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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?

There has been an inclusive debate about whether taking a chance on uncertainty would provide benefit to the taker or not. The supporters claim that taking a risk on their jobs or private lives will help them to grow up and become successful, while the critics argue that it is too dangerous and not worth it. In my humble opinion, I believe that there are various pros to taking a risk.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Historical literature is an interesting topic to indulge in. In many regions, the public are deeply involved in investigating the past of a dwelling or building they live in or are planning to move. This essay will explore the reasons for this behaviour and the practical ways in which the research for it may be facilitated.

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People today can shop,work and communicate with others via the Internet instead of face-to- face communication. Is it a positive or negative development?

Thanks to the advancement of the Internet, it is not necessary for people to either go out to meet their demands or talk to others. In my opinion, I am convinced that this phenomenon is one of the culprits of exacerbating the unemployment rate as well as lowering the economic level.

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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Citizens are assets of a Nation. They spend all their healthy time for the nation's prosperity and the Nation should take care of them during their difficult time. There is an argument that governments should avail all the medical services to the public free of cost including the expensive ones. I fully agree with the statement and we discuss this in this essay.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about whether some professionals should work in the country where they studied. In this essay I am going to discuss both sides and explain why I believe that these people have the freedom to work in any country.

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"Prevention is better than Cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extend do you agree.

According to scientists and health experts, Prevention is better than cure. This essay strongly agrees with the statement because of the lot of pain involved during the treatment process and the waste of time as well as money.

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Some people believe that it is good for children to do chores. Others, however, say that children should not be asked to do household tasks. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It has become debatable whether children should ask to do domestic work or not. This essay intends to analyse the validity of both perceptions before forming my opinion.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture & character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or not?

In today’s ever-changing society,fashion has become a huge part of this generation’s lifestyle.While many argue that is it easy to ascertain someone’s background and beliefs from the way they dress,others contradict this.I partially agree and disagree with this notion for the reasons that will be addressed in this essay

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Some people think teaching children with different abilities together benefits everyone, while others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

This essay is aimed at addressing the old, emotionally charged issue of whether streaming or mixing should be recognized as a positive approach to educating children. Generally speaking, I should argue that the latter outdoes the former.

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Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children, while others think it is the fault of the parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some crowds believe that their children`s fatness is because of the government , but others think the parents are the main reason for this problem . On one hand , obesity in children may happen due to neglect from parents , on the other hand , the government may not give appropriate attention to this issue . This essay will discuss why the government should be more responsible than parents for such a problem .

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The 21st century is known as a digital era, which is referred that most people, especially the young generation have started utilizing mobile phones in terms of many purposes, starting from educational ones and ending up with spending leisure time on them. Consequently, this trend led to an addiction to phones and I find it to be generally a negative effect.

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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, We tend to seek comfort and ease in everything possible. The trend of visiting a local store or a supermarket to buy pre-cleaned, chopped and overly-packed groceries is rising exponentially. This eventually has a dreadful impact on both the ecosystem and our health. Some of the concerned people think that the producing companies and superstores should decelerate the activity of packaging their products whereas others feel that consumers should stop purchasing such items.

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the number of students that read books for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years.What are the reasons and how can we encourage children to read more?

Nowadays, as digital technology is empowering globally, students are showing more interest in electronic devices which gives convenience to reading stories, articles, newspapers and many more on Mobile, tablets, and laptops. Due to this reading books is drastically coming down.

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Some feel that individuals should try to assimilate completely to the country where they live while others feel it is more important to preserve their native culture. Discuss both side and give your opinion.

In recent times, thanks to modern technologies and the invention of aircraft and trains, humans are allowed to immigrate more and more. Some loud that newcomers should adapt to the new culture completely. Nevertheless others claim that they should preserve their cultures. I personally contend that both views are vitally crucial to some extent. In the following essay, I will discuss both perspectives as well as explain my idea accurately.

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In recent years, economic growth has made some people richer in both developed and developing countries. While studies show that people in developing countries are happier now than before, people in developed countries are no happier than they were before. Why do you think this is and what lessons can be learned from it?

People are considered to become wealthier as a result of the recent economic boom worldwide. Having said that, a significant development gap has been pointed out as the trigger of a paradox in the increasing level of happiness among those living in emerging and prosperous nations. This essay will therefore deliver further explanation on the aforementioned phenomenon and its implication, before coming to a reasoned conclusion.

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in most of the countries, people prefer to live in rented appartment rather than buying a home? what are the advantages and disadvantages of iving in rented accomodation?

In several ,nations it has been seen that individuals are choosing to stay in a rented flat instead of buying their own. However, it has a few disadvantages such as, they can not decorate the walls without the owner's permission and have to share the things with others. Despite this, it has some advantages in terms of saving property expenses and easy to move to a new place without any concern. Both notions are elaborated on in the looming paragraphs.

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Some people think that studying online is far more effective than studying on campus while others believe that studying on campus is the most effective way to learn. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people consider that the most useful method of education is online studying rather than campus, while others do not. There are pros and cons to this view. I believe that the most effective method of studying is learning via the web.

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Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Other people say that subjects such as music and sports are also necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that to have a bright future, schools should create conditions for students to focus on academic subjects. Some individuals believe that not only important educational subjects but also artistically gifted subjects need to be studied. In my opinion, I partially agree with the need to study all subjects.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In recent times, many students are taking a gap of one year right after they are out of their higher secondary schools. The main benefits of this are sufficient preparation time for the competitive exams and getting admission at the top educational institution, however, the key drawbacks are fear of failure and loss of time and money.

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The development of modern technology in communication has benefited some people; however, others have had no benefits at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

On one hand, existing technology has positively influenced certain individuals; on the other hand, it might have been useless for other users. I absolutely disagree with the latter because technological advancement has been beneficial for every individual to a certain extent. So, the notions will be examined in the essay.

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