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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main reasons of it? How can we deal with the possible causes?

We have seen a colossal rise in the density of crimes and in recent years, it has become a moot issue. This essay will discuss the main factors that are responsible for inducing offences and will also put forward some solutions for this perennial problem.
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Many people expect that the proportion of old people will be more than the young people in the future. Do you think it is positive or negative development?

It is anticipated that in the future, the rate of retired people will be more than the young people. while many people think it will have positive effects, i claim that this development will have negative influences on the society.
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Some people say that failure is proof that the desire wasn't strong enough. To what extent do you agree with this statement.

Needless to say, success and failure is a part of people's life. Some people believe that, this is because they do not have aspirations up to the mark. I totally disagree with the notion. The parameters which are really responsible for that, is, lack of interest and wrong selection of goals.
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The information below gives details about household income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in one UK city in 2010 and 2013.

The table shows household income and expenditure on food and clothes in an average family in one UK city in 2010 and 2013, together with 2 pie charts giving more details on the spending areas, broken down into 5 groups: fruits and vegetables, meat and fish, dairy products, other food and drinks and finally clothes.
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In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most of the modern employers hire mostly experienced workers rather than people who have academic knowledge about the certain field that employer’s need. If this hiring method will continue soon there will be no need for formal certificates, qualification and so on. Personally I partly agree with this statement because even if workers have experience they may not have general knowledge about their field.
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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people have demand for a salary. On the basis of the education and experience individual expect. No doubt, it is one of the important factor of life, but it is also necessary to work in a good environment this is most important.
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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. (Discuss both these views and give your opinion).

Some people think that children are born with talents able to be professionals, while another groups assumed kids with no talents also survive as profesionals. The arguments both for and against children become profesionals with talents will be discussed in this essay.
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air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. The ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, travelling by planes has been considered as a convenient commuting method around the world. While some people believe that only wealthy people can afford this mean of travelling, I strongly believe that general population can also be beneficial from flying.
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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

These days people are becoming less interesting in reading in general ,and especially newspaper .No matter which country they came from they mostly prefer to use the internet .
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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

School is an organization where the children are sent to lean and eduacte themselves for a better future. In most of the countries from the age of six to nineteen children go to academies for their educational purposes.
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People living in large cities face several problems. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller towns?

Residents of urban cities come across wide range of problems in day to day life such as water scarcity, traffic and so on. I do strongly agree that government on its part government should cheer people spreading out to decongest the urban areas.
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computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion

As part of the school lessons, computers are playing an important role in each lesson and becoming the requirement. In my opinion, it is beneficial to students instant access to information on almost any subject. However, they get distraction easily by social media and computer gaming.
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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples form you knowledge or experience.

As a consequent of it the local business comes to an end. With the death of local communities. It can either be agreed or disagreed that the expansion of supermarket affects the local communities. This essay will discuss on the pros and con of the supermarket in some countries with its consequents.
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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, electronic sources of news are more famous among lots of people as compared to the traditional method of reading newspaper. I would argue that newspapers will gradually be replaced by Internet for reading news.
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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think ,might be effective

Some individuals argue that the heightened price of petrol is the most effective method of tackling to growing traffic and environmental pollution. While I accept that this method is good in some ways, I believe that there are better measures for this problem.
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Some people feel that entertainer (I.e film stars pop musicians and sports stars )are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree . Which are the types of jobs should be highly paid.

Entertainment industry is considered as a highly paid industry in all over the world however it is a becoming eye-catching topic to discuss whether it is economically acceptable or not.
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some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. other people think that, subjects like technology and science are more important than history Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have differing opinions with regarding to the question of whether history or science and technology subjects are more crucial in various school subjects. In my point of view, I believe that one of them could have a vital aspect. This essay would to discuss and give some examples to reinforce my view.
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Some people think it w more effective for students to study in grou while others believe that it is better for them to study alone.Discuss both views and give your opinion

People have different views about the effectiveness of group work as opposed to working alone. While there are some benefits to study independently,I believe that group study is more productive
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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own discuss both opinions and give your opinion ?

It is widely believed that children should be supported to participate in group activities in their leisure .However, others advocate that children should depend on themselves to take advantages of their free time .In my opinion, if children are engaged in group activities, they will obtain more benefits.
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Some say that rich countries should help poor countries with food and education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience

Nowadays poor nations need support of the well developed countries, so that government of poor countries can provide all the basic necessities of the lives to their citizens. In poor countries the most basic issues are poverty, nutrition, uneducated people, unemployment and commerce. I totally in favor of this topic and will share my views about it.
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