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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should, therefore, be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Role of computers in contemporary era is considered crucial. Many notion that, computers should be used for teaching purposes. However, other argue dependency on computer is detrimental to students. In my opinion, positive and negative aspects are equal in measure.
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Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that both low and high income families struggle to access college. I completely disagree with this fact and I believe that members from poor families find it harder to get a higher education for various reasons.
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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

As it is seen in the recent times, global warming has proven to be one among the serious issues which leads to permanent damage to the world. The main causes for such a mishap is deforestation, cattle overgrazing, air pollution and so on.However, the Government should impose strict laws in order to cut down the emission rate from vehicles which contribute the most to global warming.
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The two datas illustrate the proportion of various types of causes affecting land degradation in the world. Overall, the most significant reasons is over-grazing in worldwide. However, if we separate from different regions, they will not totally be the same. It was indicated that each region had a special majority of land degradation during the 1990s.
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Nowadays many scientists and tourists would like to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Technology is increasing rapidly and scientists are doing some invention to travel to remote places, such as south pole. There are many advantages and disadvantages of this development.
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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Nowadays, Almost all the countries are facing the issue not only related to environment but also population and education. Even my country, have at present and are going to face the same, in next ten years.
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There have been a major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Owing to the developments in technical knowledge over the period of years, man has been a major beneficiary of this innovation. This essay will agree that new technologies has brought more help to humans in communication and health.
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Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. What do you think is the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

In a recent survey conducted by times magazine states that shopping is the most famous pass time for youngsters. In my opinion, shopping is the convienient and intersting leisure activity that is why more youngsters are attracted to it. If the shopping is controled or with in the budget then it is a positive development.
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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, Few animals are at the edge of extinction, because of human actions. There may be lots many of reasons and important of them are discussed below.
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in a place where one speaks in his mother tongue rather than the requirement can be problematic. It is incompatible with life in an area where one say things which others can't understand, or one can't get what others say. One should adapt according to the environment, by learning a language which is spoken by the majority in a specific country.
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Some people believe bicycles have a lot of advantages, whereas others believe bicycles have more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the salad days of millennium, the society is polarised into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that whether riding cycles have more benefits or drawbacks. Diffraction people have their distinct mindset. The following paragraph would shed light on both the approaches and draw a conclusion.
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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, environment protection has become major concerned in public. There are some people think that individual people can do nothing to protect the environment its only government and big companies responsibilities to protect the environment and make a difference. I think that every individual do a lot of things to protect the environment.
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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, environment protection has become major concerned in public. There are some people think that individual person can do nothing to protect the environment its only government and big companies responsibilities to protect the environment and make a difference. I think that every individual do a lot of thing to protect the environment.
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Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think that it can be harmful for children. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued by some people that children should not work, while others say it is an advantage for them. This essay will discuss both, the advantages and disadvatages of the two arguments, and will conclude that advantages outweigh the drawbacks.
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Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. What do you think is the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years, shopping has become favourite pass time for most millennials. Youngsters can be seen in malls and markets all over the weekends. Steep decrease in prices of consumer goods, and easy of availability are the top contributors of this trend. Conventional leisure activities like playing sports, pursuing hobbies, family get togethers have taken a seat back.
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In many countries smoking in now illegal in public places. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that smoking is being be banned in common places particularly in bus stops, shopping malls in many parts of the world. This essay agrees with the statement because it affects the passive smokers and considered as bad behaviour.
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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Major issues, that most of the countries are encountering, are related to environment, population and education. Even in my country, we are facing the same issues. We are going to discuss regarding the same in the later part.
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In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

nowadays, the Smoking is an serious issue. Most of the countries made it legal, to smoke at public places. Will discuss the pros and cons in the later part.
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overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle this problem

In the last decade, increasing number of city residents has contributed to various problems. Although, these problems can be hard to tackle with, there are some solutions that can be undertaken by government and individuals themselves.
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Teenagers should not be allowed to use mobile phones in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the use of mobile phones by adolescents in schools should be prohibited. This essay agrees with this statement because they use of mobile phone is a source of distraction to students during classes and also creates unnecessary competition amongs these children in the school. These reasons given will further be discussed in the following paragraphs.
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