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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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When students move to a new school, they sometimes face problems. How can schools help these students with their problems? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

Nowadays, many students decide to change schools for several reasons in their careers, and sometimes they have to deal with new problems. In my opinion, educational institutes can provide assistance for these individuals by organizing open days and including them in activities with other students. In this essay I will explain my point of view and I will provide some examples.

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With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

These days, not only every technology but also online communication is increasing day by day. So, our life is easy and we have many opportunities through an online connection, as well, it has its benefits and drawbacks. In this essay, it will be considered about its with examples.

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Nowadays, many schools find it profitable to sell unhealthy food and sugary drinks to students during lunch breaks. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a tendency, nowadays, that due to food accessibility in developed countries, students have more eating options in schools. Thus, many places serve unhealthy food for their students during lunch breaks. I think this is absolutely unacceptable and should be banned. That is, in the forthcoming paragraphs, I will elaborate on the main negative problems related to the issue.

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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, others think that it is to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both view and your opinion.

Leisure time is known as the time left over from doing daily errands like homework and washing the dishes. Some people use that leftover time to improve their minds like studying a new language while some use it to take their mind off work like listening to music. I am going to discuss both sides of the fence and give my opinion on this situation.

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With the development of technology children are now living in a world that is completely different to what it was 50 years ago. What problems does this cause for society and the family?

Over the past 50 years, the development of new technologies has been drastically increasing that affects people's daily lives and especially children. Some public argues that these kinds of new inventions are advantageous, while others believe that this advancement has a negative impact on people live's. This essay will discuss the disadvantages of automation on society and children.

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Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out, although people have been aware of this problem for a long time. Why do people do so little about it? Give your suggestion how to solve it?

There is no denying the fact that as humans we are well aware that most species of plants and animals are becoming extinct. And the sad truth is we did not take any proper measures to prevent this.I believe nowadays mankind is focusing more towards technological advancements and in turn, often forgets the important things.

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Childhood obesity has become a serious problem in recent years. What are the primary causes of this? What measures should be taken to reduce childhood obesity?

In this day and age, the increasing weight among children has become a matter of great concern. This is mainly due to the increase in the use of fast foods, but it can be controlled by educating the parents as well as the children.

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Road accidents are more frequent these days and claim many lives each year. As a result, some people suggest that drivers should take regular driving tests throughout their lives, rather than one single driving test, to improve the situation. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of repeat driving tests? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

At present, deaths due to road accidents claim a significant portion of accidental deaths and have become very common in society. Hence there is an argument to implement repetitive driving tests expecting to minimize to mitigate the risk. Since there are advantages and disadvantages to the matter, I believe it is always advantageous while adopt a few changes than not entirely doing it.

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Living in a country where you have to speak in a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Do you have difficulty writing a to what extent do you agree or disagree essay?

Residing in a place where you have to communicate in a language which is not native to you can create problems socially as well as practically.I partially agree with this statement because every individual's accent resembles their culture, tradition and identity. However, communicating in a foreign speech makes you feel comfortable and can easily mingle with a native congregation.I will cite my notion about opinion in this essay.

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The high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising but not the real need of the society where such products are sold. Do you agree or disagree?

Advertising is well-known as a method of promotion. It is a method used by corporations to introduce their product and services to the market, attract the eye of customers to increase sales.Critics of advertisement argue that this method is only to increase sales by inducing consumers to buy things that they do not need in their daily lives. In my personal perspective, this contention is self-evident. In further paragraphs, I shall explain this statement in detail.

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Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think the success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is no doubt that victory is the ultimate goal for numerous athletes. Many citizens believe that physically strongest persons and groups can get to the highest success in sports. However, opponents claim that the psychological state is way more relevant to success. Additionally, I agreed with the latter view.

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Is is sometimes said people should be encouraged to get married before the age of 30 as it is best for society. do u agree or disagree?

In this present world, the importance of being married is constantly on the rise, especially before middle age,which is better for the person's life and community . my opinion, I totally disagree with idea that should motivate youth to get married at an early age , for many reasons I will mention in the following paragraphs.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some believe music can unite people from diverse cultures or generations. I totally agree with it, and I will go through my point of view in this essay.

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One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

One of the biggest issues faced by the majority of metropolises is traffic jams. The main reason for this is that there are always the same peak hours when people start and finish work, and one agreeable solution for this would be changing the current working schedule to a more flexible one.

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Some people believe that women are better leaders than men. To which extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people claim that women in leadership roles are more successful than men. I can not entirely agree with this because gender is not the main factor in evaluating a good chief, and it seems both sides have the same ability.

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Unemployment is a growing problem all over the world. What are the causes of this? What could be done to help tackle this issue?

Being jobless is becoming a burning issue in this modern era, where the masses have to face multifarious problems due to this negative trend. There are many reasons behind this given notion but I think the main causes are poverty and drug addiction and I will discuss both reasons in the upcoming paragraphs with relevant examples.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is irrefutable that there is a proliferation of advertisements these days. So, it is believed by some individuals that advertising campaigns are thriving in convincing the market to buy commodities, while there are others, including me, who opine that due to their prevalence, advertising can be ignored.

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Students are becoming more and more relyed on a computer devices

Nowadays students have started using computer devices in their childhood and making them completely dependent on them. Moreover relying on easily accessible sources of data may cause many serious problems like bad memory or concentration. Nevertheless, humanity's best minds are trying to resolve this issue at this given moment.

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Some employers are willing to give their workers a certain amount of unpaid sabbatical time, believing this benefits the individual and the organisation. Other employers see no merit in this arrangement and discourage it. Consider the possible arguments for and against unpaid sabbatical leave, and reach a viewpoint of your own.

Nowadays, a few commercial organisations are giving their workers paid holidays ,while on the other ,hand few owners refute this trend. This essay shall delve into both aspects , followed by my viewpoint.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age ( e.g 65 years ) for everybody , regardless of occupation is unfair . They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree?

It is widely acknowledged that with the development of technology and urbanization , the government is carrying out in changes all fields . Likewise, the retirement age should be determined depending on a person ʼs lifestyle and work , and others are against this idea. I strongly believe that this is the right decision and I will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.

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