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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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Some people say that it’s important to have a lot of money to be happy. To what extent do you agree with this statement? What other things can make you happy?

Nowadays, all over the world, many people are discussing the topic of being happy. While some people think there are advantages of having money to be happy, other people think that advantages of other things also exist. From my point of view, I think the first perspective is the most persuasive, for the reasons discussed below.
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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is thought that there is a biggest reason behind medical care improvement is that humans are living longer and the life expectancy is growing. Although it has numerous pros, I believe that the drawbacks of this development outweigh the benefits which will discuss through the following essay.
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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. some people think that this is good for a country while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Give your own opinion.

It is admittedly true that paying high salaries can give extra motive among the employes while others believe that authority should control salaries. In this essay I am going to examing the question from both of view and give relevant examples.
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In recent years, the rise of ebooks causes the decline in paper books. Some people argue this is a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Over the last two or three decades the way people read books has changed dramatically due to major advancements in technology. Some people believe that the replacement of printed work with electronic books is a good development while others oppose this point of view. In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons of change and try to draw some conclusions.
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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Government funding with regard to art, such as music and theatre, has been a longstanding issue of debate - many people believe that their tax money should alternatively be spent on public services. Personally, I believe that both art and public services bring about different benefits to society, and so government investment in both is desirable.
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Nowadays, there are a large number of coffee shops and fast-food vendors on high streets and in town centres. Why are there so many of these outlets? What effect is this having on the society?

The food industry over the past few years has grown immensely. Resulting in an increase in the number of cafés and street food hubs. Through the following ,essay the causes of this rise and its impact on today's society will be discussed.
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Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions

It has been observed that many people are unwilling to maintain their fitness like they did before. This essay will explore the various factors that contribute to this trend, followed by some possible solutions to solve this problem.
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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all chops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or Disagree

Technology plays an integral role in our lives. No one can deny the fact that the local market will shut down in the future due to the online market becoming more popular. I am inclined to disagree with this phenomenon and several arguments support my perspectives, which will be elaborated in on forthcoming paragraphs.
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Mordern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

It is certain, that comtemperory technology has made it easier to download music and scripts from internet without any cost. I agree with the fact, that it will benefit many people who cannot afford to buy such exquisite items. But on the other hand , it will effect the book publication companies and music studio companies with heavy losses. This essay will discuss both the positive and negative aspects of this current trend.
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Some people think that poverty is the reason for most of crimes. do you agree or disagree?

In today's era, poverty has become a main concern for most countries. Some people think that poverty is the cause of most crimes. while others disagree with this statement. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with this statement. In this essay, I will explain why I agree with this and will provide examples to support my position.
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In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is debated topic that both spouses have to support financial position of family. In my opinion, I agree with this statement and the reasons to support my agreement are given below followed by a conclusion.
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Violence and crime have increased in most major cities of the world. Some people say this is because children now play violent video games online. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, most major cities around the globe suffer from the increasing violence and crime rates. While some people indicate that the prevalence of violent video games leads to children's violent tendencies. I believe there is no direct link between both of them.
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International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages ?

It is generally believed that overseas travel is cheaper and easier for more tourists. Although some drawbacks can be seen from this, I believe that the benefits are more significant. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the increase in the numbers of foreigners in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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University students always focus on one special subject but some people think university should encourage their students to study a range of subjects. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It has been frequently argued that graduating students ought to study their main courses merely, whereas, others say that they should study other courses as well. This essay intends to shed light on both perspectives along with my viewpoint in the upcoming paragraphs.
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Around the world, people are now living longer than ever before in the past. Some say an aging population creates problems for governments. Others believe there are benefits to society having more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of possessing an aging population outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, the amount of elderly population has increased significantly. Although some individuals argue that it will be a problem for states, I strongly believe this situation will have benefits over drawbacks.
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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is considered that people cannot do anything to enhance the environment; nevertheless, governments and large companies can have a great effect on environment. I completely agree with this view for some reasons.
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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It will be possible for all humans to speak the same global language in the future, which is predicted by scientists. In my opinion, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages because the traditional cultures may disappear.
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Research shows that children who do not have a healthy diet often also have a poor diet when they are adults. What do you think causes this? What is the best way to encourage children to eat more healthily?

The majority of children who grow up with a poor diet become unhealthy grown-ups. I believe it is the poor habits of their parents that affect their whole life.
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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Nowadays, violation stories and films have become favourites among many people in most countries in the world. I believe people are very fond of these books and TV shows. In my opinion, this is a natural issue because it is related to people`s interests. I want to discuss this topic in this essay.
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it is not neccessary to travel to other places to learn other cultures of other people

Recently, some people have argued that there is no point in taking trips to explore other places’ cultures. Instead, people can learn such things from books, movies, and the Internet. Personally, I disagree with this statement as not all sources of information are trustworthy, and traveling in person might give us a much more precise experience.
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