IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 853

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The argument that the growth of online shopping, in the rest of the essay e-shopping is used, will lead to shut down all shops in town and cities in near future, is not absolutely true. I don’t agree with that, and in the coming essay I will depict it.

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Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.

There arise no question over the verity of this statement that nowadays climate change is major problem, since globalisation.A few in Genral public opine that it had better if if human prevents the burning of fossil fuels and explores the alternative of these fossil fuels.However others believe that these fossil fuels are necessary for factories,without it's use economy will suffer.This eassy would put light on both point of views in advance to my personal view.

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In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solution?

Nowadays, competitons among the individuals rises in every sector of life as compared to the previous some decades whether, in the field of study, research, innovations and sports but, if we talk particularly about sports then many athletes are now using various drugs and such substances that will increase their performances in the field however, this also led to become a controversy for them . In this essay i will address the possible reasons and solution of this situation.

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New technology have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Technology is inevitable in this world. Revolution in technological sector has immensely impacted little one's leisure time. Children are becoming more and more addictive towards new gadgets and also, it has become status symbol amongst affluent kids. This essay is going to discuss both merits and demerits of youngsters using new high tech appliances in free time.

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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language.

Many people approach in an effective way when it comes to learning a foreign language. Languages are made up of complex structures and rules which make it more challenging to understand. In fact, there are numerous ways to learn a new language. This essay will demonstrate how learning a foreign has its advantages and disadvantages when you migrate to a country where the foreign language learned helps you in need.

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Should junior secondary teachers give students homework?

There are a lot of arguments for and against "giving homework to students" As for me, junior secondary teachers should give students homework because it helps students to consolidate their knowledge and develope their self-study skills.

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Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Vaccinating children has become increasingly unpopular among certain demographics of society. These people claim that vaccinations are hazardous to children's health and as such as not needed. This essay will argue why vaccinating against spreadable diseases is entirely necessary despite some potential risks.

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Some people think that it would be better for large companies to move to regional areas outside large urban centres. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is thought by some that conglomerates and industries should shift their base to outskirts instead of being based at the centres of cities. This essay will argue that the advantages of this outweighs the drawbacks. This essay will first demonstrate that this shift leads to proper population distribution and also stimulates development of remote areas, followed by an analysis of how the primary drawback, namely increase of cost for company, is not valid.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is said by group of persons that worst case scenerio such as underpaid job or low on cash must situation must be adapted for live. Other group of individuals differ this opinion by doing something to better circumstances. This essay is going to enlight both views on group and shares the view by improving or working hard to embark better future.

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Some people say that in all levels of education from primary schools to universities ,too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills . Do you agree /disagree ?

In this mordern world , education plays a vital role in nurturing every child to be better humans . In this essay ,i completely agree on this topic and will be discussing two main reasons of more time invested on learning rather than practical skill .

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Some people encourage young children to leave their parents house as soon as they become adults while others say children should stay at their parent's house as long as possible. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Individuals prefer to keep their children close to them in the most possible way, on the contrary, some believe they do not need parental support and guidance and make fortune by their own.Being with parents forever can make a huge impact on children's life.

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

Rich countries should provide poorer ones with humanitarian assistance during disasters that happened by nature. This essay agrees with this statement because it is a moral and human duty towards needy people, and this help might avoid the side effects of disasters. Providing help by developed nations to underdeveloped ones which have natural catastrophes, is a human issue. In other words, when a damaged country is provided with proper assistance, as a result, it will have the chance to rebuild its country again after the disaster is over. Furthermore, this help might have increased the opportunity to be a better society, so the world will become more peaceful and harmony in order that it belongs to a family of humanity. A recent study found that the number of natural disasters would have decreased by 50 per cent when urgent help has provided. Assisting poor countries who have natural disasters by rich nations, it might have lessened the side effects of it. To put it ...

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Some people think that museum should be enjoyable place to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of them is to educate.discuss both views and give your opinion..

Around the glove, every year many individuals visit museum and it means several millions in profit for this amenities. Museums are public and private amenities that store items of great value for humans such as portraits, paitings and crafts. Besides these amenities help citizens to get distrated and learn more about its belongings. Although many people argue that museums should be more enjoyable places, others belive that the real purpose of them is to educate children and adults.

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In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

Smoking is major concern in developed countries now smoker’s strength is more as compared to non-smokers. I completely fair that smokers should leave the public place if they want to smoke.

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These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays numerous families migrate to foreign countries for job.People have different opinions whether living abroad will be beneficial for children or it will be negative for children’s lives.I consider that living in a foreign country helps people to develop their future career well.On the one hand,some people think that when families immigrate to foreign countries they encounter with some problems.Firstly,they cannot communicate with local people easily because they cannot understand the...

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Some people claim that not enough of waste from homes is recycled.They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Recycling of product is a duo role which is supposed to be played by both government and the individuals.

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• Many parents today organize extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?

It is true that nowadays most parents hire private teachers for their children outside the school.In my view,children have been provided sufficient knowledge at school and the parents should not arrange educators for their children after school.A good reason why children do not need to prepare with private tutors is that it causes unnecessary burden on pupils.For instance,after 8 hours studying at school,children may feel tired or exhausted and they do not have energy to do something.Anothe...

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It has been believed that people who read for pleasure have developed imagination and good language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. Do you agree or disagree?

The prevalence of obesity and related diseases have been recognised by the Health World Organization as a major public health issue. Obesity and the relevant comorbidities, such as depression, heart attacks, cardiovascular diseases, and certain cancers will not guaranty us as human beings a long life, as well as the food and physical activity choices impact individuals and their quality of life.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. why do many working people not get enough exercice? what can be done abot this problem?

Maintaining a healthy lifestyle, proved to be difficult for working people. Statistic shows, that working people suffer from several health issues throughout time, due to lack of exercises. So what prevent employee from working out? and what can be done to answer this problem?

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Exercising daily plays very important role in keeping the human body physically active and fit, it maintains the immune system and also the internal organs healthy. We can find many of the working people getting a very little or even no exercise, either it is a working day or a free time. Are they doing it any good for their health? Obviously not, their procrastination will eventually lead towards health problems. Today humans are working like machines. They get very little spare time during their working days and also in free time they are busy in some recreational activities or with family.

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