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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is said that some companies ask for personal details of candidates when they apply for a position. Some people believe that this information is private and not relevant to job while others and I agree with this view. The question is whether personal information is necessary for recruitment or not. This essay will discuss some arguments around this matter and present my stand.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible ina scientific research, bussiness and the acedemic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Dicuss both the views and give your own opinion?

In the world of technology, all the information and data are accessible and all the scientists can read and use these researches.Therefore, there is a contentious argument over whether to print articles on various subjects or not ,in this essay I am going to talk about this issue and give my own opinion.

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Space travel has been made possible for some time and some people believe that space tourism could be developed in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In modern society, space travel has been made possible for some time and some believe that it could be developed in the future. It is clear that although there are both positive and negative points, the public needs to be aware of the negative aspect of damaging nature.

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In theie advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In this new generation, a creative advert is not a new thing. Instead, how to advertise is important. With the concurrent technology, cyber can be accessed by everyone. And the internet is accompanied by kaleidoscopic advertisings. Nevertheless, more and more advertisements are claimed that theirs are the first invention of the world. There are truly several benefits behind it. However, there are also some drawbacks. This essay is going to discuss both consequences and my own opinions.

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According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities world- wide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction. How far do you agree with this opinion?

In this fast-moving world, the Internet plays a vital role in everyone’s life. It is common nowadays, a lot of time has been used on the internet, and thus, few amounts of time have been spent with real people. Some segments of society reckon that not only the internet but also there are other decisive ways to do communication. Although there are arguments on both sides, I agree that detrimental effect has been observed on society by increasing usage of the internet. Even these beliefs will be discussed in support of my personal stance in the following paragraphs.

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Many people put their personal information online (address, telephone number,...) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

People are increasingly sharing their personal information on the internet these days. Although this technique may improve user experience, I believe that it is a harmful trend since individuals would be more exposed to cyber-crime.

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Many young people choose to take a year out between finishing school and starting university in order to gain work experience or to travel. The experience of non-academic life this offers benefits the individual when they return to education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications is a much-debated issue and employers' opinions, regarding this, vary. I agree with the opinion that the social skills of candidates are more vital than their academic results, and in this essay, I will explain the reason for this belief.

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Trade and travel would be a lot easier with a single, global currency that we all use. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Would a single currency cause any problems?

Insurmountable financial problems that we have been trying to cope with, have made us think about going towards a unit currency worldwide by which we can bypass the obstacles currently existing in front of us in trading and commerce. However, I would say this will not be a good idea as it will worsen the situation by provoking more economic turbulence. Both sides of the debate as well as some problems expected to arise by this decision are explained as follows.

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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicines. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Health is the wealth of every human being whereby deprive any health issues is more important among people as well as government. Although, medical treatment cannot guarantee complete recovery so, imparting good choice of life is an essential motto of good community programs. In this essay, I will explain my complete acceptance of government funding on health development.

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Students should choose a university major that prepares them for high-paying careers To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Choosing a university major is one of the most daunting decisions we make in our adult lives as it determines our future and must be made very carefully. Some believe that students should choose a major that will provide financial rewards later. Personally, I disagree and feel that the choice should be based on passion rather than income.

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Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working. Does this trend have more advantages or disadvantages? What do you think about work-life balance?

These days travelling to work is becoming very hectic for people. While some people are of the view that going to distant places for seeking employment opportunities or spending more time working has many advantages, others are of the view that it has several drawbacks too. In this essay, I will be discussing the disadvantages of moving far for endeavor and will give my inputs on work-life balance.

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Some people think university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefits students themselves not society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Many individuals consider that the students pursuing professional courses should contribute completely to their expenditures related to their education because it is only advantageous for themselves individually but not for their native state or country. I strongly disagree with this statement because education is necessary not only for the student’s uplift but also for the uplift to the nation and its culture.

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parents of obesed children should be punished for making them fat. Do you agree or disagree

It is argued that parents of overweight scion should be penalized for making them too heavy. I would disagree with this statement because young people often eat unhealthy food outside of the home and obesity can be caused by genetics.

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Some people think books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree?

Technology has made incredible advancements in the past decade. The Internet has taken the world by storm. Today everyone has access to information through mobile phones and computers. I do believe that these gadgets are taking place of the books. However, I also agree that books still hold their special place.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subject like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people state that, nowadays, Science and Technology are the most important subjects in a school, whereas another group of people think that History should be the most important subject. The essay will discuss both the views. Personally, I agree more with those who cheer history becuase History have always taught people humanity.

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Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some individuals believe that male and female children should go to different schools. However, the others reckon that there are positive aspects for both sex children to go to the same school. Although I partly agree with the former idea, the benefits from enrolling the mixed schools outweigh those from entering separate schools.

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While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant example.

the character of individuals is the most important aspect for hiring,which is more worth than both their experiences or degrees that they used to acquire in the prospect of some people,whereas to me all of them are indispensable and none of them has the capability to compensate the shortage of the others.

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Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational degrees. Therefore, the best way to reduce the crime rate is to educate criminals while they are still in prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

based on the surveys,while the rate of delinquency among educated people have been ignorable in comparison with others that did not study,some individuals are of the notion of instructing the prisoners in advance to the end of their sentences,although to me its positive footprints conquer,its devastating potential should be considered as well.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Artificial intelligence (AI) has developed throw years. Auto driving vehicles are known as an area in which AI plays a crucial role. These developments will cause all vehicles to become driverless in the future. It seems several advantages involve in the phenomenon, which is discussed in this essay.

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Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A child development is of paramount importance these days. Children should be taught in different ways. While computer games may have some benefits for children, I believe that outdoor activities can have an important role to develop a baby's experts.

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