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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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some people are born tobe leaders,while others believe leadership can be learnt.Discuss both views and give opinion

It is broadly believed that being leader is innate although others think that everybody can learn it who want passionately.I am convinced that it depends on individuals themselves,both statements can be truth.

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Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

The question of whether we should oblige parents to immunise their children against common diseases is a social rather than a medical one. Since we are free to choose what we eat or drink or how much exercise we take, why should the medical treatment we decide to undergo be any different?

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with health issue involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent you agree or dis agree?

Health is biggest wealth of people, but people normally doesn’t realize its value until they face any kind of health issues. It is considered by many people that introduction of more exercise classes and physical education lessons in school curriculum is greatest way to solve problem of obesity and health issue. This essay will argue that why more physical education lessons must be certainly introduced in schools.

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Stress related illness are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It is irrefutable that stress related illness are increasing rapidly. In this essay I intent to discuss its causes including increased working hours and bad diet. This essay will further explore some solutions to increased stress related illness, like work-life balance and good healthy diet.

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some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. others believe that they should only be allowed to study the subjects that will be useful in future, such as those related to science and technology. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The university students should study the subjects of their own choice or they should be obliged to study career oriented technology and science major subjects, is a widely debated issue. I think at the university level, giving a student choice to follow subjects of own interest has far more benifits.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

In few countries the health and fitness of the people is in a downward trend and their average body weight is going up at the same time. There are many causes that led to this epidemic, collective effort is needed from both the government and the people to deal with the challenge.

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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The number of children gaining weight in the developed countries is increasing rapidly. Rich countries are concerned about the high ratio of overweight children. In my essay, I will discuss few causes and effects of the said issue.

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With the pressure on todays young people to succeed academically, some people believe that academic subjects at school should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that removing non academic subjects at school syllabus can develop children to focus and excel academically. I completely agree that non-academic subjects should be eliminated so that kids can concentrate more academically. First, students can spend more time on academic subjects. Second, it can enhance more knowledge.

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It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Are family ties becoming weaker? It would be an error if we denied that family relationships are less relevant than before and this has been brought about by the change in our values , lifestyles and the lack of communication among members of the family.

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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In any underdeveloped country, providing the good health, education and trade is essential for the development. Industrialized countries should take the additional responsibility of developing these sectors in the poorer nations. I completely agree with the statement, it will be a long and tough road ahead for less privileged countries to take on challenge on their own, receiving the external help is the best way forward.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to travel or work for a year between finishing the high school and starting universities studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decides to do this.

Young age is the most suitable time to learn new things because during this phase people are more quick and more susciptible to adaptation. Considering the same, many countries are emphasizing on juveniles to explore the opportunity based on their interest in doing work or touring around new places for an year. In this essay, I am going to discuss the pros and cons of this footstep.

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Sample 2: Internet crime is increasing rapidly as growing numbers of people purchase goods over the internet. What can be done to tackle this problem?

The rapid development of the technology has brought about various merits to community, especially the e-shopping industry. In synchronization with the advantages, the cybercrime, is the online fraudulent, is the most worth-concerning drawback of this factor. From my own perspective, there are a lot of ways to solve it.

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Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Education is the utmost right of every individual and no rule should cause one been refrained from the same. However, these days many universities are planning or has started the intake of equal number of male and female students in every stream. Such step has been equally appreciated and criticized by the people on the larger platform. Since I agree to this thought to a limited extent, In this essay, I am going to discuss the both sides of the statement and its impacts.

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While, some people think playing video games is waste of time and it can adverse effect on the health of players.I am completely disagree with this statement. I will discuss their merits in the following paragraphs.

While some people think playing video games is a waste of time and it can adversely effect on the health of players.I completely disagree with this statement. I will discuss their merits in the following paragraphs.

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Recently, many people know a few of their neighbors. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and any example from your own experience.

It is a graving issue that, nowadays, people do not know the family living next door properly as they used to do earlier. This essay will put forward two factors which has accelerated this problem and proposed measures which might address them.

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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has becoming popular to control the children by some short of punishment. Physical penalty is the best way to control children behaviour. This essay will argue why smacking children is entirely necessary to teach them manners despite the parent’s emotion.

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Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel like it should be purely optional. Discuss both these opposing views and give your opinion.

Many hold the opinion that physcial activity is an imperative subject in educational institutions, whereas, others think that children should be given the right to decide whether or not they want to paritcipate in them.Both these views will be examined for the remainder of this essay, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

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Some people think that only staff who worked in a company for a long time should be promoted to higher positions. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe companies should only promote those employees who has been working for a company for a long time. I am totally agreeing with those as it give workers working in a company more sense of appreciation.

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Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero. Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.

The claim states that any individual, insignificant of gender, can not be regarded as a hero anymore. The reason supporting the claim, is that media tends to destroy reputation of a person in the spotlight. This essay repudiates the claim and the supporting reason.

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Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trenda and fashions than what individuals really want to do in their spare time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Leisure activites hold a vital place in everyone's life. Generally, people choose these activites on the basis on their own taste and preferences but nowadays, due to drastic shift in lifestyles and updating systems, these activites have also changed according to ongoing trends. I completely agree that presently fun related activites are undertaken merely to show off status and attract people around.

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