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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Nowadays we are living in a society based on consuming. As a result, some people have problems in dealing with this budget and they get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford.
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some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. to what extent do you agree with this view?

Nowadays, people visiting places with extreme weather conditions like the Sahara Desert and Antarctica have been increasing.
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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Now a days, people visiting to places with extreme weather conditions like Sahara Desert and Antarctica has been increaisng.
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Group activities or team work help in developing life skills do you agree or disagree?Explain

I agree that in developing life skills team work help.
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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.

The average life expectancy around the world, most especially in developing countries, is increasing. This can create some challenges for citizens and countries, including the ageing populations.
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Fast food is a part of life in many place. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.

Fast food consumption is growing day by day in urban as well as semi urban and rural areas. I agree to the point that fast food we eat on regular basis or everyday for some people will have bad effects on your health, lifestyle and will ruin your diet.
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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people often believe that parents have to encourage their kids to participate in various group works when they get some freetime. However, there are certain group of people who believe that kids need to be left themselves to decide whats correct for them. In my opinion, children should be guided by parents to participate in group activities so that they develop various skills that help them excel in future.
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Some people think that the most important thing the rich can do with his money is to help people. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

As the topic suggests about the perception of some people that rich people should use there money to help others. I agree to the topic.
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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In the contemporary epoch , Number of gadgets introduced to people that make their lives easier and comfortable.However,due to this big change can seen in the realtionships because they indulge themself more in technology rather than communicating with each other.There are more reasons for this ,so I will delineate my views with supporting arguments in the upcoming paragraphs.
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An increasing trend nowadays is for young adults to play computer games. Some people say this is a negative development. Discuss and give your opinion

Many young people are interested to play different type of computer games, others are worry about this trend that is growing. This essay will examine both point of views and expands my opinion. With growing different type of technologies and improving world facilities, entertainment and games are more various than past. These kind of games are really interesting and attractive. Accessing to them it is not difficult and everyone with having a smartphone or tablet can carry many games with it...
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solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. why is this? what are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

There is no doubt that solar clean energy is highly recommended and spreaded between house tenants around the world due to its sastainability and serving the enivironment. Some other people have been considered the new energy sourses as a limited time solutions and cause great shortage on the long term plan. I believe that the the solar new power sourses in the future solution for our current healthy, enivironmental, economic problematic situation.
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some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. do you think people can be happy without much money? what other factors contribute towards happiness?

money is considered by some people as the most important factor to live happily.in my opinion,people can live more happily without much as their are other important factors which leads you towards happiness.
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Many people work long hours, leaving very little  time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages.

Happiness index of almost all countries are decreasing day by day and one of the major reason for the same is involvement of people in building their carrier better and better, as this involves great amount of time and effort, this will definately shorten the way of enjoyment and performing any leisure activity like sports, arts, cooking and may be anything that make the individual happy. Definately, as per myself this has more disadvantages than advantages.
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Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The gifts are depend on ages of people, whom are given to, such as toys for children and dresses for old lady. Moreover, some people believe that the best gifts for teenagers are money. However, others people disagree. I strongly agree with the statement and discuss both point of view.
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The benefits of computers in modern society far outweighs the disadvantages. Discuss.

A controversial topic is wether the merits of machines outweighs the disadvantages, especially in this present age. Although, there are some drawbacks accompanied with these technologies, I believe the advantages has helped mankind more.
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in many countries people are concerned about the number of children who are overweight. what do you think are the causes of this?what solutions can you suggest?

different countries of parents are worrying about their children's overweight.The problem for the overweight is junkfood and the possible solution is to restrict the junk food.
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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages

In recent revolution, emerging technologies have used various ways like monitoring the various activities like communication, health, fitness and etc. In my opinion, these cutting edge devices are helpful different fields like space research, weather forecast, evacuate the inhabitants in critical situation. In this forum will discuss both merits and drawbacks with various situations.
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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the modern world. Given time, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Analyse both sides of this argument.

In the last few decades, technology has become integral part of our life. It has reached to classrooms. Many opine that, technology will replace methodological learning in foresees future, but I strongly believed that manual study should be continued.
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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

Health is very relevant in the society, due to the fact that shows the quality of life of a population in a especific country. In my opinion, the prevention of health issues is more important than the treatment, because reduces the number of news diseases and decreases the amount of money that the government should afford to treat them.
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