IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 857

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that children should start formal education at schools as early as possible. Others feel that children should go to school when they are at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that studying is an essential part of a vibrant life , especially in childhood and the youth. However , some people think that kids ought to begin schooling prematurely while, for many, it is considered better to start at age 7, at least. In the following essay, I will focus on both sides and give my own opinion. On the one hand, there are several benefits to initiate education as fast as possible. First of all , being passionate about the surroundings at age 5 or so is much more likely to be higher comparing to the older, even 7. Namely, childish enthusiasm and memory-based productivity makes the young remember deeply what is taught and maximize the rate of interests. Second of all , adaptation to a social life (making new friends, attending school programs, spending time together with fellowers, etc.) earlier allots a child to create stronger basement of the upcoming years, in particular , the whole future. For example, instead of taking a year later, ch...

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Studies have shown that in many countries the income gap between the rich and the poor is ever increasing. what problems can arise from this situation. what could be done to address this situation.

Some people believe unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children)

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Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia. As many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsibility to monitor what students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

There is an upgrowing issue of bulky children in Australia every second child has overweight. Acording to some people,

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IT appears that the country’s wheat troubles are far from over

The demand for wheat flour as a major staple is inelastic. This means that a hike, no matter how large it may be, does not reduce its consumption, or at least does not effect too much of a change in eating routines. In fact, people will cut expenditure on other items to pay for flour. Little wonder then that it is easier for wheat stockists and flour millers to raise their prices without loss in sales in times of both real and artificial scarcity — even at the risk of causing unrest among the people, especially the poor who spend more than half their monthly income on food.

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Thesedays, problems with pollution are becoming worse, particularly in large cities. What are the reasons for this and how can this be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's world the issue of air pollution has become a major concerns to metropolitan cities. I personally believe, there are two main reason that harm our environemnt overpopulation and greenhouse effect. This essay will discuss two problems and how to address them, using relevant example from UK BBC news and Queenland University to demonstrate points and prove arguments. Environmentalist experts throughout the world has advised that the world is overpopulation in particular main cities aroung round with low density growing. This problem causes that the majority of citizen choose to live in main metropolitan areas as a result of lack of job opportunities development and resources in rural areas. For example, a empiral research by Queenland University suggested that urban population has grown in importance over the last decade. This is due to the fact health public system, facilites and infrastructure has advanced technologies in comparison with rural areas. Consistent...

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Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the past when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays they have morw opportunity to study abroad. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

since time immemorial, it has been common practice among students to visit another educational hubs in order to pursue further studies . These days , however, witnessed frequent trend of going abroad for studies which was almost negligible a century ago. This comes along with numerous blessings and drawbacks, as well which i will discuss in next essay.

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Many countries are experiencing population growth and need more homes.Some people think that new homes should be constructed in existing cities. Do you agree or disagree.

With the increasing population, need of accommodating large number of people has been posing a major challenge worldwide. Some masses think that constructing new buildings in existing cities is a solution to this problem but I disagree with it and will give my viewpoint in upcoming paragraphs.

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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s healt and capacity for work?

During the last decade several scientists have been studying how colours can modify people’s emotivity situation, giving particular attention under the point of view of the dynamicity and comfort provided being stimulated by the presence of different colours.

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Many students take part-time jobs while studying in the university. Discuss advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

Students studying in various universities often take part-time jobs which is a necessity rather than a desire. The various pros and cons of this would be explained in the following paragraphs.

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some people think that children should not watch television as it has negative effects while some people believe that they should watch television as it helps them in their future. discuss both views and give your opinion.

In Todays era, All most all the children are noticing television. It has both negative and positive impacts on children. Without entertainment they are not even eating their food. Parents should eradicate to watch television for full day. Viewing pictures on television is just for entertainment. The colors and graphics on picture is attracting to them.

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Today, most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?

In the salad days of the millennium, the society is polarised into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that whether giving confinement at thirties leads to a positive or negative development. Different people have their distinct mindset the following paragraphs would shed light on the positive development before making a final note.

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Many people think that every individual is responsible for their happiness, but people believe there are other external factors that influence us . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many psychologist s and neuroscientists believe that happiness is a choice and circumstances cannot direct a person to be sad or elated. However, some believe, there are various factors, which can make a jovial person, gloomy. I am in accord, with former opinion, as I believe, human beings have power to control their emotions. In the composition, both aspects will be discussed with pros and cons. To embark upon, some experts assume, many external circumstances, are responsible, for a person to remain joyful or depressed. These may be, loss of job or a loved one, divorce, poverty, physical or mental debility and any kind of physical or mental abuse. For instance, people who just lost their only child, may go into deep depression, this may lead to various psychosomatic disorders. Also, patients who are on wheelchair and limited ability to do even their normal chores, can be anxious and without hope, leading to chronic depression. In such conditions, it is very difficult to re...

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In various nations, there are a small number of people who can make significanly high incomes. While it is thought to be beneficial for the country, many others consider that the state ought to put it under survaillence as well as regulate how much one can make. In my opinion, I agree with the idea that more income depicts favourable impact on every country.

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Legislation should invest in railway rather than roads. To a great extent, I am agreeing with this following statement.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

Enviromental problems are one of the well known arguable topics among people.Someones think that loss of animals and plants are the basic problems others assume that we have more essential problems like weather disasters.

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Nowadays people try to balance their life and work with other things in life, but actually some could achieve it so far, what are the reasons for this and how can be solve this problem.

In the beginning of global era , People tried to focus more on their work life rather than dividing their attention to every aspects of their life. As things have changed over the past couple of years , People now prefer to maintain a friendly relationship between work and personal life. Although, They are making an effort to achieve the desired result but not many are able to achieve so.

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More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and the others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

In these days, the number of wild animals which stand on the abyss of elimination continues to increase as well as others are also in the red underlined list. As becoming a serious issue because of some reasons and there are specific solutions for this problem.

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with the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Due to the fade-away of original books and the increase of e-books, it is thought to be one of a great development of humans although there are still some of the people who think it in contrast. As a global change, it has its specific advantages and disadvantages.

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Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion on this? Do you think this is a good or bad change?

The debate over large shopping malls are replacing small shops is an old one, with attributes of people shifting throughout the debate over the years. Proponents and opponents make their cases to support their views on this unresolved issue. In my opinion, I support the former viewpoint because of social and economic reasons.

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