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IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Countries, where there are laws which equally treat every person, are the most prosperous nations. It is often argued that community should be based on rules and it might not work if people were allowed to perform anything they like. I concur with the mentioned statement and in this essay, I will highlight the reasons along with examples followed by a lucid conclusion, Thereafter.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinions?

Some people believe that music is a worthwhile art which could congregate various nations and generations together. I totally agree with that statement and this essay will demonstrate how people around the globe generally would be more likely to share their emotions, cultural heritages and moral values with others. Moreover, it will explain that the younger and older generations may find common sense while listening to a song.

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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside? What problems does this cause? What can be done to solve this problem?

Megacities have become the destination of some young adults living in small towns, leaving behind them elderly people as the main population of the countryside. This essay will outline the problems of this trend as well as highlight the possible solution for them.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

With the development of the medical system, modern people can live longer and enjoy increasing life longevity. From my perspective, this trend has more benefits than drawbacks.

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Companies should provide sports facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree?

various researches have shown that physical activities are the secret to a healthy life. It is often argued that playing centres should be allocated by firms for locals. I fully concur with this elucidation, In this essay, I will highlight the reasons along with examples and provide a lucid conclusion, Thereafter.

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nowadays there are many people who have self employed than working in the office do you agree? what is the disadvantages? give the reason!

In this new world of Eras , many youngsters and graduate students prefer to be their own bosses rather than depend on others. In my view, I totally agree with this statement that self-employed is now becoming a trend day by day in the minds of individuals. However, on the other hand, there are some demerits which we will discuss further in the essay.

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Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while others argue that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

'No pain, no gain', a classic saying proved right in various fields, including the medical industry where it is a norm to sacrifice animals for the medicines' applicability. While many people support exhaustive animal experimentations, I embrace this notion that they are morally wrong, hence not the only way to secure safety for humanity.

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Bullying and treating friends badly in college, school and institute have been a controversial topic for the teachers for more than a decade. The reason could cause by several factors, however, it should be resolved properly, otherwise, it will lead the student who is bullied to a crisis situation. According to my experience, this issue should be cooperated to deal by teachers and guardians because the children should be looked after both in their own house and school.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views about whether to work directly after school or to have further study at the university for finding better job opportunities. In my opinion, I believe that both studying for a better degree and having more working experience are equally important.

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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advances in technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technology plays a vital role in the social community including national security. It is often said that in the present day, due to the help of technology the percentage of criminal cases is declining compared to the previous moments. In this essay, I will show off my points of view with relevant examples.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we do not longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

While many individuals believe that advertisements are extremely useful to persuade people for buying things, others suggest that they are not that efficient since there are a lot of paid ads these days. This essay will cover both opinions, but as far as I believe personalised promotional ads work very well for companies to increase customer purchase intent.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Opinions are divided on whether the maximum possible information- in scientific research, business and the academic world- is shared or not. In my opinion, although some of the information is extremely vital and needed to be protected to maintain confidentiality, a vast pool of knowledge should be shared to benefit humanity. I will discuss and analyse both of these points of view in detail in this essay.

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Fossil fuels like coal, gas and oil are the primary sources of energy for most countries. However, there are alternative sources like wind power and solar energy that have been encouraged for use by some countries. Is this positive or negative advancement?

With the rapid development of technology, the number of causes which provides us with energy is considerably increasing. Today, most developing countries prefer to utilize alternative vitality sources like solar strength, wind power and tidal power, discouraging the usage of primary sources such as coal, gas and oil. I am in general agreement with this advancement and support my viewpoint in detail.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In current times, owning a property is a dream for many. For some individuals from many nations, buying a residence is more crucial than renting it. In my, opinion this is a positive situation and will discuss possible reasons in the following essay.

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Some people say that television is a very useful tool when it comes to education. Others argue that television is a much overused ineffective teacher. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion as to the usefulness of television as an educational tool.

While it is believed that television is one useful and helpful way of education, others disagree and argue that it is a failed and non-effective method of teaching. In my view, I hold that TV is a great way of learning if it is wisely and correctly used.

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Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The true meaning of festivals, either religious or traditional, has been lost in contemporary society. However, the only purpose of these occasions for modern people is enjoyment. I completely agree with this opinion as the actual importance and rituals of these festivals are replaced with entertainment. I will discuss and support this argument in detail in this essay.

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Lettering in cities is an increasing problem which needs to be dealt with some people think that steeper fines is a best way to deal with this problem to what extent do you agree

To begin with, as we know well painting or lettering is the product of art, but, painting without permission can destroy people's assets and be illegal. A higher penalty can stop them from creating a dirty place, but, this statement did not solve the root cause of the problem, hence, I somewhat agree with those statements. The following reason will be outlined in the next paragraph, it needs coordination between the government and the majority.

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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

To feed the growing population in a country, the government should put forward the availability of edible insects as a food source. Many think that eating beetle is not a good option for health and also harvesting them will have a threat to the nature.

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Nowadays, in many countries chemicals are used to produce and preserve food. Are the advantages of this use overweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern world, it became common in a range of areas all over the world to use food additives for manufacturing and storing products. This essay will argue that the drawbacks of this practice outweigh the benefits. It will first demonstrate that chemical substances affect human physical and mental health, followed by the analysis of how the main advantages, namely, low expenses that are beneficial for business and open access to food, are not valid.

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Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that nowadays the majority of society does not interact with wild animals at all, so it is thought by some people that spending money to create preservation for them is unnecessary. In my opinion, humanity must save as many species as possible for future generations.

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