IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 836

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Television became one of the major entertainment in children's life. In recent time most of the kids spend a lot of time in front of the TV's, even though video telecasting cannot supercede the books as a education devices. Because of which majority of parents think that, teenagers are not able to do well in their studies due to spending most of their time in front of TV or video games rather than infront of books. This essay going to argue why television could be an important machine in the juvenile stage.

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Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. What are the advantages and disadvantages

There are those who view that, in this modern era art is a great medical treatment for human relaxation. However, most artists earn a decent income from their job, hence they are struggling to make a living. I believe great things will happen if artist receive aid from government.The pros and cons for my view will be given as below.

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museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion

The flow chart illustrates the way in which electricity is made in a hydroelectric power station.

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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The popularity of ready-made foods has aided individuals to meet up with the pace of modern life style. Besides relieving one from the stress of making home-made foods, it also gives ample time that could be used for other things like leisure or take care of undone work. However, maintaining this trend can be costly and overtime could expose one to unhealthy eating habit. In my opinion, I think the disadvantages of fast foods outweighs the convenience it gives to its consumers.

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Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists including painters, musicians and poets. However, other people think that this is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Global warming is not a prediction. It is happening right now. It is a current increase in temperature of the Earth `s atmosphere, water, and surface. Human activities produce greenhouse gases that accumulate in the atmosphere and cause problems our planet faces today. Global warming can do more than just melt polar ice and change weather patterns throughout the world.

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Some high school required all student to wear school uniform other higher school permit student to decide what to wear to school. which of these two school policies you think is better?

When coming to dress code there are different rules applied to students by their education center . While many secondary schools let their attendants to choose what to wear , i believe there is more benefits to oblige the students to wear specifics uniforms for many reasons .

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The environment we live in is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this? What measures

Pollution becomes a major concern in the society all over the world. In the society not only an individual, but also groups of people live. In the society it is everyone’s responsibility to protect the environment. Environmental problems caused by pollution, for example fuel gases, cutting of trees, gases released by factories. Government should take responsibility to reduce pollution in order to protect the environment. Every individual who is leaving in the society should take responsibi...

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In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main type of rubbish. They cause water and land pollution, so they should be banned. To what extent do you agree?

Plastic is the biggest culprit in causing pollution on both earth and oceans. Though plastic has various benefits, it also has harmful effects that can potentially damage the environment. Many people and environmental activists are lobbying for the ban on plastic shopping bags. This essay will discuss why there is a need to ban plastic bags usage but why this cannot be done abruptly.

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In many countries people working in sport and entertainment earn much more money than professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers. Why do you think this happens in some societies and do you consider it is good or bad?

It is evident that in many countries professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers are paid lesser than those who are employed in sports and entertainment sectors. In my opinion, I strongly consider this behaviour to be a bad practice as professionals should be earning more money.

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Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.

While some people think that death penalty for heinous crime is a must, other maintain that this should not be the case and everyone should get a second chance. This essay, will highlight the advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and will discuss why death penalty for violent criminals is a paramount need.

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Attitude is as important as knowledge in a test situation . To what extent do you agree?

Attitude is something that is innate in every individual. Sometimes it can be caused by individual genetic make-up, which explains some behavior copied from their parents. However, it is also influenced by social environment meaning the more the person exposed to that kind of environment, the likely he/she will be adapt on it and be like it. For example if the child belongs to a family who only sees negative in life, possibility when the child grow up his/her outlook will be more on negativism like having poor self-esteem, dependability or inability to stand alone, and those things are difficult to change and lasts forever.

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Childhood obesity has become a serious problem in recent years.Cause& solutions.

It is a worrying trend that juveniles are being suffered from obesity in contemporary era.However,this essay will highlight what are the reasons behind this situation and what are some potential measures to resolve it. There are two main factors why children are indulging overweight.The predominant one is that in these days,youngsters has relied on electronic gadgets for example,computers,mobile phones and television.To add more,they allocate most ...

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In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Over the past decade, student misbehavior has become a growing concern in many educational institutes.

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Some people think that government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, while others think that supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Government providing funds to the art and culture has always been debatable. While some people argue that the money can be used to reduce unemployment, others believe that it creates the more revenue to both the state and people. This essay will discuss the both sides of argument in detail and provide evidence to why funding the art and culture is necessary. On one hand , some people believe that the funds from the ministry can be used for reducing the lack of employment. This is because nowadays many people are facing difficulties in finding a job even though they have the sufficient skills required to acquire a job. For example , we can see every year there are lots of students who have been graduating from colleges and finding difficulties to get a job. On the other hand others believe that funding the craft and culture in turn generates the revenue by encouraging the tourists from all over the world. This is because we can see that people from different parts wo...

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinions?

As can be seen from the diagram, the process of generating electricity in a geothermal power plant includes five main steps from pumping cold water to underground to producing electric power.

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Nowadays a few people take their family with them to abroad whenever they go for a business trip. What are the advantages and disadvantages on them and on their family.

In the fast paced world people not having chance to fit the quality time with family in their busy schedule. Therefore, opting to take members of the family for a holiday with them while they are on a business trip. This essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of this new trend.

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Discussions about animal exploration are becoming very common nowadays. The number of vegans and vegetarians people has increased significantly and activists fighting for the animal’s rights are significantly high if we compare to the past.

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It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should focus on people in their own countries. To what extend you agree or disagree?

Although some people believe that governments have to give all the attention to their citizens only, I am strongly convinced that supporting neighbor countries should also be one of the government’s plans. Only if the governments, along with the nongovernmental organizations do their best to be a backbone for other boundary land, will we be able to make the best use of what other countries could provide us with.

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Some people argue that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

What is Competation? Achieving goal against the other one , Although some people think competation in childrens is very much needed but , When we live in a society we have to be good in nature and it relflects our identity. In fast moving world, everbody is rush towards the competation, all are forgetting there social responsibilities. As per the recent survey conducted by a austrialian university ,Childrens are suffering from Mental stress and fall sick from the word competation itself, they are forcing them to compare with the others, It is very logical that our ancestors do not compare with the others , Childrens are thinking forward , they are teaching what the children wants,Now-a-days every school children are forcing towards the first rank , they are making marks machines, Present scenerio , competation becomes brand building for the society, Every children should think positive competation towards the others for the growth of the Personal or the society,We c...

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children did be encouraged. Others believe that who are taught to cooperate rather than complete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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