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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is suggested by some people that music is the efficient way of bringing various ages of groups and cultures together. However , I would partially agree with this statement because not in all cases various cultures and age groups may join together due to music.
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Potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European country 1976-2006

The line graph represents the data about potatoes, pasta and rice eaten in a European nation in unit of grams from 1976 to 2006.
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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online ?

Nowadays it can be seen that number of people who prefer buying online are increasing .there are many advantages but also many disadvantage too
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The two maps illustrated that the major developments which have been taken place in the city of Castellon during the years of 2000 and today.
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some people say that what children watch influences their behavior. Others believe that amount of time they spend on television influences their behavior most

While it is true that watchings TV affects children, it is hard to determine it is whether the length of watching time or the content of programs has more effects on youngsters. Although I believe that the time spent watching TV has negative impacts on young people, I think the content of programs has more marked influences on them.
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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The plans illustrate the existing and future-planned layout of a university’s sports centre.
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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is considered by some people that graduating from university is the optimum solution to find a good job. While others having experience and communication skills, help them to secure their work. . In this essay ,I will discuss Which is more important, a degree or skills
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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Animals are living organisms therefore they too have emotions and feelings means that they should not be exploit by any way.
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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy same products anywhere in the world Is this positive development or negative?

It is certainly true that in this modern world everything is available everywhere as a result,dissimilarities between nations are getting vague.In my opinion, this is a completely positive development by providing more options to shop,boost to the economy and harmony between people.
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Some People Think That Job Satisfaction Is More Important Than Job Security. Others Think That People Cannot Expect To Enjoy A Job And Having A Permanent Job Is More Important. Discuss Both Views And Give Your Opinion.

It is observed that, human being has different belief about job satisfaction and security of their work. According to some individuals, gratification from hob weighty than job security, others believe that always enjoyable work is difficulty and better to have a permanent job. Both the views will be given below in paragraphs.
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The population of most cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities. What problems does overpopulation in cities cause? How can these problems be solved?

It is often said that that cities are the best place where people are able to live properly with their family members and run their business. Many people are moving countries side to cities for finding work and new opportunities. Due to this, the population is growing in urban areas day by day. It creates many quandaries, which I would like to explain and add certain solutions of over population in the below paragraphs.
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The line graph illustrates the temperatures in Paris, Boston and Melbourne every month.
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It is known to all that the technological and scientific advances have made greater changes to the range and quality of our food. some people regard it as an improvement while others believe that change is harmful?

It is true that knowledge based on technology and scientific breakthroughs have improved variety and standart of diet. Although many people consider it as a negative development, I believe that advantages outweigh disadvantages. On the other hand, there are several reasons why these improvements can be considered as a positive .The first one is that the production of food is likely to become perfect and last longer, thus leading to the increase in the quality and usability of product. Addit...
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in some countries many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past . do you think this is a positive or negative development?

People who live in industrialiesd and developed country prefer to live alone more than the ones who live in traditional country. Living alone specialy in young generation feels kind of independency and getting enough mature to handle life and accept life responsibility. For example, in western country after age of 18 , individuals leave parental home and start the new life, and it will help them to learn how to manage the life and learn how to face the problems. However, these means of accaumodation is not always positive as the people getting married and establish a family.
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Write a paragraph about a store/business that you love to shop. Online text

Everyone of us loves to shop, right? And everyone has a store that they love and often buy there. And me too, I often buy cosmetics at the Nami cosmetics. Its address is in Danang city. Many types of cosmetics are sold here and they are imported from many different countries such as France, Korea, Japan ... But mainly the store specializes in selling genuine Korean cosmetics. Nami cosmetics is located right on the main road so it's easy to find. Briefly speaking about the appearance, the space in the store is very spacious and airy, the layout is very eye-catching. At this point, you will be consulted carefully by professional staff to choose the right product for your skin. Nami always has samples so we can check first and decide whether to buy or not.
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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowdays Computers are basic element of our lifes, they are excessively used in daily routine which includes our profession, enjoyment and even for entertainment. In my opinion, Information Technology has many is good for society. Let's discuss about its merits and demerits.
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Recently, many people know a few of their neighbors. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and any example from your own experience.

In the current era of modernisation, people are losing interest in knowing the next-door neighbour. This is a growing problem in urban and rural areas alike. This paragraph will deal with the possible reasons and solutions to this situation.
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Paln a below show health center in 2005 .paln b show the same place in present day.

The given image represent an overall change of health center from 2005 until present day.
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Some people believe that modern innovations bring a lot more problems than benefits. Do you agree or disagree ?

According to the essay, I explained how the latest innovations are important to the medical field. Also mentioned above is how the new generation can join the modern innovation and help the country. Also we have discussed how nature can be useful to people who are working on modern innovation. And it has further increased, how people's relationships and relationships between people and society are growing with modern innovations.
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Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind the bars. To what extent do you agree?

In olden days there is no jail and the concept of police station. Criminals used to get punishment on the spot by assigning some works around their villages.
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