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Some people think that rich countries should support poor countries in terms of aid for health care and education. To what extend do you agree?

Many people believe that rich countries should support poor countries in terms of aid for health care and eduction . I completely agree with this view and will explain my reasons below .
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The plans below show how an office building was converted to a dental clinic. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two layouts give a breakdown of how an office structure was converted to a dental clinic. Overall, while the recent buildings remain the same structure, there were added new facilities.
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In some countries an increasing number of children are overweight as a result of eating too much fast food. It is necessary for governments to ban selling this kind of food in schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this essay. I will discuss the bad impact of fast food on the childrens weight and i add my personal opinion .
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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree¿

It is often argued that huge salary is much more important than job satisfaction.The writer disagrees with the statement and reasons for this will be elaborated in subsequent paragraphs.
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in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Comparing with the development of the countries‘ economic，estate becoming one of the supporting colomn in this experience.But the negative infflunce is the prices of the estates become more and more expensive. So,owning a home or renting one becoming a seriously question for people to consider,especially for the young.
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n some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Comparing with the development of the countries‘ economic，estate becoming one of the supporting colomn in this experience.But the negative infflunce is the prices of the estates become more and more expensive. So,owning a home or renting one becoming a seriously question for people to consider,especially for the young.
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*In the last 20years, there has been significant development in the field of information technology (IT), for example in World wide web and communication by email. However these development in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive in the future.* *To wat extent do you agree with this view* *Give reasons for your answer and give any example from your own experience or knowledge*

I don't agree with the topic. Because, Although there is more a cheater or anything like that, IT give us more positive in our life. Like before there is email or telephone in this word we use a mail, the mail it will take longer time to reach the destination. When the IT get a development, the world can use an Email and telephone, this technolgy help us to make a efficient time than a convensional mail. We can give an email to other people in a far destination with more efficient time. The development in IT make us to save the time to make or develop something new. Beside that IT can make us to develop something like a car, military vehicle, electronic gadget, and many more. Because that I don't agree with the topic, like I say before development in IT is have more positive effect than a negatif effect.
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High school should allow the students to study the courses that the students wanted to study.” Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

I am not agree with this topic, the reason why am I disagree with this topic is when the student only study the courses they can't develop they self to make a better life. If they only choose what they want and don't want choose risk or try other courses they doesn't like it can't make they develop. They must try another courses that they not even try, if they have try all courses they must have a self development class and guide from teacher to help the student choose or think what major that they want. But if they had choose the major they still must study the courses that they want and the important courses like mathematic, english, local language, an history. The Important things that They need is guidance and direction from teacher and they parent's. Student and teacher must have a collaboration to make the student develop to a good things.
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Scientists have been warning for many years about protecting the environment and that people must limit the use of energy in their daily lives. Despite warnings, many people do not do so. What are the reasons for this and how can people be encouraged to protect the environment?

People have been warned of protection the environment and daily energy use should be limited. However, the public ignores the warnings.
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The internet has changed the world. Many people think it has solved everything, while others believe it has caused problems. Give the advantages and disadvantages of the internet.

The internet has changed the way people live today. It has many good points and many bad points. Many people believe one of the other. This essay will examine both the advantages and disadvantages of the internet.
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Many young people leave school with negative attitudes towards learning. What are the causes？How to encourage young people to study？

Learning is the main reason for development of schools across the world, sadly many young people dropout due to negative attitudes. This is caused by lack of interest and a possible method to encourage them it highlight the benefits of learning.
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In some contries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think is a postitive or negative situation ?

Owning a home is a better option compared to renting a home for some countries. This might happened due to a lot of considerations and may not valid in every countries. First thing first, owning a home is cheaper than renting a home for a long-term period. But this option also requires you to have an initial modal to acquisite a property.
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5 months ago, you started renting an apartment on a 6 month agreement. Now you wish to stay for longer than 6 months you originally agreed with the owner.

I am XYZ, residing in your apartment for last 5 months. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have decided to extend our agreement from 6 to 12 months till March 2026. Hence, I request you to kindly extend the lease.
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Some people prefer working from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

It is often argued that working from home has more benefits than working in person, and this essay will discuss both points of views.
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some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time.this can benefit teenagers and the community as well.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that youngsters should be required to do voluntary work in their leisure time as it is beneficial to the community and teenagers as well.The writer strongly agrees with this notion and the essay will elaborate of the reasons why this is so.
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Practice 1: These days, the wealhty in society often throw away perfectly good products in order to replace them with more up-to-date models. Do the environmental disadvantages of this development outweigh the economic advantages?

Nowadays, the consumption of up - to - date models products often well - liked by the wealthy, in contrast, perfectly good commodities are being threw away. It is my belief that the environmental disadvatages could certainly offset the economic benefits.
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Many people believe that healthy eating and the importance of healthy food should be taught in schools. Others say that parents should teach their children about healthy food and diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion with relevant examples.

Many people believe that healthy eating and the importance of healthy food should be taught in schools. Others say that parents should teach their children about healthy food and diet. I think both isssue is important to talk, bacause every schools must taught this topic or issue to their students, and parent must teach their child to diet and eat healthy food. Every student or child must now what and why they must eat healthy food. Why we must talk about this issue, because this issue is important for people to know. Because many childern or people have a problem with healthy lifestyle and healthy food to eat. Healthy food is important for us if we want have a healthy life. If we always eat junk food or food like that you can have a bad lifestyle and bad body to look. Although junk food is have better taste than healthy food, but heathy food give us more nutritions, or anythink that important for our body
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In many contries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What do you think the reasons for this? How can it be solved?

So many individuals suffer from health issues caused by destructive lifestyle. I deem the reason is deep and the problem can be solved. There many unhealthy people with variety of diagnoses due to the poor ways of living the life. The main reason is the irresponsibility to their own body. For instance, lack of healthy food caused by eating cheap and junk food since not everyone able to afford special diet required by their need. Next, absence of sport - nowadays due to the increase of the demand for smartphones and widely using social networks such as instagram and tiktok, people became lazy and there is no place for gym in their lifes. But, the issue can be solved if government would take into account and start to agitate people to commence sport, there is a a little hope that people are able to improve their sick lifestyle and become more all right.
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Topic 99: Although it is generally prohibited, corporal punishment persists in many families. Do you think corporal punishment is an acceptable way to regulate children’s behaviours?

The line graph illustrates the number of members for varios activities at the specific social centre in Melbourne, Australia from 2000 to 2020. Overall, the majority of participants preferred film club, while music perfomances showed the lowest indicators in the period 2000 to 2010. From 2000 to 2005, all categories remained stable. Film club had revealed the biggest number, which is about 65, while martial arts were half as much. Participants showed the lowest interes to music perfomances and table tennis, which are 0 and roughly 16, respectively. From 2005 to 2015, Amateur dramatics showed sharp decrease and crossed table tennis in 2010, which is 20 participants. Martial arts and film club maintained almost the same levels, whereas musical perfomances experienced significant increase, at about 15. From 2015 to 2020, Amatuer dramatics continued to fall, in contrast to table tennis, which number catched up film club. By 2020, martial arts and musical perfomances was chosen by 35 and...
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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that outside of school, young ones should be free to enjoy their lives because it is the only time they be allowed not to have responsibility. while, I like many people subscribe to the notion that boys and girls should take up extra responsibility because this helps them build decipline in them.
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