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IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The fact that the number of victims of gun shootings is rising day by day because of gun ownership is true. Even though some people claim the importance of guns in terms of recreation and self-defence, I totally disagree with this statement which will be enlightened in this essay.

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In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The fact that the number of victims of gun shootings is rising day by day because of gun ownership is true. Even though some people claim the importance of weapons in terms of recreation and self-defence, I totally disagree with this statement which will be enlightened in this essay.

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At present, the media affects people's lives significantly. What impact does this have on society. Is it a positive or negative development?

Undoubtedly, the life of people is being dramatically affected by the media, nowadays. It gives them a chance to get fame in society, and I believe it is a positive development as it could be a good source of earning.

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Some people think that because of email, social media and telephones, communication among people is less personal now than it used to be. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Communication between people has never been faster or easier than it is now, thanks to the development of the internet. Some people, however, claim that despite these advancements, interaction is more superficial, and lacks genuine interaction. While I agree that this is true to some extent, I feel that advanced modern tools like email, social media and mobiles create wider networks and greater intimacy.

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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes and suggest possible solutions?

In some businesses, employers often face serious concerns in new hires regarding lack of interpersonal skills, for example, cooperative skills. However, there are two potential causes for this and two possible solutions as well.

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Today there is increase in antisocial behaviour and lack of respect to others. what are the causes of this? What measures can be taken to reduce this problems?

These days, each society is engaged in misbehavioural and unrespectful attitudes. There is a large number of reasons that should be taken seriously; however, some causes such as unemployment as well as dysfunctional families will be discussed in this essay. Consequently, some possible solutions will be given.

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People say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

As a matter of fact that health-related problems are a vast concern in many societies and the investment of the government in sports facilities is believed to contribute significantly to the improvement. It is opposed by a part of the population because they believe that the strategy only slightly affects the health of whole residents and other measures should be taken. In my point of view, both opinions have pros and cons and the current authority should allocate a part of its budget for sports equipment.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this contemporary epoch, it is believed that instrumental plays are pivotal to bridging the gap between different nations. Personally, I believe that art has always played a critical role in mutual understanding between different traditions. Thus, this essay will be demonstrating the reasons behind that as well as my contention.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although some believe the most apparent aspect of environmental challenges is accessed mainly by specific natural creatures disappear, there are other factors from humans' actions: pollution by cars, and industrialized areas considered negatively unavoidable.

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Some people think that THE MAIN PURPOSE of SCHOOL is to turn children to good citizens and workers, rather than benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Based on the positive footprints that graduated folks can have on societies,some individuals believe that studying does not have any advantage for the person,who has pursued that.However,in my point of view,it similarly can have some affirmative impression on people's lives.Nevertheless,both sides are uttered here.

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Some people says that adverting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people thinks that advertising is so common that we no longer to pay attention to it. Discuss both sides of view and give your own opinion.

Nowadays most companies are advertising their products to attract the population who are interested to purchase new stuff. some population will be interested to buy and some nation public thinks it's so common we do not need to pay attention to it.in this essay, I will explain both views and give my opinion.

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e planet’s population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing a shortage of resources like water, food, and fuel. To what consequences may overpopulation lead? In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?

Nowadays, overpopulation is a big concern due to the lack of natural resources to support this huge number of people. In my opinion, this change puts a serious strain on the environment and would not be avoided unless taking effective actions in this regard.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, investment in essential sectors is so important for local authorities around the globe. Some people believe that wasting capital on crafts is not the right solution, while others claim that there are more vital projects to be required more financial aid from the local states. I agree with this view and some reasons will be given in the essay.

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The government should pay for the college fees for everyone who wants to study at the University. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

It has been a topic of discussion for a long, that whether the government should pay college fees for the students willing to pursue a University education. In my opinion, this practice shall not be followed as it might create more problems than benefits.

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Some people think that all University students should study whatever they like. Others belive that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss these both view and give your own opinion.

People have different views about what universities should investigate. While some folks think that undergraduate admission should pursue useful subjects, that are related to science and technology, I still believe that all should be permitted to consider anything as much as it does not deter society.

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In some countries, more and more adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

It is a common trend in some countries that an increasing number of adults continue living with their mom and dad even after obtaining a degree and starting their careers. This essay will discuss disadvantages such as dependent will and loss of private life, and the advantages of financial support and required assistance for parents.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Based on the differences that there are in approaches to life,some individuals are of the notion that alternations always is associated with positive experiences,whereas the opponents usually hesitate about changes.However, in my point of view,it completely depends on both surrounding circumstances and individuals' capabilities as well.If the required steps and their related results truly are considered,transmissions can be beneficial.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that increasing the number of sports facilities is the most effective way to improve public health. While I tend towards the viewpoint that proper health education is a better solution.

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Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions

Based on the released information,the rate of juveniles delinquency has skyrocketed in the majority of places around the globe.Therefore,not only are some of the probable radices behind it uttered here but also different remedial ideas are suggested to cope with the drawbacks.

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Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the modern busy life, there is a rapid increase in the number of sightseers visiting cultural and historical allures around the globe. While foreign foreigners should pay more entrance fees rather than local visitors in many countries. I do completely agree with this view because the local individuals pay taxes yearly to the local states, advertise those allures to guests and relatives and also it helps to appreciate their own historical heritage.

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