IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 945

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

Begininng of 20th century saw an overwhelming increase in social media use across the world.The people from every age groups are amongst the users of social media.However, there certain downsides to the use of social media.Potentail risk of being exposed to hackers is one the main disadvantage.In my opinion , there are more disadvantages to the use of social media than advantages and some of them are stated below.

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Some people think that it is parent who are responsible for teaching children to be good members of society. However, some people believe that it is the responsibility of schools and teachers. Whose responsibility do you believe it is?

Teaching children to become good members of society is extremely important because children will become adults that influence our society in future. Initially, the responsibility for teaching children falls primarily on parents as they spend great deal of time with children and are important role models. As children grow older and attend school the influence of parents diminishes and schools become an important part of children's learning not just in academic areas, but also in social behaviour. In this essay, the role of parents and teacher in teching children will be discussed. The influence of parents on their children should not be underestimated. Children spend the first years of their life almost exclusively with parents and therefore parents have a profound influence on the development of children. Throughout our lives people learn mostly by observing and listening to others, so time spent with a child and influence are dependent. This teaching extends across many area...

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the advantages?

Among experts, it is believed that the best thing for children to do would be starting to study a second language during primary school, while others think that they ought to do that at secondary school. I believe that the broad effects of such a change in the school sistem would be largely positive.

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people sleep less than before in may countries.Why do people sleep less?What effect does it have on an individual and society?

In various countries, individuals sleep comparatively less than before. This essay will discuss that the major cause of the same is overuse of electronic gadgets, and as a result various chronic diseases are impacting the health of individuals and the society as a whole. With the advancement of technology, people generally lay on their beds with tabs, mobile phones or laptops and unknowingly spend a lot of time on them before sleeping. The use of these gadgets at the time of sleep, not only kills the sleep hours, but also leads to over-stimulation of the brain which disturbs the sleeping pattern and thus leads to less sleep. The research done by Times Of India in 2019 clearly states that people who sleep with their gadgets, sleep for an average of 5 hours which is in contrast to the average 9 hours sleep. On an average, a person requires 8 hours of sleep and sleeping less than that leads to deterioration of not only individual's health, but also society. Various diseases su...

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Some people say that protecting the environment is the government ‘s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is a common belief that it is the Government that plays major role in the protection of environment while, others think that it is the responsibility of each individual. This essay will discuss both views in detail and argue that why people have more responsibility than the government.

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Some would argue that the efficient way of improving people’s health is adding the number of recreation and gym facilities, where others say that not only gymnasium facilities but also other steps should be taken for public health. I believe that not only playground facilities, But also we need to provide Health awareness to the public.

On one hand, Playgrounds are good for public health if the people are really using it. In current days, Most of the people are not given time for physical activities like games, exercises. As they are fully occupy their time for professional work. For instance The Times of India Survey conducted in 2018, they provided the report that 60 % of playgrounds are empty on week days. But In Saturdays and Sundays people are coming to the ground for relaxation. I believe that only increasing the spo...

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Some countries spend a lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion?

It is imperative to have a healthy lifestyle. A few nations incur a lot of expense to make the use of the bike more commutable. Although, there are various advantages to this, it cannot be the best solution to traffic congestion.

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country

Working abroad means working far from your homeland.

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The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

FUNDS UTILITISED IN THE REFURBISHMENT OF ANTIQUE BUILDINGS IN CITY CENTERS IS HIGH, ALTHOUGH SOME THINK IT WOULD RATHER BE USED FOR NEW INFRASTRUCTURES, I AM OF THE OPINION THAT MAINTAINING THIS OLD STRUCTURES IS THE WAY TO GO

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𝕄𝕒𝕟𝕪 𝕞𝕠𝕕𝕣𝕖𝕟 𝕡𝕖𝕠𝕡𝕝𝕖 𝕤𝕡𝕖𝕟𝕕 𝕒 𝕘𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕥 𝕕𝕖𝕒𝕝 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕚𝕞𝕖 𝕤𝕚𝕥𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕚𝕟 𝕗𝕣𝕠𝕟𝕥 𝕠𝕗 𝕒 𝕥𝕖𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕤𝕚𝕠𝕟 𝕠𝕣 𝕔𝕠𝕞𝕡𝕦𝕥𝕖𝕣 𝕤𝕔𝕣𝕖𝕖𝕟. 𝕋𝕙𝕚𝕤 𝕚𝕤 𝕖𝕩𝕥𝕣𝕖𝕞𝕖𝕝𝕪 𝕙𝕒𝕣𝕞𝕗𝕦𝕝 𝕥𝕠 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕚𝕣 𝕕𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕝𝕠𝕡𝕞𝕖𝕟𝕥. 𝕋𝕙𝕖𝕣𝕖𝕗𝕠𝕣𝕖 𝕡𝕒𝕣𝕖𝕟𝕥𝕤 𝕤𝕙𝕠𝕦𝕝𝕕 𝕤𝕥𝕣𝕚𝕔𝕥𝕝𝕪 𝕝𝕚𝕞𝕚𝕥 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕚𝕞𝕖 𝕔𝕙𝕚𝕝𝕕𝕣𝕖𝕟 𝕤𝕡𝕖𝕟𝕕 𝕚𝕟 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕤 𝕨𝕒𝕪. 𝕋𝕠 𝕨𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕖𝕩𝕥𝕖𝕟𝕥 𝕕𝕠 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕒𝕘𝕣𝕖𝕖 𝕠𝕣 𝕕𝕚𝕤𝕒𝕘𝕣𝕖𝕖?

