IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 841

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?

In many parts of the world people are engaged in lots of paid work and these people not only include adults but also children at the age of 10-15 years and some are even below the age of 10 years also. The work allocated to them could be of many types including labour, acting, tutoring and various other type of work. There is a particular age for people to get into some paid work from where they become more matured and responsible. Children at such a low age will not be able to understand the meaning of work rather they would just indulge in money that they are getting in reward for the work done by them which will not teach them a valuable experience. In other terms if they are assigned a work in which they are also able to develop new skills by learning and become more mature by experience then such a work becomes a valuable one and teaches children lessons of life which are worth remembering for the whole life.

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Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from others sources (such as the internet, television). To what extent do you agree or disagree? Introduction

Today, new technologies, such as the Internet and television, has made great changes in education. In spite of this, many people still believes that traditional education system is more useful when it comes to impart knowledge on students. In my personal opinion, although the role of teachers in the classroom is undeniably essential, we still cannot ignore other sources of learning To begin with, teachers can stimulate interest and it is an undeniable fact that interested stimulated people tend to learn more. They can keep students focused on study. A student studying by himself through internet and TV may get bored and stop studying. Teachers can provide a faster and simpler way to present information to the students. They can come down to the level of a student and so are definitely better than computers. In addition, teachers are role models for students. They are scholars in action. They not only teach academic subjects, but also many social skills. On the other hand, ...

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More and more work is being carried out by machines in all areas of our lives. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? Discuss with appropriate examples.

For the last few years, machines are taking a crucial part in everyday life to do various duties that were used to do with humans. This essay will discuss two main benefits including cost and accuracy of work, also it will mention drawbacks like losing a task and increasing competition for work.

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Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In "Many Faces of madness", a shorten documentary written by Amar Kanwar, natural recourses have been destroyed by human’s greediness. For instance, four centuries ago local irrigation was established by Indian ancestor in order to harness common water; yet, when everyone has belong land the water system became a desert because of capitalism. This shows the current impact of human’s behaviors such as deforestation, mangrove destruction and overexploitation which damage biodiversity and do h...

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More and more work is being carried out by machines in all areas of our lives. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? Discuss with appropriate examples.

Since last few years, maching are taking crucial part in every day life to do various duty that was used to done buy human. This essay will discuss two main benefits including cost and accuracy of work, also it will mention drawbacks like losing job and increasing competition for work.

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Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In these days, world is a global village and people can travel easily everywhere in the world without any difficulties. Various countries have different culture and traditions but mostly natives do not force the tourist to follow their rituals and customs. As we know that different region people behave according to their areas, so we cannot strongly say that international tourism does not create any stress among natives and foreigner.

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"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often said that "health is wealth". Out of a nation strength expenditure, an enormous ratio ought to be shifted from treatment to expense on health education and preventable steps. I firmly accord that money should be spent on health knowledge. Firstly, if the money divert in providing fitness knowledge, it would be a huge change because sometimes people do not know about health literacy, and they caught up by some disease which can be treated but treatment cost an arm and a leg. To exemplify, in village so many people caught up by infectious disease which can be cured by little education of well-being. Secondly, these measures can take by simply doing, such as tv commercial, advertisement, and street show.Moreover, this also can be stopped by telling the side effects of tobacco and alcoholic drinks. Furthermore, the government should encourage and aware the public of diseases can prevent by doing yoga or gym. For example an as per report of Times of In...

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Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen and sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field, as long as they are playing well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many a person these days opines that while high-ranking sportspeople deliver a terrific performance at the field are allowed to behave unacceptable behaviors. When it comes to this notion, I strongly take the issue with this viewpoint reasoning that any kind of misbehavior of such iconic people can lead to their followers doing the same. I believe well-known people have to strictly be careful about each and every step they take because their aggressive or antisocial way of behaving can result in irreparable consequences by people from all walks of life especially teenagers.

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Nowadays, people are living an increasingly longer life and in many countries there are more old people than young people. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In the modern era, technology is very vast, as several methods are avaliable to maintain human being's physical conditions. As a result of this, the lifespan of an individual has increased. Moreover, it has also been observed that the count of the older generation is more than the younger generation in some nations. However, there are several merits of this tend like presence of more life experienced person in family along with some demerits like less jobs for the younger generationgeneration and economic setback. The upcoming paragraphs will discuss both the points.

