IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 65

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. How far do you agree or disagree?

Sporting competitions of all kinds have always been considered as healthy rivalry, yet some people feel that this is not something that should be included in educational programmes. Personally, I disagree with this idea since it is important for overall children’s development.

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Some people say that self employment is better than a job in a country or an institution. Discuss both modes of work and give your opinion.

Owing to the financial need, every individual pursues their own working style; either job in the multinational company or start their business. However, a section of society vehemently deems that starting their own business is a good option rather than working under a supervisor. In my opinion, both modes of employment are best provided that individual must ensure their circumstances.

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The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers. What do you think about this option.

Learning English is prevalent these days. Many people are finding an efficient means to improve their English skills and they think that studying with a native teacher could help them learn more efficiently. In my opinion, I agree with this point of view. This essay will discuss the main reasons why it is beneficial for English learners to study with native teachers.

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In some places there are many social problems involving teenagers. Some people say this is because parents spend much of their time at work and not at home. Do you agree or disagree?

Teenagers are involved in several social problems in certain nations. Some people believe that parents not spending enough time with their children because of work is the main reason. I agree with this statement, as youngsters are not properly trained at home and negative characters from the media can exacerbate problems.

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Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society but nobody has agreed on what an ideal society would look like. What do you think is the most important element needed to make a society perfect? How can the ideal society be achieved?

From ancient times, people have imagined inhabiting in a perfect society, but the perfect definition of society has not been fixed yet. I think the most important element required in creating a society is values given to the individuals by their ancestors. These elements can be achieved with the sacraments inhibited to the people since their birth.

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Many people believe that companies and individuals should pay to clean up the environment in proportion to the amount of pollution they have produced. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that companies and individuals should take responsibilities of pollution they produced by paying tax. However, I disagree with the opinion because that can not prevent the deterioration of the environment.

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Some people think that resources should be spent on protecting wild animals, while others think those would be better used for the human population. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that there is no need to protect wild animals but spent more money on people's lives-enhancement. While a great number of people contradict the previous statement, I support the idea that we should concern about wild animals as well.

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Economic development always harms the environment. It is impossible for a country to both develop the economy and protect the environment at the same time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Constructive evolution of the country may have a detrimental impact on the ecosystem. It is argued that the growth of society and securing the earth is not possible simultaneously. I strongly disagree with this notion as with the technology in place, we can achieve both paradigms together plus the oath taken by world powers to protect an environment is vital in this area.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

A very important issue today is the fast-growing usage of automobiles. Over the last three decades,people have begun to purchase so many cars and this is why some people are of the opinion that the world is now 'one big traffic jam'. In this essay, I am going to elaborate on the given topic, show my approval of the statement and provide some solutions to the problem.

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children should always follow their parents' advice. To what extend do you agree?

It is often proposed that teenagers should follow the thoughts and suggestions of the genitors. I completely agree with this statement due to two main reasons. Firstly, parents can nurture positive qualities in youngsters. Secondly, they can play a crucial role in deciding a golden career for their wards. This essay will intend to strengthen my belief in detail with relevant examples.

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some people prefer to shop for food in supermarket , other people prefer to do food shopping online ? DIscuss both views and give your opinion

Food is one of the basic necessity to live a healthy life and to survive. Some individuals like to shop food from big stores and while others choose online food options. According to me, Supermarkets have more variety than online food websites. In this essay, I would shed light on both sides.

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In many large cities, people waste hours of their time every day because of traffic congestion on the roads. What are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In this modernized era, the increment in the number of vehicles is the major concern across urban areas. In each passing day, people waste a lot of time while waiting in traffic jams. The major cause of this phenomenon is the preference of private vehicles to the public, and the possible solution to this problem is the improvement in transportation services by authorities.

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People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traditional and contemporary style buildings both are equally vital for society. Whereas old ones are a symbol of culture and heritage, modern ones are a sign of development. Although few people reckon that new buildings should be build after demolishing the old ones, I radically disagree with this notion.

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People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are thoughts that replacing old-time constructions with newly-built ones are needed. From my perspective, I agree with the statement because this activity brings more benefits to our human societies.

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Nowadays some buildings such as offices and school have open space design instead of separate rooms . Why it is so ?Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is true that modern constructions like offices or educational institutions are designed in an extraordinary way than they were in the past. The original meaning of separate rooms has been no longer forgotten in nowadays architecture. In my opinion, this trend is positive enough, because the open areas make cooperative connections between workers and children much more firm and direct.

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Many people living in cities these days do not get enough physical exercise. What are the causes of this? What are some possible solutions?

It is evident that city dwellers are more likely to suffer from chronic and non-communicable diseases due to the absence of physical activity. The majority of people who are living in the cities have rarely seen working out their bodies. This essay will discuss the reasons and solutions to this issue.

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Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Combustible is considered as the main reason for environmental issues in society for a portion of individuals who believe that the solution to cope with the problem is raising it's. In this essay, I will examine some facts that convince me of why this is not the major solution and then some examples will be exposed.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

In the modern world, one of the most significant stages in a child’s growth is indisputably the development conscience, which is associated with the ability to discriminate right and wrong manners. This skill might be enhanced with experiences and having good role models and I believe that punishment has a negative effect on this term. Therefore, I have to disagree almost entirely with the given statement.

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Q: Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Even though the latest technology like the internet really made our lives easier, there is enough chance of cybercrime involved in it when we submit our personal data to get registered in a site to access a program. A lot of individuals are ready to provide their personal data to enjoy the benefits of an application. This essay would discuss the pros and cons related to it.

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Nowadays many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think this is beneficial for the children of these families, while others think children will find it difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Significant numbers of people move to other countries because of exciting job opportunities. It is often argued that it is a positive development for children, who belong to these families, whilst others disagree and think kids will suffer from many typeof hurdles. In my opinion, I agree that children will get a plethora of benefits from this trend. The essay will further discuss both facets with appropriate examples reaches a logical conclusion.

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