𝕀𝕟 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕤 𝕞𝕠𝕕𝕣𝕖𝕟 𝕖𝕣𝕒, 𝕙𝕦𝕘𝕖 𝕟𝕦𝕞𝕓𝕖𝕣 𝕠𝕗 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕟𝕘𝕤𝕥𝕖𝕣𝕤 𝕒𝕣𝕖 𝕤𝕥𝕚𝕔𝕜𝕖𝕕 𝕥𝕠 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕥𝕖𝕔𝕙𝕟𝕠𝕝𝕠𝕘𝕪. 𝕊𝕠𝕞𝕖 𝕡𝕖𝕠𝕡𝕝𝕖 𝕓𝕖𝕝𝕚𝕖𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕛𝕦𝕧𝕖𝕝𝕚𝕟𝕤 𝕒𝕣𝕖 𝕨𝕒𝕤𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕚𝕖 𝕥𝕚𝕞𝕖 𝕓𝕪 𝕨𝕒𝕥𝕔𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕥𝕖𝕝𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕤𝕚𝕠𝕟 𝕠𝕣 𝕔𝕠𝕞𝕡𝕦𝕥𝕖𝕣. 𝕊𝕠, 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕤 𝕥𝕪𝕡𝕖 𝕠𝕗 𝕕𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕝𝕠𝕡𝕞𝕖𝕟𝕥 𝕙𝕚𝕘𝕙𝕪𝕝𝕪 𝕔𝕣𝕚𝕥𝕚𝕔𝕒𝕝 𝕥𝕠 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕚𝕣 𝕖𝕕𝕦𝕔𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟. ℍ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕣, 𝕠𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕣𝕤 𝕠𝕡𝕚𝕟𝕚𝕠𝕟 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥, 𝕥𝕚𝕞𝕖 ...

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Marketing and promotion is the key to a successful business.

Marketing nowadays plays an important and essential role in modern business. It has been argued that a company with excellent marketing strategy would be definitely successful. This seems a rather good idea but not enough, in several aspects, we can see that there is one factor which is very significant, quality and when combining with a good marketing will create a good achievement for the business.

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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Now a day, everyone is busy in their life with the work load.It is a well known said , that healthy mind always exists in a healthy body.If a mind is healthy,automatically the body is healthy. People don't get time to do physical exercises for their good health, but sometimes when they get leisure they prefer to do brain challenging games and some prefer to rest.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I totally agree that higher tax should be imposed on fast food inorder to reduce is comsuption, if this is done, it will further assist in decreasing the number of people suffering from health probelm as a result of consuming fast food. There are so many advantage of not eating fast food which I am going to discuss in this essay.

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"Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

It is commonly said that today’s children are pressurized as were yesterday’s adults. That’s true in the sense that children are facing harder and harder academic, social and commercial challenges. It is happening simply because of the ever increasing demands of life, from the same perspectives, on humans in general. While it is important that children excel in their age to become successful as adults, they must be shielded from the mounting pressure by maintaining a balance between material and psychological growth. As the global village becomes more and more competitive everyday, it becomes important for us to prepare for the fight, so to speak, earlier and earlier. This is realized by all, which triggers societies to push their juveniles during their learning stage. The other thing that is contributing to this ever rising pressure on children is the lack institutional opportunities, especially in developing countries. Now, more than ever, children are having to race e...

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Buying things on the Internet such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The internet is one of the best innovation that has ever happened in mankind. In my own opinion I totally agree that the advantages of buying things on the internet outweigh the disadvantages.

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When new towns are planned, it is more important to include public parks and sports facilities than shopping centres for people to spend their free time in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

When it comes to planning a new town, there are many issues that it's challenging for citizens. Some people do believe that public parks and sports facilities should be attached more significance than shopping malls. However, I disagree with the point of view.

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Some people say that supermarkets and manufactures have a responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging on the products they sell. Others say that it is the responsibility of consumers to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that supermarkets and manufactures have a responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging on the products they sell. Others say that it is the responsibility of consumers to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Some people say that supermarkets and manufactures have a responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging on the products they sell. Others say that it is the responsibility of consumers to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Some people say that supermarkets and manufactures have a responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging on the products they sell. Others say that it is the responsibility of consumers to avoid buying products which have a lot of packaging. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Some people say that supermarkets and manufactures have a responsibility to reduce the amount of packag...

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Some people think art such as sculpture and music cannot improve quality of people’s lives so the government should not spend money on them but on health and defense. What is your opinion?

Many believe that fields related to arts such as music and sculptures cannot bring about improvement in our lives, whereas people’s lives could be much improved if the governing bodies allocate more budgets to health and defense department of the country. Subjectively, I am inclined to firmly conquer by this assertion that health and defense are way more important for the quality life rather than having good state of art. This easy will shed light upon the imperativeness of the health and d...

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Nowadays,more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face. Is this a positive development?

In the salad days of millennium, social media become an irrefutable platform to raise voice for social causes. In present scenario, masses use online mode of communication to connect socially. In my opinion, it is a positive trend.

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Machines have replaced physical work in many industries. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Automatic machines have played an important role and replaced physical works in many industries. This essay hold the side that this phenomenon’s advantages outweigh its disadvantages.

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