IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 894

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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People doing dangerous sports activities like scuba diving and bungee jumping should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people doing those sports. Do you agree or disagree?

Adventure sports have been on the rise in the recent times for people from the millieneal generation. Sports activities like Scuba diving and bungee jumping even though very exciting, they come with their own dangers. I both agree as wll as well as disagree with point that people going for dangerous activties should be responsuble for their own life and will discuss the same in this essay.

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Your school demands that you wear a school uniform. Do you think that you have the right to wear whatever clothes you wish?

Schooling years is a phase of life, almost all of us go through. However, it is highly debatable whether students should be given a choice for their attire they wear to school. This essay will discuss the importance of school uniforms and place forward an argument as to why students must adhere to a uniform dress code.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is the case? What can governments do to help the amount of rubbish produced?

Solving environment issues can be done either domestically or globally. There are some problems only can be resolved by a join effort of various international communities.

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Some people think woman should be allowed to join the army, the Navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think woman should be allowed to join the army, the Navy and the air force just like men.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of the aging population.

In this digitalised world , due to cutting-edge development in science and technology the average life expectancy rate is proliferating which will cause problems like overpopulation and over exploitation of natural resources but,its impact on the aging population can be mitigate which i will discuss in subsequent paragraphs. To commenc ,with the problems which will faced by the individuals ,the first and foremost will be to faced more old age delimmas lik...

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Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Why you think this is case? What effects this has on individuals and society in general?

It is true that time for leisure activities is allocated by only a small group of people. I strongly believe that there are some causes associated with these cases, and also a couple of consequences of this disturbing trend.

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Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

In modern world, the humanity flourishes on the communication and cooperation among each other. With the invention of new technology each day, it is becoming more evident that we are more dependent upon each other than ever before. Without working as a group, we won't be able to create various foods, medicine to cure almost every diseases and and predicting the weather; the three pillars of our survival.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Socialism and being a good member of the society is a crucial value every citizen should holds.However, there is always a debate going on regarding who will teach these values to children,whether its parents or teachers.In my opinion , eventhough educational institutions can taught them about the social skills, it is the parents who should make sure that their children are socially responsible. On one hand , schools have a fixed curriculum which is purely based on the academic subjects like mathematics, science and information tehcnology.They always strive to improve the performance of students in academic skills to enhance their intellectual development.Eventhough some governments are conducting programs like national service scheme, and community works to improve the social skills of students, around 20% of the schools are participating ,as they are more interested in other ...

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Tourism is not beneficial by many ? Write both view and give your opinion.

These days many schools prefer to stream students according to their performance; however, there remain some disagreement as many believe that this can bring several negative impacts on students’ life. In my opinion, I strongly believe that streming brings more problems than any advantages it migt bring.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Socialism and being a good member of the society is a crucial value every citizen should holds.However there is always a debate going on regarding who will teach this values to children,whether its parents or teachers.In my opinion , eventhough educational institutions can taught them about the social skills, it is the parents who should make sure that their children are socially responsible. On one hand , schools have a fixed curriculum which is purely based on the academic subjects like mathematics, science and information tehcnology.They always strive to improve the performance of students in academic skills to enhance their intellectual development.Eventhough some governments are conducting programs like national service scheme, and community works to improve the social skills of students, around 20% of the schools are participating ,as they are more interested in other sp...

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Some people say that when deciding how taxes should be spent, governments should prioritise health care. Other people believe that there are more important priorities for taxpayers' money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this contemporary world, every working person according to their income pay tax to law enforcement agency which they use for development of people. A section of society thinks that government should spend their budget mainly on health care whereas, others believe that other factors shouls also prioritise. This eassay will vivdly explain the notions along with my persective supporting to latter notion.

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Today more people are opting for cosmetic surgeries, hair colouring and other cosmetics. Why is this the case? Do you think this development is positive or negative?

Nowadays, many people are paying a huge amount of money to do plastic surgeries to change their shape to have a good look, particularly, youth people. This is mostly have a negative impact on individuals and society as whole, and few positive aspect as will be considered.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Education is important for children and normally, students obtain education mainly from school. However, some parents choose to teach their kids themselves instead of send them to school. And the number of parents who teach children at home is increasing nowadays. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this approach and settle with a conclusion.

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The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Stock Helper Project Outline 1. Quick browsing The app reads real-time data on Shanghai and Shenzhen stocks through Sina Stock api and updates every 3 seconds in the online process. The main part of the main activity is a ListView. Users can select some stocks and add to the list for quick browsing . This page displays the name of the stock and the real-time price. Click on each item to enter another activity to view other details of the stock, such as previous close, open price, day's Range, average price, bid and ask, K-line chart, etc. (these can be accessed or calculated from Sina stock interface). 2. Trading Simulation In this activity, the user can set up one (or more) demo accounts and set the initial funds. Users can place orders to buy and sell. A service will be create to monitor real-time information about the relevant stock during the opening time and conduct the relevant operation (complete the trade). Information about all the trades will be recorded in the data...

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The way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. Has this become a positive or negative development?

Undeniably, communication with others comprises of very essential aspect of life. Thereby any alterations in way an individual Communication has been arised because of modern technology Although, various advantages are associated with newly communicating technology, but some negatives are also linked which cannot be overlooked.

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More and more people go on traveling and touring today. What are its advantages and disadvantages? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern days people often started travel as recreation and extended it to business as well as educational purposes.Most of them are for the children's vacation period, career development, Office works, Migration for higher educations .There are various benefits involved in the journeys that have become popular these days.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime.other,however,argue that the circumstances of an individual crime,and the motivation for committing it,should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Disscuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think about should be fixed punishment for all type of crime. On the other hand,people argue that we should not give punishment we should only give motivation and awareness about the crime and after that we should live the individuals. In my point of view,its a good think and good impristion to live criminal people without punishment.

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grandparents play an important role in the upbringing of their grandchildren, do you think it is useful for them to be involved, give your opinion?

Family is what teaches a person values, wisdom, compassion, modesty and motive in life. Many of our grandparents have helped their grandchildren in one way or another in their upbringing. In my opinion, it is not completely necessary for grandparents to be involved in the upbringing of their grandchildren.

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New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

Its true that a cutting edge development in the field of science and technology put collosal effect on the spending of leisure time of juveniles I personally reckon that its postive effect cannot hides its inevitable drawbacks i will shed light on this in the upcominv para graphs. To begin with the first advantage from the point of view of society is alimenting the proliferation of antisocial activistes To examplify this whe...

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Education is not luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

Lack of resources like water is a major problem in many countries and become increasing.

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