IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 853

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many jobs used to be done at home by hand, but nowadays an increasing number of them are done using machines instead. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

In this modern world of advanced technology, people were more relying on home appliances for daily household activities as in the past they do all of it by themselves.

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Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Lower cost of air transport made it easier for each and every person to travel around the world. Different people have different views on the recent burning issue. Some experts believe that it should be banned for future prospects which can cause environmental issues. i think that it should not banned, instead it should be relocated to a place where it can be less harmful.

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information on the percentage of people who went to the movies in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2010

The given line graph illustrates information on the percentage of people who went to the movies in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2010. The people's attendance is divided into four different age groups.

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Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

A potion of society has a conception that zoos are rude and should be shut down. On other hand, some people believe that it can be beneficial in the protection and conservation of wild life. Before, I conclude my opinion I would like to discuss both opinions.

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Nowadays the crime rate among young people is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? What can be done by parents and teachers to reduce it?

The rise in crime amoung young people is a serious matter of concern these days. It is heart wrenching to see the youngsters going astray in the society. This essay will examine the possible reasons of the increased crime rate among youth and possible solutions that could address this menace. The possible reasons for the rise in the youth crime could be attributed to the drugs addiction, unemployment or troubled childhood. The principle cause, to me, is doing drugs and binge drinking among youth. It is a common sight to see teenagers drink excessively, and under the influence of alcohol they loose control and commit crimes. For example, it has been often witnessed that fights break outsides of the pub and clubs in New Delhi. Law enforcement agencies also opine that there is a direct connection of crime with the drugs abuse these days. Additionally, some teenagers form a nasty habit of doing drugs and get addicted to it profusely. There state is so bad that in order to feed ...

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IN SOME COUNTRIES, IT IS ILLEGAL FOR COMPANIES TO REJECT JOB APPLICANTS FOR THEIR AGE. IS THIS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT?

In this steep competitive world, most nations consider the age as a primitive factor while opting any job applications. In that case, rejecting job seekers due to their age is a crime in several nations. In my opinion, it leads towards negative progress of the nation. My inclinations and arguments are elucidated in the upcoming texts.

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A REPORT INDICATED THAT MANY CHILDREN BETWEEN 7 AND 11 SPEND TOO MUCH TIME WATCHING TELEVISION AND / OR PLAY VIDEO GAMES. HOW DOES THE PROBLEM AFFECT THE CHILDREN, THEIR FAMILIES AND SOCIETY? WHAT MEASURES CAN BE TAKEN TO CONTROL IT?

In the last decades, most children are spending their time to play video games or watching tv

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Some people think that women should not be allowed to work in the police force . Do u agree or disagree ?

The work in the police force is not meant for women. I completely agree with this statement as working in the police or military can be very challanging.

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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign language is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

İn our century, technology is improving quickly and people can do their works easily in the computers. Many people use translate apps for translating words or sentences quickly and accurately in their daily life. I also use computers for translating words in lessons or for contacting with foreigners easily and quickly. However, I think it is not good for long-term conversations, so learning foreign language should not be suspended.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The environment can be defined as the circumstances surround by any living and non-living objects. As because of industrialization and growing consumption of automobile's fuel emerging more greenhouse gases in our environment ever before which is a threatful situation for our surrounding, global warming, floods, droughts and constant change in climate are the results draw from these activities.

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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fuelling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve this resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

The diagram illustrates the process of factory-made fish pie and the various steps in its production. Overall, the process consists of three main stages, beginning with the delivery of the raw ingredients such as potatoes and salmon end ending with the storing of frozen fish pies.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects

It is common that youths use the computer more frequently nowadays. A row have been provoked whether this phenomenon brings harmful effects to youngsters. I believe that do more harm than good.

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Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.

Neighbours are the people who live near us, and their behaviour influence our daily life. Good neighbours can make us feel comfortable and give us much help, and everyone will benefit from a good relationship among neighbours. Friendly behaviour, willingness, and respect are some important qualities that make great people who live next door to us. For many reasons, which will be mentioned below the essay.

