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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some experts believe that it's better to begin learning a foreigh language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's modern world, learning a foreign language has become very important. Some specialists believe that it should be implemented in primary school instead of secondary. I would like to discuss both aspects of this and give my opinion on this.

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There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important reason/factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a general perception that monetary gain is the most significant driving force that keeps an employee or an entrepreneur working. However, in my opinion, this is certainly not the only reason to keep it up.

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Many people think that every individual is responsible for their happiness, but people believe there are other external factors that influence us . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The majority of the population think that each and every person is responsible for their own joy or sorrow and also a few may think there were some other reasons which were influencing separately. For sure, there will be some kind of individual in every part of the world.

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In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

In this cutting-edge technological era, cultural functions are disappearing at a rapid rate; as a result, it is posing various threats to society. Affirmative actions should be taken in order to address the issue. Both problems and solutions would be captivated in the following paragraphs along with the conclusion at the end.

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A country’s future depends on its young people. Therefore, a country should invest heavily in its youth. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Investing more towards the development of the younger population of the country is crucial as the future lies with them, while I completely agree with this statement, it is also important to consider the maturity the veterans bring to the table.

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is a notion that having a Bachelor's or Master's degree is the most effective method to land a high-powered job.However,other individuals think that possessing extensive background and improving abilities is crucial.

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In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it became more popular in many areas of the world to notice restrictions regarding smoking in public spaces and that smokers need to leave closed spaces if they wish to light up a cigarette. In my personal point of view, I completely agree with these rules and this essay will further elaborate on my opinion in the following paragraphs.

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Space explorations costs tax payers an extra orbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on space explorations?

Space research costs taxpayers to pay extra big funds each year, and the nation becoming powerful more by doing explorations but some disadvantages like an economic burden. In the upcoming ,essay I will clear all the points.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.

First of all, The Government of every nation should focus on all the problems so that an individual can live life to its fullest. Authorities should spend money on railway tracks instead of pathways. I do not agree with this opinion and will illustrate the reasons below.

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Some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity ,improving the neighborhood or teaching sport to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are two various views on high school programs topic. A part of society opines that unpaid community services should be added to the high school curriculum. While another part believes that students should focus on only studying. From my perspective, firstly adding some charity tasks to the high school programs should be considered. In the following essay, both views will be explained and also I will outline my belief.

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Some countries are struggling with increases in crime rates. Some believe that having more police on the streets is best way to reduce and combat crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An increasing number of criminals has struck fear among nations. While some claim that enhancing the police workforce on the streets is the optimal way to cope with crimes, I strongly believe this is not the most efficient way, and there are better solutions to this phenomenon.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justify while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people have reasons for being advocates of high salaries given to sports professionals. First and foremost, there is a limited time to work as an athlete. Most sportsmen can participate in matches by age 35, meaning they cannot work for thirty years as in other occupations. Consequently, this significant sum of money is necessary to support the rest of their lives. In addition, sports players have demanding jobs. In other words, their job requires a long time of practising to achieve an acceptable level of fitness and strength. Thus, they do not live the normal life as others, for instance, spending enough time with their families, and usually, they are in the campaigns of matches which is another reason to receive astronomical salaries.

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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature.

The scarcity of food supplies has been one of the alarming issues in the world. Some people believe that using insects for food purposes would help to increase supplies due to their availability and cooking simplicity, while others are of the opinion that it would mostly bring negative consequences in the form of diseases and bird extinction. This essay will analyse the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

People claim that zoos provide no benefits in the modern world and should be shut down. Definitely, there are some issues that are caused by zoos. Albeit, there are some options can be introduced to replace them. This essay will demonstrate the problems zoological gardens produce and illustrate the system which has the potential to replace them.

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Some people believe that residents are responsible for keeping the roads clean and others say that it is the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

It is often considered few masses argue that road cleaning should be done by colony peoples because they are responsible to clean nearby locations. Meanwhile, a group of people believe cleaning charges should be handled by the government. In my, inclined residents are equally responsible for cleaning roads. thus this essay will elaborate on both views which leads to a logical conclusion.

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Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays money has been transferred via cellphones and the internet to household members, friends and businesses. However, it has brought a few negative developments such as cyber fraud and data loss, it has largely been evaluated in solving daily life problems. In this ,essay both effects have been elaborated on in the looming paragraphs.

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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

As the world population is skyrocketing, it has been more difficult to cope with a lack of food, which causes people to suffer from starvation across the world. Thus, insects are introduced as an important method to solve severe famine at the moment, and also in the future. However, there are both pros and cons to this matter.

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Some people think that studying online is far more effective than studying on campus while others believe that studying on campus is the most effective way to learn. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people consider that the most useful method of education is online studying rather than campus, while others do not. There are pros and cons to this view. I believe that the most effective approach to studying is learning via the web.

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Some people say that it is a waste of time to focus on future and important to focus on present. To what extent do u agree or disagree ?

Time management and planning are the key parameters to achieving long-term prosperity. Present-time success generally does not evolve from current activities, whereas they are the results of activities , efforts , planning and time management that have been taken care of in the past. It has disagreed to the larger extent that to focus on the future is waste of time. The upcoming paragraphs outline the necessity of investing time in the future by exemplifying their impact on science and technology and business.

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Some people believe that printed books are no longer necessary in this digital era as all writings can be stored electronically. Others think that printed books still play an crucial role. Discuss both perspectives and give your own opinion?

It is considered argued that printed books are not important in this modern world because all charge are now stored digital-based. While Others believe that printing books have still doing an essential role in society. In my opinion, Is good to store information online based and it is easy to carry everywhere instead of dairies I will discuss both views in the upcoming paragraphs.

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