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The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world, especially in this era of technology. Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics. How much can we trust the journalists?

Today, with the power of internet , we can easily get access to the latest world news.You can search up about anything .Even though , there are a lot of journalists around the world who are good at their work , people still can’t trust the news with journalists found out.
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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.

New house building is required in many nations, but the land to construct them is available in the villages only.Some people could say that it´s better to protect this rural area to stop the environmental damage, and that there are other ways to provide new homes.Personally, I totally agree with protecting the rural area and think there are tons of possibilities to supply this new housing necesity.
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Developed countries have created many environmental problems. What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?".

It is argued by many people that the production of people has a negative affect to environment which make the climate become more polluted. so this essay will illustrate some solution to deal with this problem
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Some people believe that online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed material should be used discuss both views and give your opinion

To embark upon, there are myriad reasons which cited that online classes can be detrimental for children. The most preponderant one is that online training may effect on pupil's eyes. However, children become habitual and lazy. Therefore e-Learning may have physical Side Effects as well as mental. Apart from that, young generation are more inclined towards video games and Gadgets. By this, they get distracted from online sites. Hence, children are not able to concentrate on reading materials. For instance, recent scientific research by Indian government demonstrated that between the age of 10 to 15 kids spend most of the time in front of computer screen as later it may cause many health problems.
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Some people think teaching children with different abilities together benefits everyone, others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

According to some, stydying together have a positive affection on children, even if kids have a various abilities for studying. Whereas some consider that kids ought to be divided in classes by their mental capacities. This essay will discuss a positive and negative aspects of both views.
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In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence.

In a competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. It still alright. When the man and the woman stay at home to teach the children and make food, clean and decorate the house. But some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. The second I think is true. Because if the children 's parents usually work and work, make more and more money and don't care for tem...
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The news media have to much influence on people's lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

The more developed technology become, the more widespread of news media we have. The advanced news media has aroused a source of controversy that whether news media bring to much adverse effect on the world’s development. Speaking from myself, I am not completely conviced with this point of view.
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Friendships have become more important than family relationships.

In contrast, some people think that friendship is more important as it is short lasting.We can make friendship with your classmates, colleagues at school and office. However, when we graduate or change our job, the friendships can be ended. Secondly, the distance of generations in family can create different thinking. Therefore, it is believed that friends can understand us better than family members. Becauses of the same ages, we can have them same feeling with our friends. Moreover, to some people, making friends is a new world, they can have many good experience time, learn and explore many challenges. Finally, we often have a thought that our family members are always at home to wait for us while it is arduous to have good friends. This makes us think that friendship is more important than family relationship.
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In modern era, it is easy to sell, buy and work with other people through internet. But others against it. Do you think this is positive trend or negative trend.

In parametric approach is a two step process and first a function form is assumed. Whereas no assumption is made in the non-parametric approach. Parametric approach reduces the problem of estimating the function to a few parameters, which simplifies the problem.Where as in non-parametric approach we try to find an estimate of the function that is very close to the actual data points as possible.
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Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school some people believe that this has negative development while others think there are some benefits Discuss both views and give your opinion

Many people are now spending more and more time travelling to work or school some people believe that this has negative development while others think there are some benefits Discuss both views and give your opinion
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why do you want to go to tomujin alternative high school?

At my current school I just write down what does my teacher said and copy- paste the text book. When I got back from school all I do was those assignments and the homework they assigned. Finally when I studied all day long I went to bed. That was my entire school routine since 7th grade. I don’t want to waste my whole high school year just copying and calculating. I do want to follow my passion and learn new things. And I hope Tomujin alternative high school will help me to become empowered and give me an skills that will be need in my life.
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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons to your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.

Children is known as the future of us, so that the education for children is one of the most norable aspects.
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n many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

It's irrefutable that with the massive growth of population whole world need more habitant places and shelter for humans,But due to this residential area are getting smaller and many people advised to build house in remote area,where more space available than cities,while others argue that it's totally against the environment and not a right step. Although both sides have their own perspective but house can be constratuced with some guidelines and without temperament of nature.
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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons tp your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.

Competition and cooprate sound like two different worlds but it both represent an action that aim to finish or pass something. In a learning enviroment, competitive is a way for children to impove themselves, aim to be best a objective that you can follow. Not because it good to compete each other meaning you can do anything to win that is the other meaning to teach children when they were rousy. As a parent, they want to teach their children a way to survive, a way to live without hurting ...
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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.

This issue has caused wide public concern about keeping family animals would have a good environment for kids to grow up. On the contrary , someone believed that may affect children safe and their health problems. In my opinion , children receive substantive psychological benefits through having pets.
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Some people say international sports events help in world peace. Do you agree or disagree?

Peaceful environment is considered as vital achievement of mankind and states itself. Peace is seen as societal friendship between people. As stress make human kind sick and feeble, it also wreaks havoc in states. That is why nations try to make peace in all cases.
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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is suggested by some people that music is the efficient way of bringing various ages of groups and cultures together. However , I would partially agree with this statement because not in all cases various cultures and age groups may join together due to music.
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Potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European country 1976-2006

The line graph represents the data about potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European nation in unit of grams from 1976 to 2006.
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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online ?

Nowadays it can be seen that number of people who prefer buying online are increasing .there are many advantages but also many disadvantage too
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The two maps illustrated that the major developments which have been taken place in the city of Castellon during the years of 2000 and today.
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