IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 943

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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These days, mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantage of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times, there have been massive development in internet and telecommunication sector of many countries. This has enhance social interaction among people. Although the use of internet and telecommunication devices is not without demerits, the advantages outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their work life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People had different opinions about working at the same organization or different. People thoughts are not always same, it totally depends on their working conditions. For some reasons it is better to work in same place,while there are negative impacts from it also. This essay will examine the various reasons and the consequences of working in the same organizations.

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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.

Technological developments, especially computers and internet, have changed our lives substantially in the last three decades. Starting from the introduction of the first desktop computer, through the development of the laptops and smart-phones, and up to the new smart-watches and personal online assistance such as amazon's Alexa, it seems as though the internat and computers have taken over our lives. These devlopments have profound impact on our sociaty and the effects can be seen more a...

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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. There are two factors that influence their decisions. The first is the kind of customers they tend on. Because each kind of readers and watchers has its own features. For example, if your customers are almost teenagers, you have to concentrate on something attracting them such as stories, photographs about singer stars, film stars, funny tales, and young fashion. It will be very silly if you try to provide ...

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Language is the best way of communication. However, it is seen that many languages are getting disappear in this modern era. There are the people who believe that it will be convenient if there are less languages across the globe. I also support this opinion up to greater extent.

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Research indicates that the characteristic we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any other experiences we may have in our life.

Many reaserches have been performed in order to evaluate what affect our personality and character. Some believe inborn traits and genetics play a major role in establishing our behaivor. Others believe that education and social standarts shape who we will become.

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In some countries children take up paid jobs during the summer vacation. Some people feel that this amounts to child labour. Others argue that summer jobs help children learn valuable lessons. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Work ethic is a value that has to be instilled in a child’s moral code so that he may embrace the ways of success. However, it is imperative for us that we distinguish between a mere summer job and child labor. Thus, I ought to establish the definition of both.

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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead? Write at least 250 words.

Immigration means moving from one Nation to the other for various purposes, in order to earn a better living or with a passion towards other countries. Now-a-days, this has increased a lot from almost all the countries, for the satisfaction of their means. The impact is breakthrough, in such a way that, in the last two decades, the demand is four times to that of the previous years. This is engrowing chapter which is very much essential for the growth of economy too, along with the foreign ...

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

Presently, human interaction has evolved due to technological advancement. Technology has made the world a more connected place, however, at the same time, created isolation as well. Therefore, this evolution has a good and bad side.

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Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts, and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Art is a form of human creativity. However, some citizens believe that national spending on the arts is unnecessary and the budget for it should be allocated for other sectors. This essay will explain why I believe it is not true and deliver some supporting facts and opinions related to it.

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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by International fast food. Many people think that it is good to eat traditional foods while other believe that fast food is a good choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Cuisines are the basic necessity that are often enjoyed , owing to their various kinds. People try different foods that are being eaten in some countries and end up replacing their cultural food‚ so some individuals prefer to eat junk food‚while others maintain eating their traditional food . Is not it a bad thing to forget your cultural food and continuing with foreign's food? This essay would discuss both statements.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that the personal data asked by applicants is irrelevant and useless while others believe that it can prove beneficial to organisations. “But how can this data be useful?.This essay will discuss both the views in detail and give reasons why companies should collect the personal informatin of candidates.

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Some people think that recent innovations in technology have made life more comfortable and helped us to be more efficient by saving us time, while others argue that technology has made us less efficient. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Undoubtly, technology has helped the people to perform more effitienly, uncountles tasks. Certainly, this fact has positive effects, but also, negative ones. This essay will discuss some of these results.

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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

Government should invest more money on prevention of diseases rather than on treating them as the former is more important. I agree with it partially, because prevention is more beneficial than treatment, but every disease cannot be prevented.

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-children learn more by observing the behavior of adults.Do you agree or disagree?Give your openion with relevant examples.

It is stated that behavior of adults plays major role in the adopting and learning processes of the toddlers and adoloscents.In my opinion,I agree that adults influence the developmental and behavioral changes which occur in children.

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In some countries, young people often decide to work or travel for a time before they start their university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of doing this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

To finish high-school, is the first important step of a person’s life. This is because, once that level of education is reached, it is time to decide which one will be the path, the young adult will follow, for the rest of his life.

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Immigration has a major impact on society. What are the main reasons? What consequences it can lead?

People migrating to other countries has a great impact on society. While people who immigrate have their own reasons, nevertheless, immigration has its varied consequences.

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Sometimes people think that young people should be encouraged to leave their family a certain age, while others think that it's better for them to remain with their families. What is your view?

The time to leave the family house is always a big dillema for young people and in some cases for old people as well, because sometimes is easy for youngs to leave their parents house as soon they become adults and might be hard for that people that were always been very look after their parents (spoilted).

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Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

now a days, sharing information is key to the success of many individuals. however, many people believe that is good to disclose as much as information as possible by the scientists, academic researhcers. on the other hand, some people urges that they need to be very careful when sharing information. this essay describes both viewpoints. firstly, this essay will give the one side of perspective and secondly, i will define the other point of view, who are opposing. to begin with, sharing inforamtion plays a vital role in research, business and in the academic world. beacause, it helps to grow and gives more chances to explore in their particular field. for example, if a student wants to research and did not have proper guidance then the information that are provided by the research activities helps them out. this gives chance to many aspirants who are interested in public reasearch in turn helping the cfoommunity. on the other side, many people believe that some data is too...

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Some people think that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food, clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this modern world, people are allowing children to make their own decisions on living, sports and entertainment that resulting children in the state of selfishness . on the other side, some people believe that they want the children to make decisions about matters that bring change in them. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of public opinion. Firstly, I will discuss, why people think it is leading to a society of individuals of selfishness and secondly, I will explore about decisions that affect children. First of all, everybody should give freedom to children to make their own decision. But, some people believe that this is leading the society that thinks only about their own wishes. for example, my younger brother, who is 8 years old, always wants to watch his favourite shows. if we try to change the show, he will be frustrated and depressed. this kind of attitude doesn't help him in the long run. recent implication found that the children whose age is less than 1...

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