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IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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Task 2 In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In recent years, there is no doubt that the youth problem with seeing less news has become a serious and pressing issue. However, there are also ways to address this matter. In this essay, I will analyze the reasons caused by the realistic problems of young people and discuss the ways to reduce some concerns.

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Animals are in danger of extinction. Some people say that we should protect only those animals which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays the number of endangered species has reached an alarming stage. While some people think humans should only protect animals which are useful to us, I completely disagree with this idea and I believe we should try to protect all species, even if there are those who think they are not useful. This essay will present arguments to support my opinion.

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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?

Many countries present-day supported with terrible worries about their literacy. There seem to be main causes such as quitting school and cutting edge technologies, whereas illiteracy has effects on economics role of country and human's degradation.

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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Numerous characters deem the social media is threatening to our conventional person-to-person interaction, and the human communication might become extinct eventually; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm the idea that state of the art is advantageous. In this essay, I will discuss, firstly, the merit of social networks that made our daily lives more effortless, and secondly, negative aspects of this phenomenon such as increasing number of grammatical errors, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

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Today more countries import food different parts of the world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Some people argue that taking daily goods from foreign nations such as China or Australia is dangerous for public wealth as well as wasting money, and assume this cash flow must get directed to growing vegetables and livestock. In contrast, others consider this trend allows us to buy cheaper foods.

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Cheaper food is now available because of greater use of fertilizers and improved machinery. This improved production, however, can be harmful to individuals and the community. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Discuss, including examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some people adhere to the view that fertilizers and innovative machinery are the primary factors in producing more affordable food products. Additionally, they think that through the use of fertilizers, agricultural crops can be provided with enormous essential nutrients like nitrogen. This is to make the crops grow bigger, faster and more productive. However, I completely disagree with the abovementioned idea, because such a method can be a threat to the health and safety of humanity. The reason behind this is the fact that vast use of fertilizers can cause the release of some harmful greenhouse gases into the atmosphere, and the eutrophication of waterways.

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governments should spent money on railways rather than roads. to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

The improvement in the infrastructure of roads and railways is the demand of time. Spending funds to improve the railways is thought by many far more essential than to improve the roads. Although allocating more funds for the railways is required, I would argue that roads need more improvement and this fact could not be denied.

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Although it is widely recognized that cars damage the environment, their manufacture and use continue to increase. Why is this the case? How could this increase be controlled?

Across the globe, the automobile industry is booming, despite the fact that many people believe cars are damaging the environment. The following essay will discuss why this is occurring and what can be done to control the situation.

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Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity . some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Artists are the sources to bring creative thinking in a society. People think that artists should have full freedom to express their viewpoints. But some people have an objection that it should in a limit. In my view, the artists should have full freedom but the contents should be approved by an authority so that it will not cause any problems in a nation.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Insomnia and fewer hours of sleep have been a frequent complaint of many people nowadays. There are many causes for this issue, including the increased level of stress and lack of healthy habits in life. It is already known that problems on the sleep pattern leading to fewer hours of sleep are associated with many health conditions. Therefore, this issue should be presented to healthcare workers and solutions must be implemented to avoid many problems.

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Some people believe that having a conversation on a mobile phone in a public or crowded place should be banned. Others feel that we should be able to talk wherever we like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a contentious argument over whether individuals should be prohibited talking on the phone in bustling places or not. This essay is going to examine both points of views and then explain why my own's believe that people have to avoid to do it in public places.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that losing rare species of plants and animals is the biggest challenge that we face today, while others think that other problems regarding the environment need more attention. In my opinion, all environmental difficulties should be discussed and taken care of. This essay will discuss both views before reaching a conclusion.

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An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in schools, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In recent years, many schools, provide students with electronics, replacing traditional printed textbooks, exams and assignments. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school-leavers in most countries. How far do you agree with this assessment? What other challenges face young people today?

Being unemployed even after completing higher education stands as a major challenging issue in front of youth in quite a lot of nations. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement. Besides, there exist some other problems such as stress and anxiety management faced by younger generation mow-a-days. These challenges will be further discussed in the essay below.

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In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security the marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree?

In recent years, the tendency of getting married has been following a gradual long-term decrease with women. Some people state that the main reason for this movement is that women became more stable in regard to their financial status, and they do not need support which marriage can bring. I absolutely disagree with this statement and this essay will explain why women are putting off marriage.

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‘Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity.’ How far do you share this viewpoint?

It appears that people ought to give some part of their money for the sake of charity help. I accept that people may donate to charity, in spite of this I agree that not everybody should do it as it depends on their willingness and earnings.

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Communication is less between family members of late. Do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, the generation gap has been the talking point with the increase in technology. While some people believe the interaction gap between families is on an increasing trend lately while others disagree and believe it is the same since the beginning. In my opinion, I believe declining levels of communication is an alarming situation.

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Some people believe that it would be better for large companies and factories to move to rural areas outside of large urban centres. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

The industrialization has been on the rise with increasing advancements in technology in the modern era. A major dilemma for these companies is to decide their location of operation which can be rural as well as urban. In my opinion, relocation to rural areas is a far better approach and in the following essay, we will discuss both advantages as well as disadvantages.

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Many people believe that in order to have clean and tidy streets in their neighborhood, this should be the residents' responsibility, while others think that it should be the governments' duty. what is your opinion?

It is true that if people want to maintain clearer nature in their streets, they will probably need the residential support, while a large number of people insist that the obligation of undertaking the condition wholly belongs to the government. In my personal opinion, I think that residential authorities should monitor streets as much as the government do.

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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is believed that the past cannot teach us anything new. I do not agree with the given statement. I think history is one of the most valuable sources of information to evaluate human beings.

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