Samples Band 6.5

IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

6.5

band

Government money should be used to support children in school for sports rather than to support professional sports and arts that perform for the general public. To what extent do you agree?

It is believed by some that the government funds should be utilized to develop an interest in the sports among the students going to schools and colleges, whereas others think that it should be spent on preserving the cultural art and professional sports. However in my own perspective, the budget should be used with a plan to develop sport as a hobby for youngsters, and to generate the revenue from the art and professional sports events.

6.5

band

More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that raising the price of fast foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Overweight and Obesity are considered as a major public health concern in the growing world of globalization. It is believed by some people that this problem can be tackled by increasing the price of the fast foods. However in my own perspective, I disagree with this notion and suggest that various other reforms should be launched into making a healthy society.

6.5

band

With the coming of new mass communication media like television and internet, newspaper is losing its importance. Do you agree with this or not?

The face of communication changed with the advent of the journal as it became very easy to communicate with people at large and spread any message. As technology advanced, mass media like TV set and internet came offering more services. It was believed that the weekly will soon be disregarded as an outdated form of media. However, did not happen and does not seem a reality in the near future.

6.5

band

With the coming of new mass communication media like television and internet, newspaper is losing its importance. Do you agree with this or not?

The face of communication changed with the advent of the magazine as it became very easy to communicate with people at large and spread any message. As technology advanced, mass media like TV set and Internet came offering more services. It was believed that journal will soon be disregarded as an outdated scheme of media. However, did not happen and does not seem a reality in the near future.

6.5

band

Some people say that watching TV programs and movies related to crime are popular. What do you think it's popular and how does it affect to society?

A series of telecast or films that associated with illegality has always been one of the welcomed topics. Here, I would like to explore the reason why publics are intrigued by it and its possible impacts to the entire society will also be discussed and elaborated in this essay.

6.5

band

Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Some people believe that this is an illness and should be treated medically. Others feel that this is only a result of unhealthy habits and it is sport that must help. Discuss both point of view and give your own opinion.

In today’s world childhood obesity is one of the most pressing problems. There are many reasons for this issue and many effects have been associated with it. However, I believe that several steps could be followed to improve this situation.

6.5

band

traffic and housing problems in major cities can be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many big cities, traffic and housing issues always raise some discussion nowadays. Some people believe that moving large companies and their employees to the countryside is an effective solution to these problems. I disagree with this idea.

6.5

band

Some people believe that the whole family bringing up children is better than only parents. What is your opinion?

It is believed by the segment of the masses that children who are brought up in joint families are better than the one in the nuclear families. In the joint family culture, children get the warmth and affection of their grandparents and along with that there is always someone to give attention to them. However, in elementary family setup, the children are deprived of the grandparent’s love also, they feel lonely at times and the habit of sharing is also not inculcated in them. Hence, I agree with the given stance that children should be brought up in a combined family.

6.5

band

Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefit do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?

Over the last few decades, the world has seen that the development of tourism industry. I think it brings a lot of benefits to both individuals and our society. This essay will firstly some advantages of this issue.

6.5

band

Some people think modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Technology is advancing day by day. Every aspect of our lives is related to technology. However, there are advantages and disadvantages when it comes to technology.

6.5

band

Children are generally more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus, it is better to learn languages in childhood. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is generally claimed that the best moment to learn a foreign language successfully is during the childhood and I completely agree.

6.5

band

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, hotly debated topic by many is alterations in climate and their impact on our planet.However, some argue that such changes are indispensable and humans have to cope with it by adopting various strategies.While some believe that avoidance is better than cure.In my view, finding new techniques to counter adverse climate conditions far outweigh the avoidance due to unstoppable factors.

6.5

band

Many families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while other considers it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and your opinion.

The trend of migrating to the more developed nations is on the rise, where the question on whether it is beneficial or hard for the children has always been argued. There are valid explanations for either side, however in my own perspective, I agree with the notion of its positive impact on the youngsters.

6.5

band

Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a negative or a positive development?

The development of modern technology and digitization has increased its accessibility at an international level due to its affordable prices. This has raised the likelihood of working and studying from home for adults and children respectively. In my own perspective, I disagree with this notion as it doesn’t promote the overall personality development of an individual.

6.5

band

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to some people, voluntary work is needed to be included with the major courses in the secondary school curriculum. In my opinion, though it will benefit the students by extending their practical knowledge, it should be added as an optional subject otherwise this might hamper studies for several students.

6.5

band

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to some people, voluntary work is needed to be included with the major courses in the secondary school curriculum. Although I believe, it will benefit the students by extending their practical knowledge, that should be added as an optional subject as this might hamper studies for a number of students.

6.5

band

While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

Politicians of all countries strive to reduce the unemployment rate in their country. Therefore solving this problem some experts of recruitment agencies believe that employers should consider the personal qualities of new employees more valuable than their preceding education and experience. I completely agree with the idea since, despite the professionalism of the unemployed, new employee will have to work in the all-matched teams, and also this practice to allow graduates lacking seniority to reach your true potential.

6.5

band

Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Getting a job as a fresh graduate may sometimes be difficult. While some people think that an academy diploma is the key to landing their dream career, others insist on getting real-world experience instead. This essay will explain both positions and prove that a degree is a crucial aspect in the process of getting a good job.

6.5

band

It is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing or medical research. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Needless to say, Every lives matter and everyone have the same soul and body which feels pain and hunger. The Animals are an important part of nature's life cycle and food supply chain so i would partially agree with the statement. According to my opinion, I would like to say animal usage to some extent is quintessential in some aspects, but for the fashion and showing richness it is dissatisfactory.

6.5

band

Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

It is believed that having a freedom to choose which subjects to pursue and gain knowledge in, is important for a student. These people argue that subjects like Mathematics and Philosophy which are not easily understood should be made optional. I moderately agree with the view that certain subjects be made optional due to several reasons that I will discuss in greater details in my essay.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.