IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 852

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.

While some people think that death penalty for heinous crime is a must, other maintain that this should not be the case and everyone should get a second chance. This essay, will highlight the advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and will discuss why death penalty for violent criminals is a paramount need.

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Attitude is as important as knowledge in a test situation . To what extent do you agree?

Attitude is something that is innate in every individual. Sometimes it can be caused by individual genetic make-up, which explains some behavior copied from their parents. However, it is also influenced by social environment meaning the more the person exposed to that kind of environment, the likely he/she will be adapt on it and be like it. For example if the child belongs to a family who only sees negative in life, possibility when the child grow up his/her outlook will be more on negativism like having poor self-esteem, dependability or inability to stand alone, and those things are difficult to change and lasts forever.

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Childhood obesity has become a serious problem in recent years.Cause& solutions.

It is a worrying trend that juveniles are being suffered from obesity in contemporary era.However,this essay will highlight what are the reasons behind this situation and what are some potential measures to resolve it. There are two main factors why children are indulging overweight.The predominant one is that in these days,youngsters has relied on electronic gadgets for example,computers,mobile phones and television.To add more,they allocate most ...

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In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Over the past decade, student misbehavior has become a growing concern in many educational institutes.

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Some people think that government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, while others think that supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Government providing funds to the art and culture has always been debatable. While some people argue that the money can be used to reduce unemployment, others believe that it creates the more revenue to both the state and people. This essay will discuss the both sides of argument in detail and provide evidence to why funding the art and culture is necessary. On one hand , some people believe that the funds from the ministry can be used for reducing the lack of employment. This is because nowadays many people are facing difficulties in finding a job even though they have the sufficient skills required to acquire a job. For example , we can see every year there are lots of students who have been graduating from colleges and finding difficulties to get a job. On the other hand others believe that funding the craft and culture in turn generates the revenue by encouraging the tourists from all over the world. This is because we can see that people from different parts wo...

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinions?

As can be seen from the diagram, the process of generating electricity in a geothermal power plant includes five main steps from pumping cold water to underground to producing electric power.

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Nowadays a few people take their family with them to abroad whenever they go for a business trip. What are the advantages and disadvantages on them and on their family.

In the fast paced world people not having chance to fit the quality time with family in their busy schedule. Therefore, opting to take members of the family for a holiday with them while they are on a business trip. This essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of this new trend.

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Discussions about animal exploration are becoming very common nowadays. The number of vegans and vegetarians people has increased significantly and activists fighting for the animal’s rights are significantly high if we compare to the past.

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It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should focus on people in their own countries. To what extend you agree or disagree?

Although some people believe that governments have to give all the attention to their citizens only, I am strongly convinced that supporting neighbor countries should also be one of the government’s plans. Only if the governments, along with the nongovernmental organizations do their best to be a backbone for other boundary land, will we be able to make the best use of what other countries could provide us with.

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Some people argue that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

What is Competation? Achieving goal against the other one , Although some people think competation in childrens is very much needed but , When we live in a society we have to be good in nature and it relflects our identity. In fast moving world, everbody is rush towards the competation, all are forgetting there social responsibilities. As per the recent survey conducted by a austrialian university ,Childrens are suffering from Mental stress and fall sick from the word competation itself, they are forcing them to compare with the others, It is very logical that our ancestors do not compare with the others , Childrens are thinking forward , they are teaching what the children wants,Now-a-days every school children are forcing towards the first rank , they are making marks machines, Present scenerio , competation becomes brand building for the society, Every children should think positive competation towards the others for the growth of the Personal or the society,We c...

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children did be encouraged. Others believe that who are taught to cooperate rather than complete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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In m countryany places new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not bulid new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

A few masses opine that it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there however only space available for building them is in the countryside. In this essay will discuss the relevant views and wil give opinion.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe is is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

In todays world, most of the cities are facing the challenge of constructing the new homes but the option available is to develop the suburs. However, few masses think that it is necessary to conserve these locations and I completely agree with the opinion. I will substantiate my point of view in this regards.

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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nuclear technology has been a boon as well a bane to the human society. In my opinion, It has been more harmful than beneficial. I would argue that the countries with nuclear power exercise dominance in terms of negotiations with non-nuclear countries. They use nuclear weapons as a political tool to exercise unfair advantage and control over the other countries. This situation is bound to reach a threshold when tension between the nuclear and non-nuclear countries will boil over and lead to very undesired situations. Also, imagine a situation where an unfairly treated non-nuclear country develops its own nuclear weapon and tries to retaliate for all the suppression it went through. Also, every year there are few more nations with the nuclear weapon, that situation is not far away where most of countries will have their own nuclear weapons and we are back to square where there were no nations with nuclear power. So if the argument that nuclear weapons maintain peace were to...

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Some people believe that the qualities a person needs to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern world, everyone wants to be successful by doing the master level education and learning the techniques that results in success.However, some people opine that there is no need for higher degree to learn these skills, I partially agree with this statement.

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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nuclear technology has been a boon as well a bane to the human society. In my opinion, It has been more harmful than beneficial. I would argue that the countries with nuclear power exercise dominance in terms of negotiatons with non-nuclear countries. They use nuclear weapon as a political tool to exercise unfair advantage and control over the other countries. This situation is bound to reach a threshold when tension between the nuclear and non-nuclear countries will boil over and lead to very undesired situations. Also, imagine a situation where an unfairly treated non-nuclear country develops its own nuclear weapon and tries to retaliate for all the suppression it went through. Also, every year there are few more nations with the nuclear weapon, that situation is not far away where most of countries will have their own nuclear weapons and we are back to square where there were no nations with nuclear power. So if the argument that nuclear weapons maintain peace were to ...

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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nuclear technology has been a boon as well a bane to the human society. In my opinion, It has been more harmful than beneficial. I would argue that the countries with nuclear power exercise dominance in terms of negotiatons with non-nuclear countries. They use nuclear weapon as a political tool to exercise unfair advantage and control over the other countries. This situation is bound to reach a threshold when tension between the nuclear and non-nuclear countries will boil over and lead to very undesired situations. Also, imagine a situation where an unfairly treated non-nuclear country develops its own nuclear weapon and tries to retaliate for all the suppression it went through. Also, every year there are few more nations with the nuclear weapon, that situation is not far away where most of countries will have their own nuclear weapons and we are back to square where there were no nations with nuclear power. So if the argument that nuclear weapons maintain peace were to ...

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Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

We are currently living in the world where surviving with one persons income in the family is being difficult. This economic situation has encouraged both the parent to work in order to fullfil their basic needs. A Couple who works and have children believe that other family members can take care of their children in their absence. While few parents believe child care centres are the best place to leave their children when they aren't available. This essay will discuss why daycare centres provide best care to childrens in their parents absence but why still leaving them at relatives is more beneficial.

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Why is having a higher % of more elderly a problem?

One of the problems from ageing populations is a financial pressure on governments. This problem affects the economy through an increase in government expenditure on healthcare, pensions and social benefit programs for elderly people. It means governments need more money to inject in healthcare and welfare systems for them. A main source of money for governments is from tax payers who are working-age but as ageing populations increase there are more aged people or retirees who do not pay ta...

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Some people think that big sporting events are not worthwhile for the host country. Do you agree or disagree?

Generally, the public thinks that major events focussing on sports are not worth the money and time spent by the host country. I strongly disagree with this opinion because i believe major sporting events bring lot of new opportunities for the host country.

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