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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality high school students should be encouraged to question and offer criticism on their teachers. Others think this will you lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is often believed that students should be encouraged to be critical of teachers for the advancement of learning quality while other people are concerned about it leading to the loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. I partially agree with the former, for a positive attitude toward learning allows them to be more independent thinkers regardless of the potentially hostile relationships between teachers and students.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your and answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is sometimes argued that all kinds of vehicles will be driven without humans in the future, and just commuters will be inside the transporter. While there are some drawbacks associated with driverless. I believe the main benefits are more substantial.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

I firmly agree with the statement that weekends should be extended so that employees can work less. This essay will explore several reasons why I believe the working week should be shortened.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is argued that sharing knowledge extensively in the fields of science, business, and technology is beneficial for society, however, there are some who consider the unrestricted flow of valuable information to be dangerous. It's hard to take sides in this argument, I believe that there are certain situations where both parties are right, and will discuss both views.

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In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

Around the world, many traditional festivals these days are at the risk of becoming outdated or irrelevant. This disquisition illuminates the reasons for the disappearance of norms and suggests some pragmatic solutions to protect them in the family or society

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Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. This has negative effects on themselves and the society they live in. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent years, a significant number of young individuals have allocated a considerable portion of their leisure time to exploring and engaging in activities within shopping malls. This trend has the potential to yield adverse effects both on the individuals themselves and on the broader society. I strongly endorse this perspective, and my opinion will be discussed in further paragraphs with a suitable conclusion.

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More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions?

Nowadays, carbonated beverages are being drunk by a vast number of individuals. In fact, there are two compelling reasons for this, which is their low cost and their easy access to the general public. However, there are two effective remedies that could tackle these issues. Firstly, the government could increase the taxes on carbonated drinks and, similarly, restrict them in schools and workplaces. This essay will further elaborate on the reasons and the solutions to this phenomenon.

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In many parts of the world, people search for family history. Some people think that finding for the previous generations is a thing to do, but others think that it is better to be focus on present and future generations. Discuss both views and show your opinion

In some places, researching the history of your ancestors has become increasingly more common. Some people believe it is necessary to give all their attention to the present and the future since it gives them more time to spend with loved ones. However, I strongly believe knowing your family history is a crucial element to nurture your heritage and traditions.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

If people were to agree on the most fearful threat to human health, it would be likely disease. Health care plays a crucial role in individuals’ lives. I strongly believe that health conditions should be diagnosed by expert doctors for accurate diagnosis, while homemade remedies can contribute to serious problems.

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Some people think that marketing and adversiting is useless because people buy their products from some shops which have good quality of services and products. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, technology helps us to produce a lot of goods which getting better our lives; however, sales of these things are big problems; as a result, companies use marketing and commercials to sell their products, but a group of people think these ways are not the best owing to the fact that population prefer to buy their things that they need from shops having good services and produce. I spoil this idea due to the fact that marketing and publicity are the best choices for introducing new things and changing people's beliefs.

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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is said that since electronic devices have the function to interpret in a fast and precise way, it is not necessary for us to learn new languages anymore. This essay totally disagrees with the statement and believes that the more languages we know, the better our lives become because we can not use translation tools in real-life conversations, and being able to speak different languages offers many learning and working opportunities.

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In some coutries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them

A number of individuals are suffering from weight gain issues which is why their health grade is affected detrimentally . The main reason behind this is the increase in sedentary nature and preference for junk food. However, the solution would be the conduction of sports education for younger and by raising awareness in the community.

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Many countries spend a lot of money on improved transport for urban areas while neglecting rural transport. What are the problems associated with this? What are some possible solutions according to you?

The modern world tend to develop at a hectic pace, and while some areas of development get extra attention and are perfectly covered, others seem to be neglected.

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Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

These days, it is a common concern that many students find it hard to focus and pay attention to their studies at school. I believe that this situation is due to a combination of reasons and solutions will be provided in this essay.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

Technological advancements significantly altered traditional lifestyles by introducing cutting-edge and internet-based applications. citizens' daily interactions with each other witnessed a tremendous shift as a result of convenient electronic devices. This essay will discuss how this happened and whether it is an upside or a drawback.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some believe that living abroad can drive severe social issues and real-life obstacles. I strongly agree with this statement as this can raise communication barriers and difficulties in using and adapting to some services.

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Cultural traditions are important in many societies. To what extent do you think maintaining cultural traditions is important in a globalized world? What other measures can be taken to preserve cultural heritage?

Cultures and traditions are the most integral part of our society. As globalisation has removed the border restriction our cultural values have dimnished already because of it. It is extremly crucial to maintain some values and rituals based of our traditions to pass on the legacy to the upcoming generation. And multiple steps could be taken to preserve that heritage. This essay will explore some reason and methods to conserve the traditional values.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals compete in different aspects of their life such as occupation, education, and normal life while others prefer to collaborate with people. Both perspectives require careful examination, which we will discuss here.

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that assistance with humanitarian relief should be extended to underdeveloped nations during natural disasters. This is because wealthier countries can afford to help and this act will develop a strong bond between the nations that can benefit all parties involved. Therefore, this essay completely agrees with the statement above.

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To what extent do you agree or disagree that the disadvantages of global homogeneity outweigh its advantages?

Global uniformity, driven by globalization, refers to the increasing standardization of cultures, lifestyles, and consumer habits worldwide. Although this trend promotes international collaboration and cultural exchange, I believe that its drawbacks, which are considerable, surpass its benefits.

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