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Travelling to various countries has always been a fascination for people to experience and appreciate conventional heritage and culture. Tourism has flourished by leaps and bounds and countries greatly promote and support tourism. I too believe, that encouraging tourism has more benefits than drawbacks. In this essay, we will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of promoting tourism.
Its is true that , now a days people use their computer and technology for work or job at home because it is guide easy. This technologies has many advantages and disadvantage. These both consequences are discuss in the following paragraphs .
“Education is the root for a healthy community. Education gives knowledge and
It is widely believed that keeping your accommodation place, and your workplace clean is crucial .besides, people advise to organize your items in their proper place. In my opinion, I totally advocate the discipline and cleanness in your home, and in your occupation place .
It is argued that despite fossil fuel being the predominant energy provision, alternatives are being explored as a substitute and becoming an infinitely preferable option. It seems that this trend is greatly desirable. This essay will elaborate on some reasons to justify this stance.
The emergence of technological advancements, particularly internet, has an extremely pivotal role in revolutionizing our lives and influencing the economies all over the world. Nevertheless, some people are under impression that due to the use of internet, people sooner or later will have the identical thoughts and conduct. I also have the similar point of view which will be discussed in this essay.
The ability of recognizing between right and wrong is formed from very early years in a person’s lifetime. Thus some people are convinced that punishment is crucial in parenting in term of raising cognitive about good and bad. I advocate that raising children’s cognition, between right and wrong especially, should be done from toddler stage.
Many peaple argue in favot of the policy to increase the number of sports facities, for example gyms, gyms a means of improving public health. The others think that this is ineffective ond ofher methods need to be considered. I advocate the latter. By inairasing the nuber of spors anenties,people are provided uih nsre aolbble and acesble pluco to exercise at.Also,it focilitotes the busy to woit, out Moe offlen as tley no lonyer hore to drive out as for as betore.thure tore,itio rtoc Maly Yuat people uill sperd their fre tire exercoing in steod of doing _nonsenscol acthiulties,such ar cwutting or playhy ganes,ceside,erercise vmes our bodies to releose varios benefcial substares and relieres stress,increasing the pedychvly togetu witrhoppioess.Tn long tern,consistent exeiase ruy also leod to ie-contention as a whole. On the otler hord,to inocue tle nurber of sports toclithes is a Nrong, Soluhion to tle rumn pmbunThe achal pmnvlen is not thne lbodk of opeortunities ror re source...
Advances of modern technology have made the scenario of employees working from home come true. While some argue that employees are the sole beneficiaries, I believe that employers can also reap the rewards of this practice. Firstly, remote jobs accommodate workers with a far more flexible and efficient working environment than the traditional ones. Employees can set an environment tailor-made for themselves in terms of timing or decoration. This opportunity means that employees can get rid of unnecessary stress and restrictions from the workplace. Hence, a particularly ideal work space can secure efficiency of the workers, which is by no means detrimental to employers’ interests. Secondly, working from home is able to curb costly expenditures supposed to be paid by employers. In fact, by allowing employees to work at home, they can no longer need a large office building in which expenses for computers or electricity may be cut down on. Especially, for companies p...
Opinions vary on whether or not museums should be free for visitors. I can understand there are some positive effects, however, I am of the opinions that the advantages are eclipsed by the disadvantages.
In recent decades, global warming has been receiving a great deal of media attention around the world. Although the idea of co-existence with climate change appears pausible, people should find out some feasible solutions to combat climate change instead of accepting it in the long run. There are a number of reasons explaining for the co-existence with global warming. First, since it is believed that natural disasters are unavoidable, trying to resist them is hopeless. For example, Japan is particularly susceptible to earthquakes ,or some Asian countries get hit the most by typhoons due to their geographical location, thus combating global warming is in vain. Second, the expense of space projects is extremely high ,which discourages people from investing it to prevent climate changes. In fact, some people suggest that government funding should be diverted toward improving the living standard of ordinary people in lieu of investing in space projects, which means they accep...
In recent decades, global warming has been receiving a great deal of media attention around the world. Although the idea of co-existence with climate change appears pausible, people should find out some feasible solutions to combat climate change instead of accepting it in the long run. There are a number of reasons explaining for the co-existence with global warming. First, since it is believed that natural disasters are unavoidable, trying to resist them is hopeless. For example, Japan is particularly susceptible to earthquakes ,or some Asian countries get hit the most by typhoons due to their geographical location, thus combating global warming is in vain. Second, the expense of space projects is extremely high ,which discourages people from investing it to prevent climate changes. In fact, some people suggest that government funding should be diverted toward improving the living standard of ordinary people in lieu of investing in space projects, which means they accep...
In today's world, advertisement has become a significant tool for marketing a product. While some argue that advertisement increases awareness about products that may improve our lives, others are of the opinion that advertisement induces people to buy unnecessary things. I strongly believe that the latter is more correct, as will be explained.
n the present day world, an increasing number of people opt fast food over homely meals. Fast food outlets like KFC, Pizza Hut etc has become commonplace in almost every nook and corner of the world. Thus, people find it convenient to replace home-cooked traditional dishes with junk food.In my opinion, this development has more negative effects than positive. There are countless hazards that are brought in by fast food. First, eating a regular diet of processed food is the main cause for obesity. This increase in body mass make our body prone to lifestyle disorders like increased blood glucose, pressure and cholesterol levels.It will in turn deteriorate our health and may even lead us to depression. Thus it is evident that dining out regularly would negatively affect out physical and mental helath. Furthermore, as people turn away from traditional dishes, they would soon loose its significance. This will lead to decrease of diversity of various indegenous dishes. Moreove...
It is irrefutable that animals have a crucial role in maintaining the ecological balance on earth. It is argued that only those animals are to be protected those are imperative for the human being. Although, I am at completely discord with this statement as the animals play an indispensable part in human's life. This essay intends to elucidate the argument against the favour of my stance in the upcoming paragraph.
Youth are the citizens who need to takecare of soceity for next generation. They have have right to decide in which profession they need to choose, while some people say that parents need to select particular course and tell them to study or else they may take wrong decisions.
Who does not like to spend money? Now, people likely spending more money more than saving it because they would like to enjoy their life or show off to their friends. It happens to most people and it is a negative development which affects a lots to their future.
Authorities find it challenging to subsidies the health care system, due to the increase of financial requirement, which in turn, drives some people to suggest that the patients should provide themselves, on the other hand, others insist that health care should be governmental responsibility.
Some argue that technological imprivements will eventually lead to a loss on traditional culture from different parts of the world, as these two won´t be able to get along together in the future. It is not agreed that traditions are not going to be relevant with the advances of technology, because these last ones could even help the cultures to survive. The essay will firstly, describe how technology may help traditions not to disappear, and secondly, explain why some traditions will not ge...
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