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IELTS Writing Samples Task 2
IELTS Writing Samples Band 1

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Some people think the only purpose of prison is to punish crime. Others think it has other functions. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.

Crime is Crime either it is on large scale or small. A number of individuals believe that the only motive of prison is to scalped an offense. While, the left meditate it has different funtions. In this essay I will discuss both the views and sharing my opinion in future paragraphs.
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In many countries, there is shortage of housing due to growing population. Some people argue that new towns should be built in the country side, others argue for the regeneration of cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of building new towns in the country?

As the number of resident have increased at unprecedented rate, states should bulid new construction for those who are in need. Some people think the new places for living ough to constrcut while others say the commities should be recreate again. This essay will examine the merites and downsides of this trend.
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In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities whether they only know a few people in their area. Advantages and disadvantages of living in small communities?

In the modern era, most of the people are living in cities, but in the past wasn't like that. In fact, we are living in the period of time, where people moving in these cities. Living in large cities not always give the opportunuty to met other people. On the other hand, small villages gives this oppurtunity, especcially the neighbours. In this essay, I would discuss advantages and disadvantages of living in small communities and I would give my opinion to this discussion.
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Many people today are choosing to live and work in another country after graduating from University in their home country. why is this ?do the advantages is turned outweight the disadvantages.

In recent years, the topic of live and work another country has become increasingly important the field of many people.
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Some people think that it's necessary to teach foreign language for children at young ages. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Many people think that children must learn foreign language in small age. I also think it is good idea some reason.
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Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Nowadays same people don't know their neighbors in the city. In this kind of situation, it distances people from each other. That's why people talk with more people.
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A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoid stresses. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience?

There is no doubt that the most healthy person that someone has a good healthy. In my opinion, I strongly believe that the exercise improve our health and decress the stressess and avoid the sicks
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Caring for children is very important for our society. Therefore all mothers and fathers should take a child care training course. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is always arguement between some people think parents should take a child care training course and many people think parents should not take a child care training course. In my opinion, I agree with mothers and fathers should take a child care training course due to children is the most important for society. In this essay, I will discuss my opinion with addition examples.
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1.Some people say that too much time and resources are spent on the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that many individuals believe that wast of time and money to protecting wild animals. While it is a commonly held believe that important to protect unique types of animals. it is also an arugment opposes that. In my opinion, I consider that is crusal for improve our world.
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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it diffucult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiniess?

Happinines plays great role in human living and lifestile. That is important for people to understand happiniess level. Everyone should define the factors that make them happy. Below I would state to explain how to define factors that essential make in individuals happy.
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#Tast 2.(Agree essay ) Memorizing facts is the most important way to succeed in education to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

A Significant number of individuals believe that memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in for education. Im in complete agreement with this viewpoint because of the facts that to save time and easily read.
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Some people think it is the responsibility for government to ensure the people have healthy lifestyle. Other think people should have a free for their own lifestyle decision. Discusse both view and give your opinion.

There is a lot of people think that is the responsibility for government to ensure the people have healthy lifestyle. Other think people should have a free for their own lifestyle.
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You live in the university decisions and you will face a problem with a high level of noise from a new campus restaurant that is open to midnight.‌‌

I am writing complain letter .University residence. That plese has one problem for me. I don't sleep every midnight from noise. This is having a bad effect on me. In my opinion this situation is feeling also other people . Thus in the evning we don't feel well . We should be slepp enogh for our halth . The University next to has campus restaurant which is open until midnight.
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Men and women can never share the same responsibilities at home and in everyday life. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

I completely disagree, as a wife or a husband for example there is a lot of a diffrenet responsibilties as like as taking care of they're children, Usually the wife effect more with raising children because in the meanwhile their fhather is busy working to earn money. But there is exceptions ofcourse, A few families they tend to have both working mother and father in my opinion I think it's a very negative thing for thier kids.
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Although for most people it takes a long time to become successful, for some, it happens at a very young age. Are the disadvantages of being a young celebrity greater than the advantages.

In my opinon i think that being a celebrity at a young age it's a disadvantage, Because it can effect neagatively on young people. Hwoever sometimes it can be an advantage with an adult watching them and takeing care of them, so its a disadvantage thing unless there is someone older than them taking care of them and making sure that they're okay and protect them from cyberbulling and neagative unnecessary comments. so in the end it depends on the kid him self if he can handel all that negative energy. For example there is a lot of celebrity that got very famouse when they were children and when they got older a lot of them happened to suffer from depresision because they didn't had the support an the care they needed from there friends, Falmilies and there environment.
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Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of it on the environment and on people who lost their jobs because of it. These days Internet shopping is increasing getting popular. Discuss the impact on climate and on the individual who lost their employment?

It is clearly recently most of the shops open their services online rather than offline, It has some problem with environment and good benefits on other way today will discuss the impact on the environment and the future of employments.
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. Do you agree or disagree with this idea?

I complitily do agree, it's a really big problem because it sometimes can be hard for someone from another country that doesn't speak the language to adapt the situation, however i see that it a diiferent situation from onr to another, a few poeple can get along with speaking another language easily and some of them can't. to be ohnest I disagree in one situation if the person was a child he can easily learn and get along with others very quickly. so at the end my opinion is it can cause social and practical problems at the beginning but with time they will get used to it and it won't be a problem at all especially if they are young.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of mone. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

On one hand, if you get job but not your dream job you must to try and give your self chance in the begening. These will give you good experience and learn a lot of things such as, what you are literally passions in it.
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Some people believe that the government should financially support retired people. Others feel that those who have retired should pay to support themselves. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some that it is the responsibility of high authorities that pay some amount of money to elder people after getting their retirement ,while others concern that retired people need to support themselves rather than to get help from government. This essay shed light on the the both points and I personally follow the former notion.
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Buying things on the internet, such as groceries, books and air tickets is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping this way outweigh the disadvantages.

The internet is becoming very popular among the generation to purchase things like home stuff, reading materials, and an aeroplan tickets. It is a very convienence method to accompish our needs and overcome shopping stress. There are multifarious prons comparitebly cons while shopping this way. I am going to discuss briefly in upcoming paragraphs.
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