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Recent research has confirmed that human activity has become the greatest threat to plant and animal life Why do you think this has happened? How can we reduce our impact on the natural world?

In the recent research, Tt has been proved that human activities creates major problems to plant and animal life. This essay will first suggest that one of the problem caused by people was construction of industries in forest area and amend regulation law as the most viable solution .The essay further discusses the problems and solutions associated with that.
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Many high-level positions in company are filled by men ,even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 60 per cent for women companies shoub be required to allocate a certain percentage if these positions for women. for what extened do you agree with that

Most people argue that high-level positions in companies have a male predominance, just because they are males. On the contrary, a lot of successful companies nowadays are led by women. Putting a law in action to allocate a certain amount of manegerial positions to women is something I won't be in favour of.
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Most countries allow 18 years old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should at least 25 years old. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. Write at least 250 words.

Some people think that any citizen who reaches the age of 18, he/she will be capable of holding driving license and can drive a vehicle on his/her own. Others think that it’s too early to allow those youth to drive and they can’t be permitted to drive unless they become 25 years old at least.
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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

As you are the listed contact of customer service for Homegrown Fabrics, I write to you regarding an incomplete delivery of order number Z111-563-90. Last friday, I placed an order for a hand woven silk scarf and a silk tie through the website of your company. The order was delivered today, but to my surprise the box was missing the bow tie.
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Many families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some that families moving to other countries in search for greener pastures can give advantages to children. However, others disagree. In my own opinion, I believe that children can benefit more to immigration.
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Formal examination are a way to get student performance. Many people think that course work and project are important. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Hand written examination is not only the mode to check pupils performance but assessment such as course work and projects are also very crucial . I partially agree with the given statement and following paragraphs will discuss both views
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some people work for the same organisation all their working life others think that it is better to work for different organisation

The bar chart illustrates the proportions of academic staff percentages in faculties by gender in 2012.
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People eat more processed food than they did in the past. Why is this? What are the effects of this?

People are eating more ready made food than they did many years ago. This is because of hectic lifestyle and many are more career oriented than in the past. By having processed food, it can cause health related issue.
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Nowadays most big cities have high congestion and rood traffic issues. What are the real causes for this? Suggest a solution that will help to relieve it.

The most problematic issues in metropolis is related to traffic congestion. Why is this happening, and, tackling what procedure can assist?
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Many people today used their phones to communicate by sending text messages than talking. What are the reasons for this? Does it has advantages/disadvantages?

Nowadays, the application of phones has been changed significantly sending text messages more than talking. It is necessary to know the root causes of this trend in order to tackle its impacts effectively. There are some reasons why today's people prefer to use text messaging more than dialing the phones. The obvious explanation is the easy way to contact each other with a very cheap price. Another factor is the scarcity of time to m...
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overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle this problem

Overpopulation is the biggest problem that many metropolitan around the world are facing. It causes huge problems to urban area, both in physical and social aspects so it should to have mitigation to solve this problem which I will suggest in this essay below.
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Some people believe that lessons on becoming a good parent should be included in school curriculum. Others think that it is not essential for students. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

People have different perceptions towards the topics to be included in school curriculum. Some propose that it is better to teach students about the course of parenting while others oppose and argue that it is a waste of time. There are firm reasons why students should be taught to be a good parent. If the young people have the knowledge regarding the best measures ofnurturing a child, it will bring tremendous advantages to the indiv...
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Some people say the best way to discourage smoking is to make smoking illegal on public places. Other people say that this is not enough and other measures are needed. Discuss both views and give tour own opinion.

Today more than ever the health problems are becoming extremely urgent. There is no secret that smoking, as on the most popular bad habbits, causes a number of diseases such as lungs cance, heart attacks and others. As goverments have been struggling with this issue for many years, the problem solution question remains: how to make people give it up?
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. Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion

A few peoplelike to buy new technological gadgets such as phones and laptops. This is a positive development as it broadens the knowledge of people and bridhes the generation gap. These points are disscussed in detail in upcoming paragraphs.
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There have been major advances in technology over the recent decades and this has led to significant improvement in people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In the last decades, technology evolved considerably, bringing positive impacts in the lives of people. I believe that technology brought good changes to peoples daily lives, such as more comfortable and health, and furthermore in communication and transport methods.
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What is your opinion about how people are working over hours and not enjoying their life?

Human endeavour towards their sense of happiness is oftenly mis-measured in comparison to welfare and health. The post-modern society has strived for evolution in terms of technology and science. However, this effort in order to solve world issues or facilitate daily life, might be consuming the wellness and innovating problems instead.
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Schools do not teach young people knowledge to look after their health. Do you agree with this opinion?

Some people believe that schools do not give enough importance to teach health-related topics. I certainly disagree with the statement as teachers design the school curriculum in such a manner that it covers maximum content on health.
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Missions to explore space are hugely expensive, and there are problems on Earth which demand attention. The number of these missions needs to be reduced.

Nowadays, Space Exploration are becoming popular because of growing technology and greater enhancements in advanced tools. For many countries, especially developed and under developed nations are allocating more budget to study solar system in depth. However there are both pros and cons for spending money on this. I will completely agree that this missions should be continued further to improve technology to a greater extent or next level.
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It is more important for school children to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I agree, to the point of kids learning the local history first, rather than international. There may be many factors for the reason, but few of them are discussed in the latter part of the story.
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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

There is currently a contentious argument over whether the leap of cyber-shopping will be one day replaced all the retail stores. I agree with this opinion because they are time savers and more convenient for shoppers.
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