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Some people believe that it is the duty of parents to choose good and bad of their children should decide it on their own. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Deciding the realistic path for the bright future is too crucial. Therefore,the argue is discussed between people that parents should take decisions of their children's life while other prefer to offsprings. Thus,I also tune with the former view.

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Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.

In today’s world, children have become cleaver. Whatever, they are looking, watching, listening in atmosphere and those things are understood quickly by social media. This has sparked ongoing controversy. Which is inevitable leads to a moot questions weather parents also should take responsibility to their child until they are at least 17 age so on. In this essay I will give my personal view as parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts.

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Nowadays, shopping online is becoming popular because of it’s benefits. For example, the consumers can buy books, air tickets or anything they need on the Internet. There are many advantages of this phenomenon. Beside, the drawbacks of shopping online are also a problem. In my opinion, the benefit of buying things on the internet outweigh the disadvantages.

Let me explain the matter to you in detail. I had placed an order for a pair of beer mugs listed under the category of crockery items. The item was delivered by the courier person which was wrapped in bubble sheet and packed in a soft cardboard box. As I was in a hurry, I did not open the parcel while receiving the material. To my surprise when I unpacked later in the evening, I found both mugs with cracks at the bottom. I am very sure the courier person did not handle the package carefully as there was no proper marking on the parcel about the type of material inside. Notwithstanding, I intend to return both the beer mugs, and would request you for the refund. Further, the transaction was undertaken online via internet banking, therefore you would be requested to deposit the amount to the same bank account.

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Discuss when, if ever, capital punishment can be viewed as a valid punishment for crime. You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Anti social activities are increasing day by day depending upon its severity, Capital punishment should be addressed. This essay will initially convey the care of hape and Secondly it will denict the Severe Crime which is mass slaughtering in der primarily when a person initiates the crime with eve teasing the punishment level for such kind of ollence is not much critical whereas when the offender rapes the victim for his own dirity desires then he is truely liable to recieve Capital punishment, for example an incident occured in Hyderabad where a female doctor was brutally rased and she had became a victim of untolerateble pain from 4 males and later on they burned her exlive. As a result this covel deed was considered to deliver shoot at sight order to all of the offenders and hence they were killed in an encounter. Secondly very coucial crime which fills every heart with an awful vibe such as mass slaughter is not a crime where life time imprisonment or huge D...

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

In contemporary society where genetic engineering has arouse the increasing concern of people, some tend to understand the importance of inherited characteristics and believe that has a greater influence on their personality, which has generated endless debate about whether born characteristics or real life experiences are more influential to a person. I firmly contend that the latter is more powerful.

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

Recently, the debate whether the characteristics, which we were born with or our life experiences affect our personality the most has become highly disputatious. Some people validate that each baby is born with his own identity which later on tends to be revealed in his character. On the other hand, others proclaim that your personality is actually shaped according to the experiences . This essay will discuss both views.

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Now a days we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Thirty or forty years ago we did not have such a great variety of products to use in our daily life, by the way our technologies were limited to tv, radios and telephones. We did not use so many things in our daily life as we are using in now a days and it looked all normal at the time. Population is growing and in relation to this we do produce more and more rubish. As our daily requirements are higher than it used to be. Any business that has something to offer to their customers are investing money in packaging to make more handier to carry or more attractive to catch clients eye. All these packages when reache customers will became as a rubbish as it won’t be used in their daily routine.

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Some people believe that team sports is very important for children to succeed in their career, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

This chart shows the relation between the rate of British people donating part of their money for charity and the historical period when these donations were made.

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It is observed that communication between family members in today's time is less as compared tothe past. However, some people do not think so. Do you agree or disagree?

Owing to the rapid changes in lifestyles of the human and technological discoveries, people don't have much time for their families and friends, however, somepeople disagree with this statementthat nowadays conversation among fmily membersis less. Personally,I mently agree with the statement which says communication is less between family members.

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Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however say that cooperation and team working skills are more important. Discuss both side.

People have different view regarding whether the school ought to focus in competition or in cooperation as a team.

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Some people believe that studying science or business related subjects in the university is more important that studying art related courses like literature. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world is fast becoming a technological and economic village. Hence, it is commonly considered that opting for courses associated with these at tertiary level is more beneficial than learning subjects related to the arts like literature. In my opinion, I completely support this view because science and technology have better career prospects and they can make an individual more independent.

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