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THE WORLD TODAY IS A SAFER PLACE THAN IT WAS A HUNDRED YEARS AGO, AND GOVERNMENT SHOULD STOP SPENDING LARGE AMOUNTS OF MONEY ON THEIR ARMED FORCES. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH STATEMENT?

It is an undeniable fact that, these days, everyone can go anywhere without worry of anything. If we go back about hundreds of years ago, then it was not safe as compared to now especially for the woman’s and children as
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The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent times, the globe is quite peaceful as compared to ancient times. A chunk of people believes that a lot of spending on armed forces by the government should be stopped. I firmly agree with the given statement. T
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The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is undeniable that there are less conflicts among the different countries compared to past and considering it, government should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. This disquisition will discu
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The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often argued that the safety of our world nowadays is the best since a long time ago and policymakers should not waste the state's money trying to build a great army. I completely agree with that opinion and think
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It is better to save money than spend it. How far do you agree with this statement? It saving more important than spending in today’s world?

Most peoples in current society tend to believe that saving is the most important thing while others believe that because the value of money has been deducted due to inflation thus we should spend all the money we earn f
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The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often assumed that the world of today is a place with few dangerous threats in comparison to that of a century ago, and a great deal of money should be stopped investing in the improvement of their military powers.
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It is better to save money than to spend it.How far do you agree with this statement.Is saving more important than spending in today's world.

It is often argued that,preserving finances is the proper way rather than disbursing them.I partially agree with this saying because reserving some cash is a good idea but then,it has to be dished out for essential purp
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It is better to save money than to spend it.How far do you agree with this statement.Is saving more important than spending in today's world

Saving money is vital for an individual and for a nation, while a number of people argue that reserving money is more beneficial than spending it. In my opinion, i agree with this notion as there are reasons why, in
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the world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and the governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Compared with the previous war conditions, the world seems to walk through the darkest time in history. I agree with the statements that the world today is a much safer place than it was a hundred years ago and the gover
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It is better to save money than to spend it. How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in today’s world? Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your own

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's globalized world is money. It is better to save money than to spend it. I am partially agreeing with this notion. I will delineate the rationales behind it in the ensuing par
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It is better to save money than to spend it. How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in today’s world? Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your own

In today's world, a large number of persons may be vulnerable to financial problems that occur on a daily basis. As a result, it is believed that saving a large amount of money is better than spend it. Saving money appea
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The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Every part of the world is evidently trying to seize and conquer the other developing nations to be superior. This intervenes the insured risk associated with every nation on the globe, that needs to have a constant chec
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The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Gone are the days when governments had to spend a hefty sum of money on the military forces to either intervene or to fight against the other country in the world war. Speaking of which throws light into other sensitive
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The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Because there were no major wars in the last 70 years or so, people have started debating whether governments should invest a lot of funds in defence or not. Some people argue that globalization and technological advance
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The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

By surveying of human history, it has obviously been observed that in the past, people and their governments suffered from a lot of difficult problems such as pandemic diseases, expanded poverty and famine as well as a w
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The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

By surveying human history, it has obviously been observed that in the past, people and their governments suffered from a lot of difficult problems such as pandemic diseases, expanded poverty and famine as well as a wid
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It is better to save money than spend it. How far do you agree with this statement? It saving more important than spending in today’s world?

There is no doubt that in this day and this age, the majority of youngsters are often faced with problems in managing money. It seems to me that saving money is a judicious choice compared to squander it, and I will inte
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It is better to save money than to spend it. How far do you agree with this statement. Is saving more important than spending in today’s world.

In contemporary times, the number of citizens may prone to financial issues which regularly take place on a daily basis. Therefore, it is argued that storing a great deal of income better than we spend it. It seems to me
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It is better to save money than to spend it. How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in today’s world?

Nowadays, the economy was declined significantly in the stage of the covid-19 epidemic so we are faced with the income. It seems to me that saving money is a judicious decision and I will explain the reasons in this essa
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The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The world is now safer place than it was a century ago. Therefore, governments should not waste vast amount of money on their armed force. It is indisputable that security of people in each region is one of the main fact
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