IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5. Page 50

IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Most Countries allow 18 year olds to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Driving a car at the age of 18 can be unacceptable behaviour for some people, saying it should be at least 25, while others think it is okay to drive a car at that age, we will discuss both aspects in this essay.

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Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the enviroment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?

It is true that forest clearance done by human acitivity is occuring in several parts of the the earth with crucial consequences for the environment. In my perspective, there are various ways to solve or at least mitigate this issue.

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An increasing number of 18-year-olds are moving out of their parents' homes so they can live on their own after finishing high school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays, teenagers tend to leave their parental house once they become of age. This matter is dramatically increasing due to their desire not to be interfered with by anyone in their own lives. This common behaviour has its own pros and cons, which I will discuss from each perspective in this essay.

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The television is good for you. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of watching television. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience.

People have different views about the benefits and drawbacks of watching TV. While there are some drawbacks to watching television, I believe that watching shows usually has more positive effects.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is sometimes argued that with the help of music, we can bring people from different nations and ages together. I agree with this notion to some extent. The word "music" is a general term that refers to any kind of music. While there are a plethora of songs that have the potential to bring all individuals together, there are some kinds of music that not only cannot bring people together but also can separate them.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

There is a common belief that people are attracted to buy certain products due to the advertisements, while many disagree as promotion campaigns cannot capture the audiences’ attention anymore. This essay will discuss both arguments before concluding that I am in favour of the former.

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Atomic energy is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger. What is your opinion?

One of the new and popular sources of energy is Atomic source. Atomic energy can put all the countries in danger. This essay totally agrees with this idea because nuclear power can lead to serious environmental problems and can cause the killing of the citizens.

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Many employees can now do their work from home using modern technology. However, this change may only benefit workers, not the employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Working at home has gradually become a trend since the outbreak of COVID-19, and with the development of it, we are clearly aware that this trend is a double-edged sword for employers. On the one hand, it allows employees to allocate working time freely and thereby earns employers a good reputation; on the other hand, however, it seems to hinder the cultivation of team cohesion.

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“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it better to invest in preventative measures” To what extent do you agree

Prevention is always better than cure this statement is true . Investigating and then treating diseases is very costly people should take care of their health by taking some preventative measures such as doing health check-ups periodically , dieting and exercising. I totally agree with this statement and further in this essay ,I will explain my thoughts with some examples.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In some countries, the number of people who are interested in owning ancient buildings increases gradually. This essay thinks this is because ancient buildings have more benefits in terms of economy and that most people use technological devices to search the historic information.

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Obesity is an ever-growing pandemic that is affecting more and more of the world's population. The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. •What is the reason for the growth of the number of overweight people in society? How can this issue be resolved?

Obesity is an increasingly widespread epidemic impacting a growing number of people worldwide. The number of individuals at risk of severe health issues due to being overweight is rising. This essay will discuss about the causes of this phenomenon and give some solutions to tackle this issue.

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It is often said that crime is one of the main things that make the quality of life poorer. Crime in developed countries is one of the biggest problems in society. What are the causes of this problem and what measures can be taken to reduce it?

Many people believe that without crime and violence the overall quality of life would increase drastically. In my view, the main reason for this issue is the government's inability to provide basic resources and opportunities for everyone and it could be fixed by supporting those in need by giving a monthly allowance.

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Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.

The death penalty for people who committed a violent crime is promoted by some people while others think capital punishment is outdated. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the death penalty for people who commit violent crimes. I think people who commit violent crimes should learn from their mistakes and should get the chance to better themselves.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Some suggest that the optimal way of tackling unrelenting traffic and pollution issues is higher gas prices. Although this measure can curb these issues to some extent, I do not agree that it is the most effective one. Instead, less controversial options such as raising public awareness and popularizing less polluting modes of transportation should be explored.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

People have different views as to whether individuals should take risks in terms of their jobs and their private lives. In my opinion, despite there are drawbacks to this, I firmly believe it brings about many more benefits.

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Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it a positive development while others think it a negative development. Discuss both points and give your opinion.

We are living in 2024, where technology is at its highest place possible. Artificial intelligence is an amazing technology we have, and I believe that it is already more intelligent than humans. We are going to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of that in this essay.

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An increasingly number of professionals , such as doctors and teachers , are leaving their own poorer countries yo work in developed countries . What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation ?

These days, the world has been encountering evidence which name is migration; additionally, It is important that this happen the figure of people who are really good at their work leave both poor and not developed countries for work in developed countries. This essay discusses the problems that are a result of this happening and how can we solve this issue.

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Some people tend to take temporary jobs (they only work for few months of year), for they have time to do other things. Do the advantages and the disadvantages?

A handful of people are more conscious about doing part-time jobs as they give spare time to other activities. In contrast, there are some negative downsides to this argument. I agree with the view and will examine the positive aspects and drawbacks and provide my overall opinion.

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In the future, people may no longer be able to pay things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phone. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

It is estimated that in the coming days, online banking will take over the position of traditional one, and cash is predicted to be vanished. I tend to find myself among those who agree with this mindset which might be disapproved of by some residents due to lack of knowledge.

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Some people believe that it is best to encourage children to have a healthy diet at school while others believe that parents should be the ones to teach children to have a healthy diet.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals claim that it is good to advise young children to have a healthy diet at school while others believe that parents are responsible for educating their children to have healthy food. This essay will discuss both aspects and articulate the given problem along with my opinion and logical conclusion.

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