IELTS Writing Samples Band 6. Page 98

IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In modern society, media has brought about a significant impact, particularly with the increasing accessibility of celebrity coverage. The question of whether this contributes to detrimental effects on children has become a matter of considerable debate. From my perspective, I firmly agree that media coverage of celebrities can have harmful effects on children.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university education benefit individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It is thought that students who study at universities gain more benefits than society so they have to pay full school fees. This essay will disagree with that statement by the economic hardness and dedication of post-graduate pupils.

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childhood obesity has become more and more popular.

Obesity in children is worsening at an unprecedented rate and many discussions have been made to overcome such a situation. Some people view that the best way to prevent obesity in children is by banning fast foods and sweet snacks in schools' cafeteria. Although I believe it is a good precautionary measure, I do not agree it is the best way to fight against child obesity.

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with the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

In our modern world, new inventions and developments are being made day by day, such as social media which allows people to socialize and create a bond with others even if they do not step out of the house no matter how old they are. However, social media applications are not a substitute for face-to-face interactions. In fact, people who interact with each other usually want to meet up so as to further strengthen their bond. In that case, malicious people might abuse the innocence of usually the younger generation in this type of situation. This essay will discuss the possible solutions for this danger.

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The following is a diagram of the mobile phone recycling process.

A glance at the flow chart delineates information about the cell phone recycling process. Overall, it can be explicitly perceived that this procedure includes four general stages.

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The figures below compare the number of internet users in several European nations as well as the prevalence of online shopping in these countries.

A glance at the table and the pie chart delineates information about surfing on the Internet for some countries in Europe, the former focusing on the number of users in the years 1995, 2000, and 2004, and the latter concerning the popularity of shopping using the Internet in 2004. At first sight, it can be explicitly perceived that the distinguished European nations generally were charmed more engaging the Internet over the chronological framework, accompanied by Britishers and Frenches as the maximum users per the three years and shoppers through the Internet in 2004, respectively.

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It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often deemed by a few individuals that purchasing high-cost wardrobe provides more value for money compared to the cheaper options. I completely agree with this statement and this essay contains several arguments in support of my view.

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Some people say that the amount of noise that people make should be strictly controlled. Others say that people should be free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Releasing our expression in public space become one of the human rights of mankind. While most people think that making noise everything they want is allowed, I side with those who think that noise made by people has to be limited.

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Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

With the high development of technology and science, people have more and more opportunities to use modern internet facilities to keep in contact with other inhabitants around the world and update new information. From my perspective, I suppose these phenomenons have more benefits than drawbacks mentioned in this essay.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

As the available job fields are getting more competitive, some undergraduate students have a strong desire to enhance their skills by learning other subjects which are related to their primary subjects. Meanwhile, others think that focusing on one subject to boost their qualifications is more important to do. Personally, I agree that university students should improve their skills by having other subjects because they need to embrace their passion as well as build networking experiences. A further explanation of my point of view will be provided in this essay.

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Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express their thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Certain individuals believe that artists need freedom of expression to develop and showcase their skills. I overwhelmingly agree with this opinion and in this essay a plethora of reasons and examples will be explored to prove my opinion.

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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email • describe where you lived when you were a student at the university • recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation • warn him|her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

It was such joyful news to hear about your admission to the same university where I completed my studies.

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There is a lot of pressure and stress in many people's lives. What are the causes of this problem? What could be done to reduce it?

Nowadays,there is an intense debate about what is the effective way to teach our kids . While lots of individuals believe that internet reading items must be used for a toddler to show him how to read , others think that just a handbook has to be taken. I completely agree with the initial attendance.

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Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A majority of humans think that individual adolescents are more rely on other ones while some humans believe the opposing argument is more correct. The author agrees with the opinion that more and more humans rely on their parent’s wishes or dependence on other choices.

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Organizing a large family celebrations, such as a wedding can often create problems. What can be the problems associated with organizing a large family event and what solutions can you suggest?

Large family events, such as weddings, are significant occasions that bring joy and celebration. However, they can also be sources of stress due to the challenges they present. Perhaps , this party will cause great losses and also discomfort.

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Some people believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The significance of education has been highlighted over the past decades. From this aspect, some opine that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers, but others hold the view that money for education would be better spent on teachers. This essay will discuss both views and then my personal opinion will be suggested.

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Some people believe that watching TV is bad for children, while others claim it has positive effects for children as they grown up. Dicuss both views and give your own opinion

Whether or not letting children watch television will have detrimental effects on their health is still a controversial argument. The writer believes that it will cause a sense of addiction and a lack of general behaviours in the young.

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Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that watching television has an adverse impact on children, whereas other people believe that it brings various benefits to them.Although it is proved that there are benefits for watching TV, I believe that the downsides of this phenomenon is more significant.

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Sea Glider Shows Underwater Potential what it mean?

A strange-looking yellow "fish" has been lurking in the waters off the southern coast of Vancouver Island recently. Called a Slocum underwater glider, the 1.5-metre-long, 52-kilogram torpedo-shaped vehicle is under evaluation by the federal government’s Institute of Ocean Sciences (IOS). Driven entirely by a variable buoyancy system instead of a propeller, it needs no mother ship for tethering or support. The evaluation project is a formal collaboration between Fisheries and Oceans Canada and the Canadian Centre for Ocean Gliders (CCOG).

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In contemporary society, the internet has access to all news and websites while newspapers become venerable. I strongly agree with this statement Reading news via Internet is more convenient so newspapers become old-fashioned.

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