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IELTS Writing Samples Task 2
IELTS Writing Samples Band 1

IELTS Writing Samples Band 1

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Argument: Every year several languages die out. This is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Thousands of languages in this world relatively disappear every year, while some people say that it is good situation that fewer languages mean less harder to communicate in the world. in my perspective, people should reserve the disappearing languages to keep the diversity and prevent cultural loss.
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Today more and more tourist are visiting places were conditions are difficult, such as Sahara Desert or Antarctica. What are advantages and disadvantages of it

Nowadays lots of tourists come from many countries in the world for doing traveling. They traveling to Asia, Europe, America, Austria, Africa also Antartica.
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In recent years, many countries have become extremely concerned about the increase in crimes committed by young people. Tough measures and strict punishments are necessary to stop youths from re-offending. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, crimes committed by youngs worry many countries therefore the governments have suggested strict measures to stop it. It is one of the working method, which helps to decide this problem even it requires cost. But there are many different soft ways, such as creating different clubs for youth, which will be effective and more useful.
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My goal: Band 6.5-7.0 In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

I am going to have a short trip to Singapore, ona of the most beautiful and attractive European countries and it continues at least 5 days. While I am in Singapore, I want to rent a flat with a balcony.
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Environmental problems are too great to be managed by individuals. Real change can only be made at the government level. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent decades, environmental degradation has been an pressing issue worldwide. Some people argue that only governments can tackle this issue since individuals are not capable enough to handle it. Even though authorities and other decision-making instituions can set up measures in a timely manner, I disagree with this viewpoint because everyone suppose to work together to protect the environment.
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Some people say that the government should spend more money taking care of elderly people while others think that government spending should be spent more on the education of young people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, Some pupil argues that public authories need to spend more funds on older generation. However, opponents are saying they should spend on youngsters education, and i will discuss both viewpoints with my personel opinion in further paragraphs.
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Some people think that several short holidays from school are better, while others think one long summer holiday for the year is better for children. Discuss both views and include your own opinion and relevant examples from your experience.

It is beleived by some folks that schools should be off for short period of time during summer times while others think long time staying home in summers is refresing for children. Both views will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this modern era everyone wants to become rich person in their life. Nowadays, folks are judging by their income, fashions and according to their fashion status because as per few people traditional value , old cultures , believes are not essentional anymore but on vey view points is contradictory of this essay, I will discuss both of both opinions in the forthcoming paragraphs.
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Many people think hosting international sporting events brings a lot of benefits to a country, while others believe that it has more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own idea

Tourism is consider to be esstainal for economical support in any counrty, beside financial blueprints be assistant for all inhabitants in that nation. Therefore, Hostig worldwide events such as olympic nationals sports, FIFA world cup, and basket ball champions league are main events that happen rarely, once in period of four years. Enormity of individauls believe that if being country host for this global events, they will achive a loads of advantags for their nation. In contrast, other think this action could harmful, by letting enternational tourists in. From my point of veiw, I roubstly believe that statement is benefical.
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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

In this present world, school eduction are complicated. however, it is general information which are useful to people. Some people including me, support spending enough time to learn academic lesson are beneficial while others are argue it.
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Today many children and teenagers are overweight and unhealthy. Give reasons to explain why many young people are obese and give some sllutions to fix the problem

In this present world, many young people are facing obesity. Because of in many cities haven't built enough fitness places and the lack of time, there are few solutions which I will discuss now.
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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss bot these views and give your opinion.

In morrdan life the peopal are changeing, his mined to the bater, or comfart lives doing the same thing bater, Also, the yeang gays are doing good thing.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

In the present world, everyone has the freedom to do what they want. It is crystal clear that those who do not have interference in their work have successful results. People often argue that pupils should be granted the choice to choose subjects according to their interests. In my opinion, I completely agree with this statement, as I think one's preferred major leads a child toward becoming a successful person, than those forced to do so.
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Most people believe money is a very important consideration when chosing a job as it can help you get a better lifestyle; however, there are some believe it is more important to have a job you enjoy and that this, and not money, will lead to greater happiness and a more balanced personal life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The majority of world think that the money is first important thing while they chosing a job to improve the way of their life, and there are some people think that the first choice is what you love in this job to hit two birds in one stone while you workin beacuse you like what you and you will be happy and also earning salary for it. actually, I agree with the people they believe that the happiness is the first choice to take a job because when you satisfied with what you do you will be do somthing great in your place of work.
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Some people believe that watching TV is bad for children, while others claim it has positive effects for children as they grow up. Discuss both views and give your opinion

in recent years, the effects of watching TV on children have sparked considerable debate due to the diverse perspectives. On the one hand, the positive effects of watching TV are widely supported, while, on the other hand, the negative impacts have gained significant attention. I believe watching TV influence children’s development negatively. This essay will elaborate on both sides of argument, comparing and contrasting their respective positions
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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the min legal age for driving a car or motorbike.To what extent do you agree/disagree

Some people believe that raising the minimum legal driving age is the best way to improve road safety.
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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowsday, it is often argued that employee should have more leisure time on weekend and short period on work. As far as i am concerned, I strongly agree with this opinion and think work-life balance is much more efficency than long-period work , which will reveal in the following paragraph.
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TEAM SPORTS HELP SCHOOL STUDENTS TO LEARN MORE THAN USUAL GAMES. WHAT LESSONS WOULD THEY LEARN BY PLAYING TEAM SPORTS? HOW WOULD THESE LESSONS BE BENEFICIAL FOR STUDENTS IN THEIR FUTURE?

There is no denying the fact that team sport are on of the significant things for countries, many people tend to compared usual sport sould students learn more because team sport are highly beneficial for students. In this essay I will analysis this question and express my own opinion in the end.
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The qualities and skills that people require to be successful in today’s world cannot be learned at university or at other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are some people who have an opinion that the skills are necessary these days, you will get them from experience rather than university. I believe that is true. Overall, the Academic classes rely on theory not practical skills.
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Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?

Many school had a comfortable clothes for study ,while in some universities are very serious and rulies in their uniforms and pupils follow the very strict rules made by universities. While there are certain drawbacks ,they are outweighed by the benefits .
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