IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 843

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Discussions about animal exploration are becoming very common nowadays. The number of vegans and vegetarians people has increased significantly and activists fighting for the animal’s rights are significantly high if we compare to the past.

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It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should focus on people in their own countries. To what extend you agree or disagree?

Although some people believe that governments have to give all the attention to their citizens only, I am strongly convinced that supporting neighbor countries should also be one of the government’s plans. Only if the governments, along with the nongovernmental organizations do their best to be a backbone for other boundary land, will we be able to make the best use of what other countries could provide us with.

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Some people argue that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

What is Competation? Achieving goal against the other one , Although some people think competation in childrens is very much needed but , When we live in a society we have to be good in nature and it relflects our identity. In fast moving world, everbody is rush towards the competation, all are forgetting there social responsibilities. As per the recent survey conducted by a austrialian university ,Childrens are suffering from Mental stress and fall sick from the word competation itself, they are forcing them to compare with the others, It is very logical that our ancestors do not compare with the others , Childrens are thinking forward , they are teaching what the children wants,Now-a-days every school children are forcing towards the first rank , they are making marks machines, Present scenerio , competation becomes brand building for the society, Every children should think positive competation towards the others for the growth of the Personal or the society,We c...

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children did be encouraged. Others believe that who are taught to cooperate rather than complete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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In m countryany places new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not bulid new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

A few masses opine that it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there however only space available for building them is in the countryside. In this essay will discuss the relevant views and wil give opinion.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe is is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

In todays world, most of the cities are facing the challenge of constructing the new homes but the option available is to develop the suburs. However, few masses think that it is necessary to conserve these locations and I completely agree with the opinion. I will substantiate my point of view in this regards.

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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nuclear technology has been a boon as well a bane to the human society. In my opinion, It has been more harmful than beneficial. I would argue that the countries with nuclear power exercise dominance in terms of negotiations with non-nuclear countries. They use nuclear weapons as a political tool to exercise unfair advantage and control over the other countries. This situation is bound to reach a threshold when tension between the nuclear and non-nuclear countries will boil over and lead to very undesired situations. Also, imagine a situation where an unfairly treated non-nuclear country develops its own nuclear weapon and tries to retaliate for all the suppression it went through. Also, every year there are few more nations with the nuclear weapon, that situation is not far away where most of countries will have their own nuclear weapons and we are back to square where there were no nations with nuclear power. So if the argument that nuclear weapons maintain peace were to...

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Some people believe that the qualities a person needs to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern world, everyone wants to be successful by doing the master level education and learning the techniques that results in success.However, some people opine that there is no need for higher degree to learn these skills, I partially agree with this statement.

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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nuclear technology has been a boon as well a bane to the human society. In my opinion, It has been more harmful than beneficial. I would argue that the countries with nuclear power exercise dominance in terms of negotiatons with non-nuclear countries. They use nuclear weapon as a political tool to exercise unfair advantage and control over the other countries. This situation is bound to reach a threshold when tension between the nuclear and non-nuclear countries will boil over and lead to very undesired situations. Also, imagine a situation where an unfairly treated non-nuclear country develops its own nuclear weapon and tries to retaliate for all the suppression it went through. Also, every year there are few more nations with the nuclear weapon, that situation is not far away where most of countries will have their own nuclear weapons and we are back to square where there were no nations with nuclear power. So if the argument that nuclear weapons maintain peace were to ...

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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nuclear technology has been a boon as well a bane to the human society. In my opinion, It has been more harmful than beneficial. I would argue that the countries with nuclear power exercise dominance in terms of negotiatons with non-nuclear countries. They use nuclear weapon as a political tool to exercise unfair advantage and control over the other countries. This situation is bound to reach a threshold when tension between the nuclear and non-nuclear countries will boil over and lead to very undesired situations. Also, imagine a situation where an unfairly treated non-nuclear country develops its own nuclear weapon and tries to retaliate for all the suppression it went through. Also, every year there are few more nations with the nuclear weapon, that situation is not far away where most of countries will have their own nuclear weapons and we are back to square where there were no nations with nuclear power. So if the argument that nuclear weapons maintain peace were to ...

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Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

We are currently living in the world where surviving with one persons income in the family is being difficult. This economic situation has encouraged both the parent to work in order to fullfil their basic needs. A Couple who works and have children believe that other family members can take care of their children in their absence. While few parents believe child care centres are the best place to leave their children when they aren't available. This essay will discuss why daycare centres provide best care to childrens in their parents absence but why still leaving them at relatives is more beneficial.

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Why is having a higher % of more elderly a problem?

One of the problems from ageing populations is a financial pressure on governments. This problem affects the economy through an increase in government expenditure on healthcare, pensions and social benefit programs for elderly people. It means governments need more money to inject in healthcare and welfare systems for them. A main source of money for governments is from tax payers who are working-age but as ageing populations increase there are more aged people or retirees who do not pay ta...

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Some people think that big sporting events are not worthwhile for the host country. Do you agree or disagree?

Generally, the public thinks that major events focussing on sports are not worth the money and time spent by the host country. I strongly disagree with this opinion because i believe major sporting events bring lot of new opportunities for the host country.

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Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the causes of this topic? What measures can be international community take to meet this demand?

Food is one of the basic need of human beings as it provides energy and nutrition to the people. Demanding for food is proliferated in all over the world. Although there are a number reasons of this problem but a lot of solution can the international community take to meet this. Both reasons and solutions will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the reals need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people have a perspective that advertisements lure us to purchase goods that are not of necessity. But, others are of the view that advertising enlightens us of new items which might ameliorate our lives. I strongly agree that ads motivate consumers to buy unwanted things.

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It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than young people in many countries in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Recently, there are people who believe that the number of senior citizens is higher than young citizens in many nations in the future. From my point of view, it exerts negative impacts on countries’ development. This essay will give some culprits that contribute to this assertion.

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These days, some people think that physical strength is important for success in sports, others think that mental health is more significant. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the present days, It is often believed that physical conditions are of great significance for achievement in sport, while others think that mental strength can be more significant. From my perspective, the role of physical condition and mental well-being can be equally significant for sport, it is highly recommended that both strength and stamina should be required.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools.others,however , believe that boys and girls benefit more from mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give their own opinion.

Some people believe that splitting the boys and girls in school is good to educate them ,Others think that conglomerates of boys and girls will give extra advantages.Some schools are showing gender equality for both boys and girls, unlikely few academics are providing separate teaching for increasing student concentration. This essay will discuss the advantages and detriments of co-education in schools.

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It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is said that the government is spending huge money to ancient building to repairing while some commentators argue that, this wages must be invested in modern building in this essay, I partially with give affirmation and discuss my view in the subsequent paragraphs.

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It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is said that the government is spending huge money to ancient building to repairing while some commentators argue that, this wages must be invested in modern building in this essay, I partially concur with given affirmation and discuss my view in the subsequent paragraphs.

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