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Some people think it is important for all children to learn history in school. Others believe that other subjects are more relevant to children’s lives today. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

On the one hand, focusing on studying history would explore their eyes and acquire some knowledge for children. This is because they can know some great achievements for some history books and use them after modifying slightly. For example, children can learn and use some mathematic formulas from some history books about math when they answer some kinds of questions. If they research these formulas personally rather than use them straightly, it will waste them a lot of time.
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Some people believe that young people should spend their free time with family rather than go to entertainment activities outside the house. Some disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are certain people who thinks that youngsters should spend leisure time with their family instead of going outside for activities which are more exciting. However others believe that youngster should go outside for fun. In my opinion, spending quality time with family members and going out with friends both are equally important.
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some people think that money is best gift for teenagers. others disagree. Discuss both there views and give your opinion

In 21st century, money is gift for any age people, not limited to only teenagers. Lot's of people think that money is the best things for youngsters, but all people not agree with it. This essay will describe why money is important for youngsters.
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Many people today used their phones to communicate by sending text messages than talking. What are the reasons for this? Does it has advantages/disadvantages?

In this present world, the usage of technology is constantly on the rise. Even classrooms are among the many places that enjoy the usage and benefits of technology. It is disagreed that classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Analysing the incapability of disciplining classroom students with technology, as well as the limitation in the learning process of students taught with technology will prove this. Firstly, a robotic teacher made with artificial intelligence would lack sufficient control over its classroom students. For instance, it is widely known that kids need to be thoroughly watched by their teachers to be sure that they take their class works seriously and do not fool around when classes are going on. Sadly, this is a task robotic teachers will be incapable of carrying out. Therefore, this makes it clear that classroom teachers will never be totally substituted for technology. Secondly, the learning process of students would be disrup...
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Early technological developments brought more benefits and changes to people’s life than the recent technological developments. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technological development has taken a center stage in our lives. Human existence is so dependent on it that one cannot fanthom life without it. It is my opinion that recent technogical developments have been more beneficial than earlier ones. Recent innovations have totally changed the way we transact business and even how nations war with each other.
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Increasing taxes would raise prices and lower consumption.

Increasing taxes would raise prices and lower consumption. Fast food companies would pass on these taxes to consumers in the form of higher prices and this would lead to people not being able to afford junk food. For instance, the cost of organic food has proven prohibitively expensive for most people. Despite this, people in many developed countries, where the problem is most acute, can afford price hikes and will continue to eat high-fat meals.
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Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic ability or others believe that it is a better to have a student with the different abilities study together discuss both the views and give your opinion

Education is a very essential part of students life because education is a first step of career many people think that students with a various educational abilities are better to do study in the same class however other believes that school should choose a student's according to the educational level but I strongly support the idea of a student with the different ability are more impact.
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why should you learn another language apart from english

I read with great interest your article last month about "it's useless to know another foreign language than English". Today I write you as a language teacher. I was very surprised by the turn of your article.
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Some people believe that subjects such as Music, Arts, Drama and Creative Writing will contribute a great deal to children’s development; therefore they should take a large part of the school timetable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is an irrefutable fact that Education is the most vital part in a child’s development. Many people opine that the disciplines such as art, music, drama and creative writing largely contribute to the holistic development of a child. This essay will agree to this statement and provide arguments in its favour.
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Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the worlds fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, travelling by flight Is not preferred by some individuals due to air contamination and exhaustion of the universe fuel resources . Therefore they think travelling by air should be minimized while others believe otherwise.In my opinion, commuters should be encouraged to travel by air while moving from one place to the other, to reduce tiredness of the body and less accidents , which is experienced while travelling by road.
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Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The gifts, which are given, depend on ages of the receiver such as toys for children and dresses for old lady. Moreover, some people believe that the best gifts for teenagers are money. On the contrary, others people disagree. I strongly agree with the statement and discuss both points of view.
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Tourism is increased in many countries. Does tourism brings more advantages or disadvantages to a country

I am writing this letter to discuss about an online training on the Spring Framework. This course is available on edutech website, Udemy. The program taught by the reputed professor Steven Smith, who is also regarded as the father of Spring Framework.
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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the modern era, People are having abundant options is the view of the few persons. In this essay will discuss about the positive and negative impacts in detail. In my opinion, the Universe is witnessing a huge number of alternatives.
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Recent research has confirmed that human activity has become the greatest threat to plant and animal life Why do you think this has happened? How can we reduce our impact on the natural world?

In the recent research, It has been proved that human activities create major problems to plant and animal life. This essay will first suggest that one of the problems caused by people was construction of industries in forest area and amend regulation law as the most viable solution .The essay further discusses the problems and solutions associated with that.
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Recent research has confirmed that human activity has become the greatest threat to plant and animal life Why do you think this has happened? How can we reduce our impact on the natural world?

In the recent research, Tt has been proved that human activities creates major problems to plant and animal life. This essay will first suggest that one of the problem caused by people was construction of industries in forest area and amend regulation law as the most viable solution .The essay further discusses the problems and solutions associated with that.
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Many high-level positions in company are filled by men ,even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 60 per cent for women companies shoub be required to allocate a certain percentage if these positions for women. for what extened do you agree with that

Most people argue that high-level positions in companies have a male predominance, just because they are males. On the contrary, a lot of successful companies nowadays are led by women. Putting a law in action to allocate a certain amount of manegerial positions to women is something I won't be in favour of.
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Most countries allow 18 years old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should at least 25 years old. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. Write at least 250 words.

Some people think that any citizen who reaches the age of 18, he/she will be capable of holding driving license and can drive a vehicle on his/her own. Others think that it’s too early to allow those youth to drive and they can’t be permitted to drive unless they become 25 years old at least.
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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

As you are the listed contact of customer service for Homegrown Fabrics, I write to you regarding an incomplete delivery of order number Z111-563-90. Last friday, I placed an order for a hand woven silk scarf and a silk tie through the website of your company. The order was delivered today, but to my surprise the box was missing the bow tie.
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Many families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some that families moving to other countries in search for greener pastures can give advantages to children. However, others disagree. In my own opinion, I believe that children can benefit more to immigration.
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Formal examination are a way to get student performance. Many people think that course work and project are important. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Hand written examination is not only the mode to check pupils performance but assessment such as course work and projects are also very crucial . I partially agree with the given statement and following paragraphs will discuss both views
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