preventive measures could surely be put in practice in order to get rid of the concern. I personally believe that the above-mentioned solution is not sufficient as other ways are also required.

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Bering a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

In today’s society, the interest of the population to become a celebrity is increasingly evident. Although many might argue that this style of life brings money and high status, I considerably support the idea that its impact on an individual, in terms of lack of privacy and psychological problems, overweight its advantages.

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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

These days the act of shopping is considered as a major recreational activity. In contrast, earlier individuals considered shopping to be a chore. I personally opine that this changing trend cannot be considered completely positive.

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In some countries, shopping online is replacing shopping at stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development ? (approximately 250 words)

It is true that today more and more people do their purchases on the Internet instead of going to physical stores. I believe that such a trend can be both positive and negative.

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Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people are of the opinion that their own fondness in a career is more pivotal compared to its permanence, whereas others think it is better to get a stable occupation. This essay will elaborate more on both the mentioned beliefs and also show my perspective on this controversy.

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It is important to ensure that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the current civilization, school, which is formerly used only to gain knowledge, also can be used to be a meeting place for kids to interact with their friends. That might be the reason why some people think that it is important for the school to ensure children that come from different backgrounds and skills blend with their mates. In my point of view, I really agree with that statement. Therefore, in this essay, I will explain 2 reasons why I support that idea.

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Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

Environmental problems are increasing more and more and it is supposed to bring about stricter laws and limits by the government of all countries in order to compel companies and individuals to save natural resources. However, nothing is done and it allows people to not care about these issues. I agree that if the officials of each country set up tough penalties, the environmental problems would loosen all over the world.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In most of the developing countries, it has become increasingly common and important for residents to own an apartment as an investment and possession rather than rent a home in these regions. In the following essay, I will explain why I believe it is necessarily a positive situation to own a residence and why I agree with these types of expenditure.

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays it is possible to watch movies in many places, such as our smartphones, tablets, TVs and computers. With that in mind, some people believe that there is no need to go to the cinema anymore, while some argue that to have a full experience of the film, you must attend to the cinema. Whether they are right or wrong is a debatable question, however, I support the idea that this topic is mostly a personal matter.

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Some people agree with spending lots of money on a large wedding, while others believe it is a waste of money. What is your opinion?

Recent years have seen one of the conspicuous trends among the youngsters to get married lavishly -- which has become a moot point as of the majority of exponents believe it is money squandering. Notwithstanding, this disquisition delves into these both vantage points, and subsequently will explore my own perspective.

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Many believe that success in life mainly depends on hard work and determination while others believe that factors like money and personal appearance are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

On the way to success, some people suppose that hard work and determination are the keys to advance in career while others give prominence to money and appearance. Although I do not underrate the strength of wealth and beauty, I totally believe in the former opinion.

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Some people think that increasing business and cultural contacts is a positive trend, others think that it leads to a loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are conflicting views regarding whether economic and cultural communication between countries is beneficial. Both sides of the argument will be discussed in this essay, followed by my own perspective on this matter.

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Some people believe that cell phones have a negative effect on social lives. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, moving aboard is essential for everyone especially for the youngster. Mostly, young people believe that travel to other countries is giving different opportunities for their future and as well as they can explore different things. I completely agree with the above notion, as travelling to other countries are more beneficial to youngsters.

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Government spending on restoration of old buildings in cities should be stopped. Instead they should spend the money for housing and road development. Do you agree or disagree?

It is a debatable topic these days that whether the government should cease to expend their funds on the renovation of old structures or spend more money on the construction of new homes and improve the condition of roads. I strongly agree with the latter and points to bolster my opinion will be elucidated in the subsequent paragraphs.

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