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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

With all the growth of the economy, the variety of products has become unbelievably wide. In addition to that, we see companies using specific marketing methods to make their outcomes stand out. In my opinion, there is the main reason behind this and I sincerely think that this way of promotion is beneficial for both, business owners and customers.

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Some people say that we do not need printed newspapers anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent years the digital newspaper has taken over the printed newspaper. While some believe that the latter newspaper is not required anymore, I argue against them and take side completely with the paper-based news than any other medium.

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“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating disease is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.

Based on the high costs that would be imposed on societies to heal the sicknesses that emerge frequently,some notions argue that allocating financial resources to prohibit the spread of illnesses is more affordable.However, in my point of view,it can be a revolutionary alternation in the medical realm owing to the factors that are uttered here.

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Many people spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

It is believed that most individuals have high expenditures as per their income source as a result these people don't have any saved money. The high inflation rate and the way of living are the main causes for no saving. As I think it leads to negative development since we just live in present without caring about the future.

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Over time, as children grow older, the relationship they have with their parents changes. In your opinion, what role should parents have in their adult children’s lives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The bond between a parent and a minor plays a pivotal role in everybody's lives. Many individuals believe that this relationship would influence a minor growth mentally and emotionally. This essay advocates that families should take the role of a friend ,not a parent.

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in some countries, older people who retire from work spend the money on themselves (e.g.holiday) rather than save money for their children. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, more and more people that reach their retirement age, spend all their savings on themselves, like planning to vacations. And they rarely save any money for their offspring. Personally, I feel that this is not a positive development, and I will explain why.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and workplace tidy with everything orgianised and in the correct place. what is your opinion about this?

There is no denying that it is important to remain clean and tidy with every item organized and allocated in the right place, whether in your home or workplace. Although some people feel that it is not necessary to maintain the surrounding environment clean because it wastes too much time to do that. Nevertheless, I strongly support the idea that it is vital to keep every item with clean and well management status.

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Online shopping is becoming increasingly popular in today's era. Most of the time, it is more advantageous, while sometimes it is not.

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Computers are being used more and more in education .Some people say that is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinions.

The computer is becoming more and more popular in modern life. There are some people who believe that these technological devices bring more benefits for youngsters, while others disagree and think it will lead to adverse consequences. In my opinion, I agree that an increase in technology is beneficial to scholars for the reasons below.

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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is obvious that a greater amount of money is spent on advertising campaigns, proving that it plays a vital role in business industries. One of the current strategies this industry creates is convincing people that their product is the latest hype among the others. This essay will analyze why they do this and explain why I believe it delivers adverse effects as well.

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In several countries, children are engaged in different kinds of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it a valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?

Childhood is a golden period that always cherishes the mood of an individual in the next phases of life by remembering that time. Due to some circumstances, a minority of children involved in different works by the enforcement of their parents and responsibilities overwhelm their happiness in such period of time.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Based on recent reports from the art and entertainment industries, it is apparent that crime-related books and TV shows are growing in popularity. There can be many explanations on why they are so popular, and I will also give my opinion regarding it in this essay.

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Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?

In the modern world television is an essential gadget. It is no more be considered as a luxury , but a necessity. The essay is intended to establish with examples, how television has revolutionised the world by becoming one of the most significant electronic devices, which helps the population to gain information across the globe and act as a companion

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects at university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? what are the effects on society?

There is a developing trend among students to refuse science-related subjects for their higher education . There are several reasons for this like , challenging and boring subject matures and unfortunately ,this can give rise to future problems like limited scientists and limited science-related research. In the following essay , this writer wishes to elaborate further on this matter.

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Computer are being used more and more in education .some people say that is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences discuss both side of this argument and then give your own opinions

The computer is becoming more and more popular in modern life. There are some people who believe that these technological devices bring more benefits for young people, while others disagree and think it will lead to adverse ramifications. In my opinion, I agree that an increase in technology is beneficial to scholars for the reasons below.

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Young people who commit serious crimes such as robbery or violent attacks should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extend do you agree or disagree

Some adopt a view that the youth should be responsible for their violent crimes as same as the grown-ups. In my perspective, I absolutely agree with this statement for some reasons.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? what other measures do you think might be effective?

In the contemporary epoch, traffic and pollution are increasing rapidly which is becoming a crucial issue for our society. It is reckoned that the rise in the price of petrol is the greatest way to resolve these issues such as traffic and pollution. However, I find it challenging to concur with this statement. This essay would attempt to explicate my point of view and other effective measures in the forthcoming paragraphs at its length.

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The spread of urban areas has led to deforestation and has caused many animal species to become endangered. Environmental groups are urging governments to protect these animals. What are the benefits of protecting animals? What can governments do to protect animals?

The increase in deforestation brings adverse impacts to the sustainability of wildlife. Many species of animals become endangered, this condition gained attention from environmentalists and urge the government to take action on it. This essay will explain the advantage of protecting animals and what kind of action which the government can take.

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Being celebrities such as famous sports person or celebrities bring problem as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems.

Becoming a celebrity is a dream for many youngsters today. It has been said that the popularity of celebrities, such as sports person or celebrities not only offers merits but also brings several demerits. I believe it provides issues and benefits equally, and the points supporting my view would be discussed in this essay.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

In today's world when people are becoming more adventurous, they like to visit places where weather conditions are challenging such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. Here, we are going to discuss both the advantages and the disadvantages of the same.

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