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Many people say that movies and TV programs affect us negatively while others say that they are two influential and useful media for us. How do movies and TV affect us?

The impact of movies and TV programs on individual became topical debate these days. The films became a contraversial tpoic nowadays. Some people arguee that, it effects us negatively, while others critize that it may impact in a positve way. In this essay i am going to discuss both the postive and negative influensec of TV programs. On the one hand, Movie and Tv Programs can influence us in a positive way, which acts as a tension relever.for instance, many people works under stress and pressure in day to day life to get relife from this tensions Tv serves as an entertainment purporse. Despite of this, over relaying on Tv programs may distract the individuals from investing time on important matters such as jobs. Furthermore, Movies are the quickest way to transform the information. Most entertainment programs are based on the real life experiences. on the other hand, plenty of people get affect by these movies, infact young adolescents, they act in the way they watch th...

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Successful companies use advertisement to make more sales. What can make an advertisement very effective? Do you think this is a bad thing or a good thing for the society?

The biggest purpose of advertising strategies is to not only promote the products for the brand, but also change people's opinion to it in different ways. Nowadays, from the traditional billboard ads to Google ads, you can see various advertisements surround us and deeply affect the society. In my opinion, Youtube advertisement is the most effective way to deliver visual information in a short time, which also creates some positive impacts on society.

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Some people working six months of annually and rest of time they do what ever they like. Do you think its advantages overweight disadvantages

Private sector are becoming play a major role to provide employment, even employers can join unregular schedule of working such as half of the year .While these kinds of jobs having less burden to employees yet, I will explain why i feel it is ultimately not for the best Inspite, idea seems to be modern as a unregulated employment opportunity can offer a number of advantages to employees The main one is in terms of stressfree life. These services employee...

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There are more new towns nowadays. It is more important to include public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for individuals to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For residents living in the hustle and bustle, spotting a gem place with sports facilities and beautiful scenery in the middle of a town is a big surprise. When modern development drives a broad spectrum of people to adopt a sedentary lifestyle, constructing more public parks and sports equipment boost the well-being of the general public more extensively.

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over the last few decades,there has been an increase in international tourism.some people think that tourism is beneficial for local communities and should be encourged.to what extent do you agree ?

touristry is a significant part of a nation's economy. In fact, it promotes culture and diversity, for example- the monument named Taj Mahal present in Uttarpradesh proliferates religion and as well unites the country eliminating inequalities. There are inundated reasons substantiating tourism.

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ВОПРОСЫ МЕЖДУНАРОДНОГО И НАЦИОНАЛЬНОГО ПРАВОВОГО ПОРЯДОКА БОРЬБЫ С ТОРГОВЛЕЙ ЛЮДЬМИ В РЕСПУБЛИКЕ УЗБЕКИСТАН

Действительно, одной из самых актуальных проблем в глобальных изменениях сегодня является торговля людьми. Торговля людьми характеризуется тем, что это преступление является одним из наиболее «сложных» видов преступлений, требующих раскрытия не только в стране, но и на международном уровне. Возникшая проблема сделала приоритетной задачу разработать решение и создать прочную правовую базу для его устранения для каждой страны, включая Республику Узбекистан. Помимо необходимости разработки международной правовой базы для борьбы с торговлей людьми, важно включить ее в национальное законодательство. В связи с этим первый президент И.А Каримов в своих работах сказал: «Цель не может быть достигнута без всеобъемлющей борьбы с экстремизмом, незаконным оборотом наркотиков, организованной преступностью и международным терроризмом. В частности, Становится все более очевидным, что одни лишь раздробленные и ненасильственные бои безнадежны. К числу наиболее важных международных документов о защите...

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In The Future,Nobody Will Buy Printed Newspapers Or Books Because They Will Be Able To Read Everything They Want Online Without Paying.To What Extent Do You Agree Or Disagree With This Statement?

It is generally believed that since people currently able ta acquired information on the Internet in a much easier way than in the past, printed newspapers or books are no longer necessary. While I accept that online sources of information have some advantages over traditional books, I would argue that is still a great need for printed books in today's world.

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