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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this correspondence?

Some countries' traditions tell children that they can gain abilty to everything if they try hard enough. While this culter brings more disciplined children, it can also make them give up easily.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this correspondence?

In some traditions, children are told that as long as they work hard enough, they can achieve anything.While this approach has its advantages (like motivation to put in the effort and boost confidence) and disadvantages

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