IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 65

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Technology has radically transformed communication between people. People’s bonds have been affected by technology in various ways, including their social and working life. Therefore, it has a positive impact because it creates strong ties between individuals and saves time and cost.

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An increasing number of children have become hooked on fast food and aerated drinks that do not provide much nutrition. This poor diet has led to a rise in obesity among children. What are the problems that are associated with obesity in children and what steps could be taken to prevent it?

Health issues particularly related to obesity caused by the large consumption of fast food and soft drinks is rapidly accelerating in the modern era and children are the main victims of it. This essay will firstly, examine various negative aspects of this trend and secondly, some of the feasible solutions will be discussed.

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Housing and accommodation has become a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the main factors that have contributed to this problem? What can be done to help reduce the number of homeless people?

In the contemporary world, it requires a lot of effort to search for a residence. Obtaining a shelter to live is a huge concern in most of the nations. This essay would discuss the eminent factors that caused this problem and also try to give solutions that can be used for decreasing the shelterless individuals.

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Global warming is one of the biggedt threat to our environment. What cause global warming? What solutions are there to solve this problem.

In this ever-changing world, the problems are shifting from typical to dangerous. One of them from which the globe is suffering the most is global warming. The principal cause behind the phenomenon is the extended usage of fossil fuels and contamination produced by the industries; however, the same can be curbed by using CNG and waste-filtering technology in the factories.

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Some people believe that a good teamwork makes companies successful. Others say that it is more important for companies to have good leaders. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

High-quality collaboration is thought to be crucial for the success of a company by some, while other people consider that effective leadership is the main reason for it. In my opinion, I believe that enterprises can thrive impressively by having a great headman to arrange their goals.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is the social responsibility of every business to work towards the improvement of quality of life of its workforce and society. Earning profits should not be the only motive of any organization. I completely agree with the given statement.

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Housing and accommodation has become a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the main factors that have contributed to this problem? What can be done to help reduce the number of homeless people?

In the contemporary world, it requires a lot of effort to search for a residence.Obtaining a shelter to live is a huge concern in most of the nations.This essay would discuss the eminent factors that caused this problem and also try to give solutions that can be used for decreasing the shelterless individuals.

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There are many benefits for young people who travel to other countries. Do you agree or disagree?

According to latest trends, many young individuals migrate to foreign countries for higher studies, settlement, or even they travel for the purpose of enjoyment. I completely agree with the statement as it has many advantages which help them in many ways.

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There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Immigration is nowadays becoming a noticeable issue for many countries as many people wish to live overseas. Thus, it is suggested that they should be permitted to move independently from nations to nations whether they desire. From my perspective, I utterly disagree with that suggestion because I believe its disadvantages weigh more than its advantages.

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`Nowadays, a lot of information about medical conditions and illnesses is freely available on the internet. Is this a good thing or a bad thing for most people? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In the modern era, The huge amount of sources regarding health issues are posted by people on many websites. It is believed by some that It has positive impacts on users life, while others have contradicted view. I partly agree with this statement. In this essay, I would shed light on both sides before a reasonable conclusion can drown.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?

Museums have always been an ocean of wisdom related to history and heritage.There is an argument that most museums are imposing an entryway fare,whereas ,some museums are welcoming the visitors without any fee. I will discuss both the pros and cons related to the given argument and convey my opinion.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. How far do you agree or disagree?

Sporting competitions of all kinds have always been considered as healthy rivalry, yet some people feel that this is not something that should be included in educational programmes. Personally, I disagree with this idea since it is important for overall children’s development.

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Some people say that self employment is better than a job in a country or an institution. Discuss both modes of work and give your opinion.

Owing to the financial need, every individual pursues their own working style; either job in the multinational company or start their business. However, a section of society vehemently deems that starting their own business is a good option rather than working under a supervisor. In my opinion, both modes of employment are best provided that individual must ensure their circumstances.

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The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers. What do you think about this option.

Learning English is prevalent these days. Many people are finding an efficient means to improve their English skills and they think that studying with a native teacher could help them learn more efficiently. In my opinion, I agree with this point of view. This essay will discuss the main reasons why it is beneficial for English learners to study with native teachers.

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In some places there are many social problems involving teenagers. Some people say this is because parents spend much of their time at work and not at home. Do you agree or disagree?

Teenagers are involved in several social problems in certain nations. Some people believe that parents not spending enough time with their children because of work is the main reason. I agree with this statement, as youngsters are not properly trained at home and negative characters from the media can exacerbate problems.

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Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society but nobody has agreed on what an ideal society would look like. What do you think is the most important element needed to make a society perfect? How can the ideal society be achieved?

From ancient times, people have imagined inhabiting in a perfect society, but the perfect definition of society has not been fixed yet. I think the most important element required in creating a society is values given to the individuals by their ancestors. These elements can be achieved with the sacraments inhibited to the people since their birth.

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Many people believe that companies and individuals should pay to clean up the environment in proportion to the amount of pollution they have produced. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that companies and individuals should take responsibilities of pollution they produced by paying tax. However, I disagree with the opinion because that can not prevent the deterioration of the environment.

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Some people think that resources should be spent on protecting wild animals, while others think those would be better used for the human population. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that there is no need to protect wild animals but spent more money on people's lives-enhancement. While a great number of people contradict the previous statement, I support the idea that we should concern about wild animals as well.

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Economic development always harms the environment. It is impossible for a country to both develop the economy and protect the environment at the same time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Constructive evolution of the country may have a detrimental impact on the ecosystem. It is argued that the growth of society and securing the earth is not possible simultaneously. I strongly disagree with this notion as with the technology in place, we can achieve both paradigms together plus the oath taken by world powers to protect an environment is vital in this area.

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