IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 850

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that in all levels of education from primary schools to universities ,too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills . Do you agree /disagree ?

In this mordern world , education plays a vital role in nurturing every child to be better humans . In this essay ,i completely agree on this topic and will be discussing two main reasons of more time invested on learning rather than practical skill .

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Some people encourage young children to leave their parents house as soon as they become adults while others say children should stay at their parent's house as long as possible. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Individuals prefer to keep their children close to them in the most possible way, on the contrary, some believe they do not need parental support and guidance and make fortune by their own.Being with parents forever can make a huge impact on children's life.

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

Rich countries should provide poorer ones with humanitarian assistance during disasters that happened by nature. This essay agrees with this statement because it is a moral and human duty towards needy people, and this help might avoid the side effects of disasters. Providing help by developed nations to underdeveloped ones which have natural catastrophes, is a human issue. In other words, when a damaged country is provided with proper assistance, as a result, it will have the chance to rebuild its country again after the disaster is over. Furthermore, this help might have increased the opportunity to be a better society, so the world will become more peaceful and harmony in order that it belongs to a family of humanity. A recent study found that the number of natural disasters would have decreased by 50 per cent when urgent help has provided. Assisting poor countries who have natural disasters by rich nations, it might have lessened the side effects of it. To put it ...

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Some people think that museum should be enjoyable place to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of them is to educate.discuss both views and give your opinion..

Around the glove, every year many individuals visit museum and it means several millions in profit for this amenities. Museums are public and private amenities that store items of great value for humans such as portraits, paitings and crafts. Besides these amenities help citizens to get distrated and learn more about its belongings. Although many people argue that museums should be more enjoyable places, others belive that the real purpose of them is to educate children and adults.

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In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

Smoking is major concern in developed countries now smoker’s strength is more as compared to non-smokers. I completely fair that smokers should leave the public place if they want to smoke.

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These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays numerous families migrate to foreign countries for job.People have different opinions whether living abroad will be beneficial for children or it will be negative for children’s lives.I consider that living in a foreign country helps people to develop their future career well.On the one hand,some people think that when families immigrate to foreign countries they encounter with some problems.Firstly,they cannot communicate with local people easily because they cannot understand the...

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Some people claim that not enough of waste from homes is recycled.They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Recycling of product is a duo role which is supposed to be played by both government and the individuals.

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• Many parents today organize extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?

It is true that nowadays most parents hire private teachers for their children outside the school.In my view,children have been provided sufficient knowledge at school and the parents should not arrange educators for their children after school.A good reason why children do not need to prepare with private tutors is that it causes unnecessary burden on pupils.For instance,after 8 hours studying at school,children may feel tired or exhausted and they do not have energy to do something.Anothe...

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It has been believed that people who read for pleasure have developed imagination and good language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. Do you agree or disagree?

The prevalence of obesity and related diseases have been recognised by the Health World Organization as a major public health issue. Obesity and the relevant comorbidities, such as depression, heart attacks, cardiovascular diseases, and certain cancers will not guaranty us as human beings a long life, as well as the food and physical activity choices impact individuals and their quality of life.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. why do many working people not get enough exercice? what can be done abot this problem?

Maintaining a healthy lifestyle, proved to be difficult for working people. Statistic shows, that working people suffer from several health issues throughout time, due to lack of exercises. So what prevent employee from working out? and what can be done to answer this problem?

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Exercising daily plays very important role in keeping the human body physically active and fit, it maintains the immune system and also the internal organs healthy. We can find many of the working people getting a very little or even no exercise, either it is a working day or a free time. Are they doing it any good for their health? Obviously not, their procrastination will eventually lead towards health problems. Today humans are working like machines. They get very little spare time during their working days and also in free time they are busy in some recreational activities or with family.

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Man working people get little or no exercices either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. why do many working people not get enough exercise? what can be done about this problem?

Maintaining a healthy life style, proved to be difficult for working people. Statistic show, that working people suffer from several health issues throughout time, due to lack of exercises either during their free time or wroking break. So what prevent employee from working out? and what can be done to answer this problem?

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In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

There are many examples when countries had to impose curfew and restrictions on its own citizens. These restrictions and curfews depend upon the situation or turmoil which the country is been facing, for example, political unrest or may be increased rate of crimes against the children/teenagers. Later is the reason because of which, in some areas of US, teenagers are strictly prohibited to be involved in outdoor activities without being accompanied by an adult after a certain time. Not only teenagers are often seen as a soft and easy target by the criminals but also teenage is the period of life in which one is attracted more often towards the activities which should have been avoided at that time.

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Life now is better than it was 100 years ago To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Due to globalization world has been changing every moment. Humans life has been changing and have become more mordanization than it was 100 years ago. So, to my view, I directly agree with this statement and I suppose, present life is better than earlier.

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As global trade increases, many goods, including those we use on a daily basis, are produced in other countries and have to be transported long distances. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

With the rise in global trade, it becomes pertinent to transport frequently used products produced in other countries across far distances. This i perceive to be a negative development as it poses more demerits than merits.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own countries. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and the disadvantages of this development?

It is often thought that in the past time pupils were providing a university course in their home town. However, these days there are more chances to make your education in another state. In the next paragraphs, I will discuss the positive and negative effect of this impact.

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that humanitarian relief should be provided to poorer countries by rich countries during the disaster period. This essay agrees with the statement because rich countries have more resources and it is also a moral thing to do.

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recenty published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty percent over the last fifty years . what we do to help protect the wildlife round the world?

The Animal population is a natural beauty of the nature.According to recent research about that the population of species have been declined by fifty percent in fifty years.However, many people believe that the world wildlife population should be protected.I will discuss ways about how to protect the species of animals in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen, pencil or brush. What are the reasons? is this a positive or negative development?

In the today's technological world, people use their smartphones, tablets, laptops and many other gadgets for communication and also many other purposes. Rather, previouse the number of people usein a pen, pencil or brush in many different areas such as communication, Important notes, to write something etc. this is a negative sides for the growth of childrens.

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In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

The world population have been suffering from many problems which cause lots of diseases and death for centuries. As people have had a lack of providing food, the branch of agriculture have been doing plenty of improvements. Nonetheless, although advances can be seen, humans are still hungry. In this essay, the motivs will be explored and actions which can be done about this problem will be presented.

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