IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1857

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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This sentence is not yours, plagiarism is important in IELTS writing. So if you have read this somewhere, you should change and paraphrase it in your own words.

Whilst a number of people argue that the old should live apart from young people and in particular area, others advocate that they should live with their children and other groups of people. There are rational arguments on both sides of this contentious topic which will be discussed in detail, followed by my own take on the matter.

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International travel makes people prejudiced rather than broad-minded. What are its causes and what measures can be taken to solve this problem?

It is irrefutable that international tourism has taken mammoth dimensions. Unfortunately, sometimes, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. In this essay I intend to delve into the causes of this situation and suggest some ways forward.

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the abilities will help you succeed in the profession of your choice

Public speakers who traditionally will talk face-to-face with the live audiences to explant the phenomena, inspire motivation for the young generations, even persuade humans to turn over a new leaf is one of the most important occupations all over the world. However, to be experts in this field, they are demanded many different special abilities like confidence, adaptation, and determination.

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Many people think that happiness relies on the responsibility of individuals, other think that is affected by other factors.Discuss both views and state your opinion by using examples from your personal experience.

People have different approaches regarding a happy life.Some people believe that happiness depends on the person. While others reckon, there are other aspects which determine the level of happiness. Therefore, ahead of my opinion, both the views will discussed further.

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In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

The bankrupt of numerous small stores in town are occuring in some nations because of the remarkable growth of bigger malls outside the town. However, it is said that this development will not only create lots of difficulty for people without car to reach the final destinations but also encourage the number of cars being used. But, I still believe that this transformation will bring back more pros than cons.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

It is argued that some people believe ,the violence on television and in computer games has a negative impact on the society.This essay agrees with the statement because people try to copy actions by watching various reality shows and violent games in computer which teach them to be aggressive in everyday life.

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With internet improvements, people can share views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is this a good or a bad thing? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, people's reviews of products and services are available on the internet to help others. Some people think this is negative, I believe, on the contrary, that it is beneficial and in this essay, both views will be discussed.

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In some countries , criminal trials are shown on television for the public. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, criminal trials have been televised in some countries to allow the public an opportunity to watch them. If asked, I tend to believe that it has more fruitful outcome than being disadvantageous and in the enusing paragraphs I will allude to these arguments further.

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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet.Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet.Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

It is a true that proper food consumetion has become healthy and disease free.while some people think that diet and health is self responsibility to take care himself, others believe the government should be responsible for improving the health of their nation. Therefore,ahead of my opinion, both the views shall be discussed further.

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Some parents think it is good to give their children mobile phones, while others disagree discuss both sides and give your opinion

Since the use of mobile become common worldwide, it is very usual to see people using it for different purposes. It is also become debatable topic for today's parents whether they should allow children to use mobile phones or not. I, however, believe that instead of giving mobile parents should teach their loved ones how to manage time as well as promote outdoor games for their Holistic development.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important? Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

Although it is sometimes thought that the key to stay healthy is to do workout regularly, other people believe that the focus should be on balanced diet. In my opinion, I consider that regular exercise is essential in maintaining a healthy body.

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It is a commonly held belief that the death penalty is a good deterrent to prevent heinous crimes. However, others believe that life long sentence is a better deterrent. Discuss both views.

It is undoubtful that every crime has to be punished and there are varying opinions on the method of punishments to be given for each crime. A good number of people believe that the ultimate penalty of death is the best option for heinous offence and they do even believe that this sentencing can prevent such actions. Some others believe in life time sentencing for atrocities. In this essay, I intend to delve into both the views on this heated topic.

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Governments should spend money on railways than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

The governments need to expense money on train roads than others.

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Caring For Children is very important for our society. therefore all mothers and fathers should take childcare training course. To what extent you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that to be a parent is one of the challenging jobs in the world. In order to accomplish this role, some parents choose to enroll in a parenting class before baby born. Therefore, it is true that a training course prepares a solid foundation for couples to get ready for the next stage of life. There are two following reasons that outline my points.

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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

Nowadays the editors of the news choose whatever they want to show on TV and to write on public magazines and newspapers. In my view, many factors that could affect their choice perhaps the desire and passion of the audience is the major one. Probably the most of what these media deliver to the public are bad news and this news that we hear every day become the norm, and they don’t anymore affect us as they used to when we had started to listen or read them for the first couple of times. I think that if the trend towards using media to deliver the information had been changed to inform us about the positive news around the world, the people around the globe would feel more optimistic and would have better health.

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Some people believe that educational success depends on good teacher others think that it depends on the attitude of the students. Discuss both the views and discuss your opinion.

Success in academics, according to some shrewd, relies on excellent tutors, whereas, other think it depends on student's motive toward studies, become contentious issue nowadays. I will discuss both the views in the upcoming paragraphs with my opinion.

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

The charts demonstrate the outcomes of a survey conducted to know some information about the education of people in their adulthood. The bar chart gives us the reasons behind choosing to study among adults whereas the pie chart illustrates the opinion of the public about the division of the costs between 3 different entities ( employer, individual, and taxpayer).

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In some countries, people are increasingly becoming vegetarians. Do the advantages outweigh it’s disadvantages?

In a number of places around the earth, an increasing number of people are turning into vegetarianism. While there are some disadvantages of this in terms of health especially low intake of protein, this essay believes that the positive impact of vegetarianism on environment outweighs any of it’s drawback.

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People often find difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives.Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make it easier?

A popular belief is that changing situations are difficult to get used to for most of the people. It may be result of the family life ,character or resistance to new situations and I believe with some steps ,you can adapt more easily than before.

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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effect on your children.Do you agree or disagree

Well to start with, nowadays the present generation is developing drastically and more and more facilities are being provided to children at a very young age and they are more engaged in computerize projects and activities.

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