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It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaur, dodo…) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

natural process from day to day have an impact for our live, especially animals. unfortunately, preventing the extinct millions of years ago. I totally agree, in this essay I will give an explaination.
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In some countries, some people get extremely high income and it is believed that this will be of great good to the country while others are of the believe that government should limit the amount of income earned in a country. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In the modern, employee want get dramatically high salary that impact to the country.whereas Others think that government should control the total of salary earned in a country. This essay will explain both views and will provide my opinion as well in upcoming paragraphs.
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in many countries, number of older people are increase. some people says that this will cause more problems to that countries. others say that older people can play a role in society. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays the world population are increasing every second although in many countries is not. Some countries has old people are much more than young people. Actually, old people population looks better than young people however it is not.
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Some people think that having a set retirement age (eg. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree ? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some people think that having a set retirement age (eg. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age.
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Some People believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortge of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Someone considering to accept a bad situation is the best, because they cannot change the objective conditions. They believe that people can develop the qualities such as emotional stability, resilience. Some people argue that trying to struggle with the situation is better because the challengs of the situation are likely to creat negative emotion and impact on mental health. Not mostly people can accept the situation they don't like and force to do something, instead, it will present a worse outcomes under the situation. Therefore, I think it is better to try and improve the situation.
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Increasing travels between countries enable people to learn about different cultures, or to increase tension between people from different countries? discuss both views.

People have different views about the increasing number of international travel. From my perspective, there will be a mutual effect between going through sorts of cultures and increasing burden in other countries.
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teh process of water production in the factory diagram task 1

The diagram illustrates the process of producing carbonated drinks. Overall, the entire process consists of five stages starting with water cleaning, before ending with packaging and shipping it to the supermarket.
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some people believe that children should learn how to cook and prepare food in their lessons. what is your opinion about that.

Cooking and preparing classes are the elementary and essential skills that everyone must have. Nowadays, various people believe that youngsters should study cuisine in their school time. So, I agree with the fact that children should have cookery skills, which is the one of soft skills that might be their future career.
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Many people nowadays decide not to work for a large company but to become self-employed. What problems might this decision cause? What can they do to solve these problems?

Nowadays several people prefer self empolyment rather than working in larger organisations. In this essay I will discuss some problems and solution regarding this matter.
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The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

The recent decades show how globalization transforms the younger generation's behaviour, from the way they speak and how the way they act. Some communities who are in previous generation worry that this change will harm the society and they believe that people should just stick with the current norm. This thinking is actually helpfull as it stands with several reasons.
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Some people believe that education and healthcare should be free of charge and funded by the government. Others think that it should be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In contemporary society, schooling and health maintenance play vital roles in daily life of the citizens. While some claim that these two elements should not be charged on the inhabitants and funded by the authorises, others are of the opinion that the citizens should pay for these services as it is a part of their responsibility in contributing to the development of the country. Personally, I do agree with the latter as I believe the fees and the funds be taken by government will be used for supporting other several aspects of life and those that benefit for both their citizens and their country. This essay will examine both views to portrays a reasonable conclusion for my opinion.
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Scientists use living animal to carry out research. Some people think it is interesting, while some other people think it is cruel. What is your opinion?

scientists use animals to carry out research and to some people it is interesting and to some it is not. in this essay i will list out the reasons why i feel it is ok to use living animal in research purpose. this is because new medicine or technology need to be tested first and
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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only large companies and goverments can make a difference. What extent do you agree or disagree.

Most people think that individuals can do nothing to keeping the environment. While only large companies and goverments can make difference. I am completely disagree with this statement. I would to like explain why individuals can to improve the environment olso play a crucial role in
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International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the enviroment. Do the disadvantages of International tourism outweight the advantages?

While several international tourist locations have enormous development in infrastrecture and ecomomic, it is often argued that it is detrimental to the local inhabitants and environment. I believe that global tourism development has more advantages comparing to the diadvantages which I will explain in this essay.
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The governments should give each citizen a basic income so that they have enough money to live on, even if they are unemployed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?c

An absolute consensus can hardly be reached whether the government provide relief moneyfor each people. As far as i am concern, i partly agree with that.
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Write about the following topic: Some people think that it's a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it's important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While some people believe that socialise with colleages in out of working hours is important, others argue that working life completely different from the private life. I support the former view which I will explain in this essay.
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Developed countries have created many environment problems in the world , particularly in their contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem? What can be done to reduce the danger of global warming?

A number of developed nations are created multitudes of environmental issues globally especially global warming. There are multi reasons of this and the upcoming essays will purpose solution of this problem.
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Many countries spend large amounts of money on world sporting events such as the Olympic Games and football World Cup. Instead these monies can be spent on encouraging young children to take up sports at a young age. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the present world,number of nations host different types of global sport which which cost a high amount of money.Some think that country has to support children first to be attractive to sport
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The nuclear family is well adapted to moving due to its size. Do you think children benefit in any way from moving? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvanta

In recent years, because of its size the immediate family should be moving around. As such, there are benefits and drawbacks to their children to switch place often. I believe, there are numerous benefits to their children. They can learn to adapt quickly to new environment and build relations with numerous people from different background. In this essay, I will examine all the relevant reasons based on factual premises
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Many people think that painting and music do not directly improve the quality of people. Therefore, government should not spend too much money on artistic projects. Do you agree or disagree?

In the contamporary era like today, entertaiment become the main source to keep people up on their daily busy days. In fact, painting and music become two out of many art sectors which get liked by many people globally. Thus, government should put an action to support the existance of those two key points. Therefore, this essay will explain the reasons why government's support is crucial for both the artists and the people that enjoy the painting and the music.
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