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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many believe that due to advertisements, people are now more motivated to purchase what is not essential while others believe that advertisements have more advantages adding value to our existence by bringing useful items into our worlds. While I agree that people tend to buy non-essential things due to the intrusion of adverts, I believe that advertisements have helped to enlighten us about value-added products. This essay will discuss both views.

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Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child's education. Others believe that it is more important to focus on academics during school time. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

Some argued that sports lessons are crucial to children while others think it is better to learn and study other major subjects instead. Physical lesson focus on the workout but other major lessons improve our understanding way the real world work. This essay will discuss both opinions and give its own opinion.

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Being good at math depends more on natural ability than on the quality of teaching they receive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by few individuals that how good someone can be in mathematics, to a great extent depends upon the inherent calibre of the candidate ;whereas, instructing ,or monitoring they acquire from an instructor is not necessary. Although, my outlook varies from others' perspectives and personally disagree with the former opinion. Even though, the majority of folk's thought process is like that only.

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Is mental strength important for success or is it more important to be strong and fit for success in sport.? Discuss both views and give your opinion

Having good mental health is crucial in sports, while some people think it is more beneficial to have a strong body instead. Both of these are necessary for every sport. In this essay I discuss both mental and physical strength and give my own opinion.

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Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is undeniable that traffic and accommodation problems are increasing in metropolitan cities due to rapid urbanisation. It is fair to say, that the government must pay attention to these issues faced by the public by making policies to encourage some businesses to shift from cities to rural areas. In the following paragraphs, I will elucidate the advantages and disadvantages of the same.

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Some people think that government should establish free libraries in each town. Others,however believe that it is a waste of money since public can use the internet at home to obtain information.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, paper book reading facilities such as free libraries are less available since some people find them less appealing due to the huge resources available online. As a result, they feel like establishing free libraries is nothing but a waste of money. Perhaps I believe that no other feeling can be as same as reading paper books so there definitely should be more free sources of books to encourage readers to read books offline.

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Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

School plays a crucial role in the development of children. Therefore, It is believed by a section of society that children should join it at an early life, while others think that they should be with their parents till they turn six or seven . From my perspective, the earlier offspring goes to the academy, the better it is. The reasons behind the same will be elaborated on in the upcoming paragraphs with the support of relevant examples.

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Many people today find they have insufficient time to spend with their families, because of pressures of work. What problems does this create for individuals and their families? What solutions can you propose? Which would be the most effective solution, in your view?

Heavy work schedules and the shortage of family time issue is becoming a pervasive concern in many nations. This problem leads to numerous negative effects. This essay will discuss untoward consequences such as losing strong family bonds between family members and problems with children's education and offer the best solutions to tackle this difficult situation.

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Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication such as letters,emails, or telephone calls. How far you agree or disagree with this statement?

Direct connection is considered to be one of the best connecting ways compared to others methods ,like emails, letters or phone calls. Physical conversation between people seems to be more convenient than other virtual ways of communication such as calls or messages. This essay will argue why virtual communication is deemed to be more appropriate than physical meetings.

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Is mental strength important for success or is it more important to be strong and fit for success in sport.? Discuss both views and give your opinion

To be successful in life you need to maintain your mind healthy , It is also essential to make you effective in the games and physically fit. How energetic we are and how we work the whole day depends on how we think . In this essay, we will discuss both sides of how our head controls and help us , and to which extent this helps us in our daily routine.

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Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

It is certainly true that tourism generates huge sums of money and for many countries in the world, it is the main resource for the government budget. Local economies all around the world are very dependent on the influx of travellers every year, particularly with regard to local employment. However, there are environmental and social costs and other risks to tourism as major source of annual income. Personally, I believe that tourism has mainly a positive effect on local people, but there are some things that should be adjusted to minimize the damage to the environment.

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Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child's education. Others believe that it is more important to focus on academics during school time. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

Education plays an important role in our life. The great majority of people admit that physical education should be a part of our learning, some are averse to it because they think only academic classes are salient during school time. in this essay, we will discuss both views and delve into that why I think physical literacy should be a part of literacy.

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Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help others. Agree/disagree?

While it’s undeniable that being rich gives a person the opportunity to help other people who are in need, rich people do not particularly hold this mindset. In my opinion, too, it definitely enables them to help more but in reality, it’s not true.

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in recent years, many small local shops have closed because customer travels to large shopping centre and mall to do shopping. it is a positive or negative development

In this modern era, where everyone likes to explore something fresh, people usually for recreation purposes tend to go to shopping malls where they can do a bunch of stuff, like window shopping, watching a movie, and playing games. Because of this, many independent vendors or small shops which used to be a great hit in the olden days are now just a setting which is unpopular. I would give both positive and negative arguments for the same in the following essay.

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The use of mobile phone in public places is an antisocial as smoking . Smoking is banned in certain places , so mobile phones should be banned in same way . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In the modern-day world, the usage of mobile phones in public places is quite common, and most people think that this should be considered an antisocial activity like smoking. I completely agree with the statement. This essay will elucidate the effects of overusing cell phones.

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The news about violent crimes may frighten people or, on the contrary, encourage them to commit a crime. Therefore, some believe that these types of news should not be reported in newspapers or on TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With every passing year the cases are becoming more violent and unimaginable to comprehend. There are certain group that believe that horrible misdeed committed in the society should not be reported in the media as it might disturb mental peace of people and further believe it might act as a catalyst to commit a crime to experience it first hand, however I disagree that such acts should not be reported.

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It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Some individuals consider that it is essential to be adventurous in decision-making in matters that concern their private and career lives. In my opinion, I believe the benefits of taking risks which include another opportunity to achieve and explore more outweigh the drawbacks of not trying something different.

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Some experts suppose that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Few experts people think that when a nation is already wealthy so any other increase in the economy does not make the motherland happy. I disagree with the statement and I will clear this up in my upcoming essay.

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Nowadays it is more difficult for children to concentrate or pay attention in school. What could be the reasons for this?What solutions can you suggest?

The complication of children's concentrating or paying consideration to the academy which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this direction has sparked controversy over its potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate on both the positive & negative effects of this movement with some remedies to solve this complication thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what are the causes and what are the effects on both individuals and society as a whole.

With the development of countries, many old family structures have been changed. The citizens have a tendency to live by themselves or in a nuclear family. In this essay, I will discuss a number of reasons for this trend and its associated effects on both individuals and society

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