IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 138

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Subsidising Fruits and Vegetables vs. Taxing Unhealthy Foods

There is an ongoing debate about whether the government should subsidize fruits and vegetables, known for their health benefits, or impose taxes on unhealthy foods. In my opinion, a dual approach of subsidizing nutritious foods and taxing junk foods is necessary, as a single solution would not suffice in addressing the obesity epidemic.

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Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write at least 250 words.

It is believed by people that the most significant aspect of wealth is the ability to serve others. I totally agree with this statement and believe that opulent people can provide free education and job opportunities to others.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. While some people think that this is good for a country, others believe that salaries should be controlled by the government to limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

No one can deny that earning a decent salary is one of the most important motives to work efficiently. Some people believe that intelligent and highly talented individuals must earn high salaries, while I think the government should limit the money earned by these so that we all become equal in money and lifestyle.

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Working long hours causes a great deal of stress and can be very bad for the health. The government must find a way to reduce this type of stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Longer working phases lead people to struggle with depression as well as health problems. Although individuals could deal with these issues by approaching some ways, the main responsibility stays on the government's principles.

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Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solutions.

Lately, youngsters who commit criminalization have increased in big cities, moreover, the world. This essay will discuss more about this as well as the two main reasons why this could happen; careless and bad role model from their parents. Furthermore, solutions in the short term and long term are required to solve these problems.

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In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyles of children are different from those of the previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the contemporary world, the way children live and eat has totally changed. Some people consider this a problem that has a negative effect on children’s general health. I totally agree with this notion. While there are limited advantages in today's children's lifestyle, the drawbacks outweigh its benefits.

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Many young people say that mobile phones are the most important object that they own. Does the popularity of mobile phones among young people have more advantages or disadvantages?

Currently, electronic devices such as smartphones, computers, and tablets play a crucial role in our daily lives. A growing number of individuals consider phones to be the most significant gadget they own. In my view, this trend has more disadvantages than advantages for young people as excessive reliance on mobile phones is not a positive development.

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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

The biggest problem for the environment is the extinction of animals, many animals are endangered and are nearly extinct. This is a big problem for us because this has very negative consequences for the diversity of life on our planet. I think that humans need to be responsible towards the animals on earth and have to try to save them.

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There is a wealth of information on the Internet; however, some people suggest that it is not the best place to look for information. How far do you agree with this view?

The internet is one of the most important technological developments of the last years, and it has plenty of reliable and trustfully data. Although some individuals believe that it is not the best source of information, I completely disagree with that statement. Many important academic institutions have their studies and projects posted on the web. The best news journals show their carefully written reports to the public without any cost.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for every fast train between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, one of the most crucial topics is the transportation system because its appropriate development is required to guarantee the quality of life for humans. Some governments argue that betterments should be made in order to enhance their systems. Nevertheless, many others believe the entire system has to be rebuilt. I partially agree with both statements, and in this essay, I will explain my reasons in detail.

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Since not all children have a natural talent for language, not all of them should start learning a foreign language in primary school. Do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era, being bilingual and multi-lingual can be fruitful for youth. It is acceptable that not every single kid has a natural ability to speak more than one language,therefore the school authorities can add a foreign language as an extra subject for children.I totally agree with the above statement because this leads to open plethora of opportunities for students in future as well as they can engage themselves with current technology easily.

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skill and more creative than reading to what extent do you agree or disagree use reason and specific example for to explain your answer.

Nowadays,the stages of growth and development have a pivotal role in a kid's life.During each developmental milestone,they grow physically and mentally.By doing fascinating play with a baby can develop their ability,and they become more creative than learning books.I strongly agree with this statement.This essay will discuss the reasons for the agreement in detail ,along with a relevant conclusion.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience to support your arguments

In recent years, many studentd tend to countinue learning abroad rather than study in their home town.However, the studens in the past preffered to study in universities in their counry. In this essay I will spot the light on the advantages and disadvantages of this approach.

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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are equally responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays numerous children develop a lifestyle that is not healthy. Although I think that the teacher also has to encourage children to live healthier lives, I mostly believe that parents are more responsible in this regard.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had the main negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

Without a doubt, social media is a huge part of our lives. Several people claim that social media platforms such as Facebook affect both persons and the public adversely. From my point of view, I completely agree with the given statement for a number of plausible reasons. I think the most protruding ones are health problems and weakening social relationships.

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In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose art subjects (example literature), and boys tend to choose science subjects (example physics). Why do you think is so? Should this tendency be changed?

It is becoming a new trend in several societies, especially in schools, that male students prefer science subjects and female students prefer art subjects. There are causes of this issue and solutions that should be considered to tackle this problem, which I will elaborate on below.

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People who decide on a career path early in their lives and stick to it are often seen as more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who frequently change jobs. I partially agree with this viewpoint, as both career stability and diversity have their own sets of advantages.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Since time immemorial, interactions, either competitive or cooperative, between people in different areas of life have been an inevitable issue. However, whether competition in every part of life is beneficial is a debatable issue. Personally, I am of the opinion that being competitive in different spheres of life can bring about more advantages rather than being just cooperative.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary era, the number of people longing to learn about the historical background of the accommodation they wish to live in is rising. Given that this phenomenon stems from people wanting to ensure a reliable source of investment and safety, it can be pursued in several ways that this essay further elaborates on.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that competition in a variety of daily environments has a positive effect, while others think that instead of focusing on competition, we should concentrate more on cooperation. While I understand the advantages of competition, I believe that cooperation should be valued more.

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